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VIRMAN:SS HATE AND LOVE STORY Chapter 13 and Epilogue pg 64,21/9 (Page 60)

niki795 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
awesome superb update
loved it
loved this virat very much
he made manvi move on with his unconditional love
the conversation between virat and manvi is superb
finally manvi cried and let out every thing after 2and half years
muskan , rahul and arman are such a great friends
totally loved the update
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Kicha111 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Mind blowing update...finally virat's love won...only hs live can remove d imprints frm hr past...jeevi feels nice d way viren supported hr...loved virman conversation...
d way by whch each of thm s making virat's love made hr to cry aftr 2nd half yrs...Trios r happy 4 manvi bcz she hs atlast bcm cont soon dear...nd thnx 4 d pm...

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anvyagnihotri Senior Member

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 12:29am | IP Logged
awsm suppeerrr dupperr  hitt  update ...loved it...

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Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Thank You Sweet and Beautiful Lovelies... For Ur comments or replies, it is unexpected seriously as I didn't asked U but still I got ur feedback... Thank you so much for each ane every comments.

I thought that chapter was necessary or not, even I made justice with it or not... Tons of things coming in my mind... But after getting ur comments now I'm sure it won't be that bad at least... Am not good but presents it in nice way... So thanx 4 sharing ur views... Love U All and Be blessed

Love Sidrah Big smile

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roshreb IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
awesome..i was scared as what will be manvi's reaction towards virat..but finally she opened up to him..armaan was right..its only virat who can heal & fix her..only his unconditional will be able to soothe her... now that virman are together can't wait for their next step for revenge...waiting for next & plz update shadow of yours ..

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nidakh Groupbie

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged

read all the stories ...mind blowing Smile 

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prathe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 6:05am | IP Logged
part 12c...
i personally loved..its quiet logicall.dear...i didnt feel anythg wrng but i loved it and u r thoughtClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapHugHugHugHug
am bad at expressing myself hope u understood my pov...LOLSmile

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Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged

Hello beautiful lovelies... How r u all? Hope u all are great... I present one more part of this chapter...
Happy Reading Lovelies

Note: Before Starting this part I want to share something which is important for me to what I believe and what is in my mind while writing this chapter.

Believe, trust are base of every relation if it was broken once than no one can believe or trust to any one, it's real u all agree with me...
And if there is lackness of trust or believe in any relation than it couldn't be survive ever... And if people tries to live with broken relationship or without trust or believe, it will be only forceful and give pain coz whatever happen in past we can't forget ever, it imprinted in once mind but love and care heal the wound and blur the past images but can't ever remove...
I know I bother u with my note this tym but seriously wanna share with out before u read next part.

Hate And Love Story

12 C

Three of them standing there shatter... Shattered to face the reality of a girl to whom people say fragile, bearded which no man in worlds bear it.

Viren composed herself and said what u decides Virat... And Virat looked into his eyes and give answer.

Meri kismat ke har ek panne pe
Mere jeete ji, baad marne ke
Mere har ek kal har ek lamhe mein
Tu likh de mera use
Har kahaani me saare kisson me
Dil ki duniya ke sachche rishton mein
Zindagani ke saare hisson mein
Tu likh de mera use
Aye Khuda, aye Khuda, jab bana uska hi bana
Aye Khuda, aye Khuda, jab bana uska hi bana

on every page of my fate,
during my life, after my death,
in all my future, in all my moments,
you write her to be mine..
in all stories and fables,
in the true relations of the heart's world,
in all parts of life,
you write her to be mine..
O God, whenever you make me, make me hers..

Virat leave the place and start walking on empty road... It's not that I don't accept her Now but how could a guy do something cheap like that... Oh God! Why I wouldn't be there at that time... He fell on road and shouts in a loud voice to explicit his frustration or anger towards Ranveer. Ranveer u has to pay for ur deed... I promise Manvi I promise... I can't erase the pain u go through but my love or care blur that horrified past... He is crying to know about her dreadful past... He is shouting, screaming on empty road...

Jeevika with a thud fell on the ground and cover her face with her palm and crying... How could I and What I do now... My fault is become sin which can't be forgivable... How could believe on my eyes over my friendship...I had to Believed or trust on my friends... I hate myself... I was worst friend in this world... She said in loud voice

Viren comes near to her... I told u Jeevika first clear it ur doubt don't come directly to conclusion but u didn't listen to me.. He takes her to his arm in a consoling hug...
 "I lost everything Viren which I gain in few days after many years... I lost my friend" she cried

We can talk to them, I know they can't forgive us but we can help them only to decrease the sin we made...

"U r not at fault" she said

"U r my wife and partners of life right so...whatever u did or me, responsible for each other deed" he said

At Muskaan And Rahul Apartment

They reached Manvi didn't show any emotion... And Muskaan was crying for her best, she had an emotion left but today the remaining emotion is also dead... Both Rahul and Muskaan worried for her... Slowly Manvi open the car door and come out from car, so that Rahul & Muskaan and saw her again a lifeless soul.

Manvi without expression said to Rahul and Musky Go and take rest... Tomorrow will be a big day for us and I'm also tired want to have some rest.

Rahul eyes beams with tears and Muskaan is already sobbing to look at her. "She wants to stop her but Rahul hold her hand and nodded in No."

Manvi sits beside her bed on floor and remind the words of Jeevika which still echoing in her ears...

Rahul & Musky Room 

They can't believe Jeevika said something like that...but one more thing they are shocked was Virat and Manvi are married.

"Virat married to her", "When and How" and "I don't think Manvi knows about it" Musky said

"We don't have answer only Virat know, I also don't think Manvi knows" he said

Musky, Manvi ain't not well but we had to complete the rest work... "Hey where is Armaan" Rahul said again.

"Wait I'll call him, Musky said"

She called him before she said anything, he tells her everything... He said he'll soon and complete their task first.

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