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JodhaAkbar Os Najre Karam Updated Part 2 pg 7 (Page 9)

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
God, this is so good. Heart

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashpat

i love it- i can't belive this is ur first attempt. you are such a great writer and ur use of words are just unbelievaly amazing. i am going to add samsona to my buddy list. plzzz send me pm.


no dear...its not my first writing...thnks a lot for support..
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...SankaDevi...

Great OS:)

Will you write more in English? Embarrassed

yes..I do..in my other couple stories..but Jodha Akbar needs to be in hidni for the indian touch..
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by janvie

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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">**Edited**</font>

Uff Uff Sona!!Tu hum Sab ko blush karake maarna chahti hai kya.Shocked Blushing Angry
<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Mai ye Especially Pink colour se type kar rahi hu,Bcoz the update was so DAMN HAWTTTBlushingIt left me all pink and Blushing Blushing
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">You know what The First update of this OS is itself so Tempting,Exciting and Beautiful that it made me to start watching the show and Now as You know I'm a MAD Akdha fan.Wink Embarrassed LOLToh Is Paagalpan ke liye tu hi jimmedar hai and teri Superb Writings.Angry Angry LOLThough I started watching bcoz of Rajat Tokas Magical Presence being his fan but Tera ye OS bahut bada reason tha which got me so excited to watch the show.Wink Embarrassed LOL
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And Coming to this Part,I just want to come and kiss your hands for such a Beautiful piece!HeartLOL I mean it really!EmbarrassedThe passion betwn them and The magic of your Beautiful words is enough to make My Mobile Screen Burn.Blushing Blushing Embarrassed
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I could imagine Jalal and Jodha infront of My eyes clearly just like watching the show and then All these scenes happening in front of My eyes.Embarrassed Blushing LOL
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I mean,I was imagining Our Rajat aka Jalal speaking all those words in Jodha's ears that How He,for whom Mohabbat was just a Mere word,How she came into his life and became his Mohabbat,His life...EmbarrassedYou wrote the dialogues so Beautifully and They made much higher and realistic impact coz of being in Hindi!!And Then When She accepted her love,that was Just "WOW"!! Heart
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And about that last kiss part,It left me all Blushing Blushing LOLBut Still the delicacy,Beauty and In your words the "Nazakat" in which you wrote the passionate scenes made it all the way more Beautiful rather than making them vulgar.Really Hats Off for Such Wonderful Writing Dear.Big smile **Clap-Clap** **Star**
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Loved it totally.Heart
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<font color="#ff0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for the PM.Big smile
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awww...so sweet mishu...u made my fly in sky with joy...i think i m the pigeon...thnks bhi nhi kehsakti...but its all bcs of u...u made me blv in this os and bcs of u I started it again..
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS.
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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
res for nxt prt

Edited by samwllms - 11 August 2013 at 4:54am
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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
This is very good, please continue :) ! Thank you Janvie for recommending this.
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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Woww... Its a beautifull update dear.. Wonderfully written..

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