Jane kiss aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai;epi-pg 27 - Page 20

Originally posted by: richa002

Very nice ending...
Poor virat scared of manvi...
Nd that ' solid balatkar'thing was craxking...
Manvi is capable of this...
It was amazing

AM so happy that you liked it and I hope that you will like the epilogue also... 😊...

Originally posted by: anu0555

gr8 yrr !! awsm !!

<3d it t0 da c0re !!!

Thanks for pm..! 

''S0LID BALATKAR'' s00 hilari0uss n fnny  R0FL 

kiss was s0 0n fire !! 

cute upd8 !! 

cntnue s00n !!!

Thanks a lot buddy... 😃...

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

wowww this was amazing update ...
the kiss that was hott and the best part was that manvi was dominating in it
hahaha peoples reaction on watching tgat adult scene was hilarious and how they threw water to get rid of the fire in these two humans
and solid balatkar was just soo hilarious imagining virat's expression on this thought bechare virat ki toh solid bajegi

Oye thanks rei... 😃...

Will post the epilogue to let you guys give a sneak peak to solid b.     😳

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

OK now thats a super dooper amazing update *claps for you*
love it to bits
it was awesome beyond limits girl! and why it wouldnt be even after all the hot scenes written by you
OMG they kissed infront of the public with all the cameras on them *blushes*
Virat too couldnt control himself and responded back to the kiss
that dining table scene was superb!
the family members were also grinning with the news previously known to them and his brother in the teasing mode on and then dadaji said him of his decision of Virat marrying to Manvi wohoo!!
manvi's message and the confession it was just bang on! and Viren has also informed about Virat's past..
And then Virat's thought of Manvi and being alone with her in a room after their marriage and the last line "SOLID BALATKAR" was the most dhamakedar and best ever ending of this story ^____^
too big cmnt phew! but cant control myself from writing all this
love ya muahh.. :* :*

Oye akku... thanks for the long comment ... 😃...

I am so elated kei I am thinking to post the epilogue soon and also an idea of a new os

just popped up in my mind...😉...

Muahh to u too... 😊...

When I get elatet my mind becomes crazier yaar... so am coming soon...

Originally posted by: nimi00

hahaha  , this update was hilarious, I am going to miss how much this story has made me laugh.  Beechara Virat, Manvi is a true Sherni in this story.  You had me laughing so hard at the end, thanks for the PM 

No worries... I wont let you miss it... 😊... 😉...

Originally posted by: alicemath

Mind-blowing update...

Their kiss wz really hawt...n manvi took the lead...a true sherni indeed...

Virman r getting married...luvd her message..."See you soon... manvi chowdhuri is coming..."

virat beta...tu to gaya kaam se...

But story seems s bit incomplete widout the "solid balatkar" night part...

so expecting an epilogue sooon...

Well...the story wz really interesting n hilarious...thanx a loot for the pm!!!

Ohhh thanks...😃...

Incomplete... !!! Koi baat nahi, jaldhi complete kar dengei...😉

Originally posted by: nimi00

hahaha  , this update was hilarious, I am going to miss how much this story has made me laugh.  Beechara Virat, Manvi is a true Sherni in this story.  You had me laughing so hard at the end, thanks for the PM 

Thanks yaar... 😊...

Dont worry, I wont let you miss this story... 😉

ROFL...AWWWSUM...UPDATE
BUT Y R U ENDING IT YAR GVBIT 2-3 PARTS ATLEAST
UPDATE ASAP PLZZ

Wow nyc update... bt m also expecting 2-3 more updates...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Thanks a lot buddy... 😃...