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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
awesome one...

the birthday was rebirth of rey

his pov  witten so well 

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Di, It was superb. I loved it!!
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
It was damn hot di
N the bst part was that u wrote it from rey POV
But at starting felt sad for taani
But now taarey r together
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Amazing Os dii
Just loved it
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged
wow wow wow di
awesome 
the way u described the feelings
and the forced words that came out of rey's mouth not rey's heart
was prominent


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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
debu it was amazing yaar ClapClapClap...luvd it to d core ...Heart

Edited by tareyfan - 25 June 2013 at 4:53am
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiha_taarey

me 1st even before ur pm & scrap
i m on cloud9 nw all because of u & nithi di!!!!!!! u guyz made my dares sooo beautiful , romantic & hot tht i m feeling proud of myself ki maine tum dono ko dares diya hai... huh aise mat dekh yaar maine itni achi dares di hai to kuch credits to mai lungi hi na...

nw coming on 2 dis

Te Amo :TR Rain Romance

hayeee!!!!!!! name se hi mai adhi ghayel ho gayeee...

[for the age group 15+ , slightly matured one]
  he he he chinta mat kar mai 18+ hu...
starting ki 1st para par k mujhe laga  tu kahi THLH ki update galti se os me to nehi post kardi...LOLLOLLOL

She was Taani, my sweetest and most beautiful wife, I loved her so very much so that I couldn't think about a moment without her.
above lyn park laga nehi nehi ye mera dare diya hua os hi hai bt den

If you thought that I was going to tell something like this, then you were totally wrong. No, she was my wife for sure, but I didn't even notice her properly since we got married.
i was lyk Shocked kamini tu kabhi nehi sudhar sakti na...Angry har bar tujhe bass meri taani ko hi suffer karwani hai!!!!!!
Bt after tht the way u potrayed rey's pov & the transaction of his own feelings was just beyond on awsome

I am sorry, I actually forgot that you are alone in the entire house. But, I guess Bhoot would not eat you up...ROFLROFLROFL

After sometime when my intelligence, my grey matter could able to control my anger, I could realize my fault... i just luvd dis lyn  i dont know why bt i luvd it...
finally my most awaited parts came...
i knw u knw mai kis parts ki bat kar rahi hu so quote nehi karungi varna meri comment teri os se bhi jada lambu ho jayegi...LOLLOLLOL
bt i just wanted 2 say the way u write the song sequence it was 100 tyms better & hot than my expectation!!!!! it was just perfect ...
In 1 wrd


waise u hav 2 give some credits 2 me also 4 the song selection ...Wink

Haan choo toh liya hai ye jism tune Rooh bhi chum le
Alfaaz bhige bhige kyun hai mere Haan yun choor hoke majboor hoke Katra katra kahen
Ehsaas bhige bhige kyun hain mere Do bekhabar bhige badan
Ho besabar bhige badan Le rahe raat bhar angdaiyaan
as because of dis lyrics tujhe end ki scene describe karne ki jarurat hi nehi pari...LOL

At last just wanted 2 say
as a frnd as well as a writter...
Thank u sooo much 4 dis wonderfull os...



ha ha theek hai, tu PM se pehle  par lie hai, toh itni khush bhi maat ho, itna ghumegi nah sir ghum jayegaWinkLOL
tu 18+ hai ye fir 81 years ki hai??? sachhi bol toh zaraROFLROFL

hahahahaha mujhe bhi laga tha k main THLH hi fir se likh rahi hooEmbarrassedLOL
kya kare, Taani hai hi aisi..she is like our Dharitri mataTongue..she can bear every painLOLLOL
kya karu aadat se majboorWink

ha ha mujhe nahi pata hoga toh kisko hoga k tu kaunsa part ke liye wait kar rahi thi..my naughty mistiWinkBlushing..I wanted to write something more, but bad luck..this OS already turned into history replyEmbarrassedLOL
ha ha malum hai, the song selection and your situation was awesome..ClapClap
itna lambu comment k liyeHugHug
aur Rasogolla loves her MistiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Hello Debu di Big smile
At last I am here *took a long time though*
The os was fabulous * I am 15+ LOL *
At first I thought maybe it will take a long time for Rey to realize his love but he already loved just that he didn't realise it .
Taani here was the old Taani always obidient and respectful.
Loved it di Heart
And Thank you for being patient with me.
Love Ya Heart

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