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ManVeer ~~[[ishq kiya mohabat kiya]]~~ (Page 8)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Ok i know i am very late .. sorry for that  ..Ouch
coming to the story .. Smile
PROLOGUE 
aww poor manyata .. usse bolne ka chance bhi diya Cry
i am feeling bad for her ..
but poor uday .. usse bhi dukh ho rhaha hoga  CryCry
by the way .. prologue was beautifully written Clap

CHAPTER ONE BHI HAI ? PartyDancing

aww ... such an awesome chapter dii...ClapClap
loved it to the core Embarrassed
vijay-manyata talks were superb .. loved it Embarrassed
aww .. manyata imagining uday .. that was soo sweet ..Embarrassed
and the pictures u added just added more beauty to the story ..Clap
I totally enjoyed reading ..ClapClap
well done ..Embarrassed
and next chapter on 25th june ?
aaj hai 25th june ..
jaldi update karo...Smile
I am waiting Smile
P.S- i loved this update Clap

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
good..well written..thank you for the pm..Smile

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Awesome story dear

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Hope manveer meet soon

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Hey... I just read the prolouge and 1st chappy...
I am really sorry for the late comment...
Anyways coming to the update...
It was super diuper...
I am really waiting for manveer meeting...
Btw thanks for the pm...
Pls pm me for the next update also...

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged

Hey Janny !

How are you ?

I am really sorry for being late in commenting Ouch

 

Coming to the update,

The prologue was nice !

It was nicely written !

Great work Clap

 

I feel sad at the turn of events Cry 

Uday should have given her a chance to speak Angry

But can't blame him entirely ...

Poor guy !

Must have felt betrayed and heart broken himself Cry

 

The chapter was superb !

Manyata imagining Uday was sad and good !

Ok ... I know that sounds silly ... LOL

Egarley awaiting manveer meeting !


Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

 

P.S. Janny, i am sorry. i know i said that i am commenting but then we had net problems so couldn't comment !

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
CONCEPT is reallly nyccc MANYTA is lil sadu types I loved unnati waala part ..
Ab plzzz MAnveerr ko jaldi se milaaao naaa
N I LOVED MANVEER SO MUCH ... update sooon...
 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernakhandelwa

nice concept...can't wait for manveer meeting...nd thnx for pm...



thankxx so much deary yeah updayed now ...ur welcome

Edited by Janny.. - 25 June 2013 at 6:16pm
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
first of all a big big sorry for commenting so late...
was stuck a bit!!!!
well the concept is truelly awesome!!!
omg Uday London chala gaya???
kese jeete honge dono ek dusre ke bager!!!
awesomely written update soon!!!
plz do pm me

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