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Jane kiss aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai;epi-pg 27 (Page 23)

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilaonmoon

Originally posted by Ankita1997

it was just amazing Big smile 
i loved it very much Heart 
manvi was dreamily smiling at him Wink 
and then the jump from the window Big smile 
and manvi over virat Wink leaning on him Wink
update asap Big smile 
it was awesome Smile 
Thanks akkuu... Big smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page....
Love you for loving the updt...Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page....
hehe Smile akku that a cute name for me thanku Heart
love u too Heart for loving me Wink 

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by kinz

This was seriously amazing mind blowing ROFL
Viraat kina inocent haina and manvi ufff thank u for pm
Love it
<font color="#990066">Thanks yaara... SmileSmile...<div></div>Yeah... innocent viratka innocence Solid.B kei baad will go in a vacation...LOL</font>




So are you going to cont with soild balatkar??

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
OK now thats a super dooper amazing update Big smile *claps for you*
love it to bits Heart
it was awesome beyond limits girl! Wink and why it wouldnt be even after all the hot scenes written by you Wink Wink Wink
OMG they kissed infront of the public with all the cameras on them *blushes* Tongue
Virat too couldnt control himself and responded back to the kiss Wink
that dining table scene was superb! Big smile
the family members were also grinning with the news previously known to them Big smile and his brother in the teasing mode on Tongue and then dadaji said him of his decision of Virat marrying to Manvi wohoo!! Heart
manvi's message and the confession it was just bang on! Big smile Big smile Big smile and Viren has also informed about Virat's past..
And then Virat's thought of Manvi and being alone with her in a room after their marriage and the last line "SOLID BALATKAR" was the most dhamakedar and best ever ending of this story Wink Wink Heart ^____^
too big cmnt phew! Tongue but cant control myself from writing all this LOL
love ya Heart muahh.. :* :*
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
hahaha ROFL , this update was hilarious, I am going to miss how much this story has made me laugh.  Beechara Virat, Manvi is a true Sherni in this story.  You had me laughing so hard at the end, thanks for the PM Smile

Edited by nimi00 - 17 July 2013 at 3:19pm
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Mind-blowing update...
Their kiss wz really hawt...n manvi took the lead...a true sherni indeed...LOL
Virman r getting married...luvd her message..."See you soon... manvi chowdhuri is coming..."
virat beta...tu to gaya kaam se...ROFL
But story seems s bit incomplete widout the "solid balatkar" night part...WinkLOL
so expecting an epilogue sooonBig smile...
Well...the story wz really interesting n hilarious...thanx a loot for the pm!!!Smile



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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 10:42am | IP Logged
ahan it was superb nd hilarious u are such a comedian yaar. So after watching there hot nd passionate scene dj decided to get them merried nt bad Embarrassed
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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
nice ending
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harininaidu

superb plz cont
Hey thanks...Smile...
Sorry wont cont it any further but will try to post an epilogue...

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