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Jane kiss aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai;epi-pg 27 (Page 28)

Aenna IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Wooow...mind blowing. ...
Manvi...was soo bold man..she was not nervous at all.
Nd virat awww he was soo cute..
Lol d mandap scene...superbbb...

pink1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
nice update mandap since was funny
she is in bindass attitude and he
nervous all the time
anu0555 Senior Member

Joined: 21 June 2013
Posts: 330

Posted: 28 July 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
it was really funny..when virat was chewing his nails...lolx..!!
i was burst out laughing..!!!.. hahaha...n it was r0mantic too..!!
n finally virat realize his l0ve f0r manvi..dats really great..!! i loved it 2 the c0re 0f my heart..!!! n dat pandit ran funny..n
mandap r0mance was als0 r0cking n sh0cking f0r guests n 0ther
family members..! n their expressi0n make me laugh, when virman was about t0 kiss..n hats 0ff t0 the b0ldness of manvi..!! i really really l0ved,
liked n enjoyed it t0 the c0re..u written very very very well..!! it was paisa wasool update..n d0 update very soon..!! w8ng f0r next part..!! eagerly n desperately..!!! n thnkzz alot for PM...! love u lara..<3 <3

Edited by anu0555 - 28 July 2013 at 8:01am
-LumosMaxima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged

Lara this is amazing Big smile .. Hilarious shaadi LOLLOL.. Virman were about to kiss in the mandap!!! ShockedLOL   Loved Vadhera family's reaction on it TongueTongue.. That Panditji was so funny LOL.. Dadaji and his gun LOLLOL.. Unique shaadi.. Dulha was sulking and dulhan was holding his hand ROFL.. SR was dhamakedaar.. Nervous Virat, bold and bindaas Manvi, Vadheras were peeping into their room and Shlok under their bed ROFL ROFL.. Loved it Heart.. Mind blowing update Big smile.. Keep writing more.. Take care Smile 

nrithyao Goldie

Joined: 28 April 2012
Posts: 1948

Posted: 28 July 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
epilogue was amazing
loved maanvi a lot
she is so brave
loved how virat was bing nervous in the mandap

kulsum_virman IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6451

Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
OMG this was crazily hilarious update yaaa...ROFLROFL
instead of the dulhan here the dulha bechara is feeling shy and nervous and specially nervous about the suhagraat jst cant stop laughing on that ROFLROFL and manvi holding his hand beneath her dupatta and virat ki toh band hi bajh rahi thi hai mannu to real sherni aur besharam bhi hai aur virat bechara haye kinna cute lag raha tha LOLLOLLOL
and mandap mein kiss hawww ShockedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed and the pandit and all audience ek dam shock mein ROFLROFL and manvi also said ke we will continue that later WinkLOLLOL
and virat ne realise kar hi liya that he loves her Big smileand jo darwaza khula aur sab uske upar and shlok bed ke neeche se ROFLand finally lights off manvi full on besharam haan ...LOLLOL
awesome update lara my stomach hurts laughing laughing its just sooo hilarious LOLLOLLOL
awesome one...fab work by you ...will miss this one ..Smile
richa002 Senior Member

Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 560

Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Woow.. Wat an epilogue...
They were going to kiss in mandap
Vadheras reaction were so hillarious...
Virat was so much nervous...
Loved it
harininaidu IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3230

Posted: 28 July 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
loved it awesome

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