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ManVeer ~~[[ishq kiya mohabat kiya]]~~ (Page 10)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by nityatandon

Hey... I just read the prolouge and 1st chappy...
I am really sorry for the late comment...
Anyways coming to the update...
It was super diuper...
I am really waiting for manveer meeting...
Btw thanks for the pm...
Pls pm me for the next update also...


thanks for the readingSmileSmile
it's okayss...TongueTongue
thanksLOLLOLwelcome
Smileyeah sure i pm you pakkaLOL


Edited by Janny.. - 25 June 2013 at 4:11pm

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by catty2000

Hey Janny !

How are you ?

I am really sorry for being late in commenting Ouch

 

Coming to the update,

The prologue was nice !

It was nicely written !

Great work Clap

 

I feel sad at the turn of events Cry 

Uday should have given her a chance to speak Angry

But can't blame him entirely ...

Poor guy !

Must have felt betrayed and heart broken himself Cry

 

The chapter was superb !

Manyata imagining Uday was sad and good !

Ok ... I know that sounds silly ... LOL

Egarley awaiting manveer meeting !


Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

 

P.S. Janny, i am sorry. i know i said that i am commenting but then we had net problems so couldn't comment !



heya..
vidhi i m fine dear
how about you??

it's okayss please don't say sorryEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

thank you so much
i loved ur comment so muchSmileSmile

ur comment very nice
i m glad u liked the storyTongueTongue

thanks 4 the lovely comment
updated ur story fastWinkWink

thanks again vidhi

n please dont say sorry

hugsHug

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by K.R_ackraal

CONCEPT is reallly nyccc MANYTA is lil sadu types I loved unnati waala part ..
Ab plzzz MAnveerr ko jaldi se milaaao naaa
N I LOVED MANVEER SO MUCH ... update sooon...
 


thank you my aru bacha loved ur comemnt...LOLLOLLOL
acha baba u wait n watch mill jayaga wo bhi jab mai or apke jiju mill jayaga tab lolLOLLOL
yeah babes thanks for commentWinkWink
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

first of all a big big sorry for commenting so late...
was stuck a bit!!!!
well the concept is truelly awesome!!!
omg Uday London chala gaya???
kese jeete honge dono ek dusre ke bager!!!
awesomely written update soon!!!
plz do pm me


no no no please dont say sorry
i understand
thanks for the lovely commentSmileSmile
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Amazing
Loved it l
U write nicely
Hope we get an outstanding update soon


saira thanks for the comment
loved ur commentSmileWink
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by humairaa1

Sorry for replying so late

The prologue was amazing
Truly loved it
Really felt bad for both Manyata n Uday

First chapter was amazing
Loved it a lot

Thanks for the pm n plz continue soon Smile


it's okaysss humaira dont say sorrySmileSmile
thanks for the lovely commentTongueTongue
ur welcome dearLOLLOL
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:24pm | IP Logged

she wipes the tears n say confidencely
manyata gown n hair style


manyata:i know uday i know u come back soon u dont forget ur princess i know u still loved ur princess i knew it..
[she say to herself]
sameer picture

{manyata go n in after 1 hour she reached the sameer house n enter the party}
{sameer come towards her n both hugged eachother}

sam:how are you manyata what's up??
manyata:nothing much me rocking u tell..??
sam:me superb i dont think u come but i m very happy u come welcome manyata..
manyata:ohh thanks sameer why did u think i m not come  dear this is ur success party so mujhe tu ana hi tha...SmileSmile
sam:kayss mam ab chale
manyata:hmm
{she nodded}
{sam hold her waist tightly manyata bit a uncomfortable but she ignore it n forget it sam hold her waist n both go behind the party n talk too members..}
sam:manyata u know my special firend come there soon mai tumhe use milaoga he specially come for me he is my best firend
manyata:who is guys??
sam:noo abhi nai he come den i will tell you
manyata:kayss baba i m waiting
[sudden someone enter the party all girls see him n one girl come n he hold her waist tightly n start walking behind the party manyata see him n fully shocked her eyes are filled she crying little but dont show...CryCry person come towards sameer den manyata turn her face..}

{person is none of den udayveer singh}
uday:helloo sam hows ur dude congratzz this is for you..
{uday give him on boquate}
sam:dude i m fine i will see you after long time welome back too india..
uday:now where is she ur loved??
sam:dude jaldi milaoga yahi thi pata nai kaha chale gayi ab she is so nice girl i loved her so much..
uday:she also loved you??
sam:idk but i loved her so much n we are firends after 2 years we are bussines partners...
uday:what r u mad use nai pata han ager wo sirf tujhe dost smajti hogi tu ..
{uday hearts crying n he thinking jaise mujhe meri princess ne smaja tha aj bhi nai bhool paya mai tumhe princess..}
sam:dara maat yar mai uske begair nai jee sakta or uske liya kuch bhi karsakta ho..
uday:best of luck i wish she also loved you
sam:hope so wait me back soon
uday:ok buddy
in 10 minutes later

manyata:jana hoga yaha se mai uday ko or dukh nai desakti use phale uday mujhe dekha mai yaha se chali jati ho abhi isi waqt..
{she said to herself}
manyata run towards the get sudden manyata gown stuck someone shoes manyata turn n see he is uday she shocked uday also shocked

chapter three precap:manyata unconsious in rain

chapter three is done guys i know is very long...so leave ur long comment n do hit like button...

janny

{strickly warning no res box}


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