Janny dear juz brillant work :D sam entry was nice .. now itz love triangle n seeing sam pic i fell for sam also itz not fair :P uday n sam r both handsome guys n fren too.. aab ek k toh heart break hoga..but love d ending wen manveer see eachother n waiting for nxt update dear :D
Osina :P
osina thank you so much dear...!!! yeah both handsame u just wait n watch hope u liked it...but u read it lol den u understand the conceptππ yeah haert break bhi hoga jodi breakers bhi hoga lakin love birds bhi bane ga love vivvah bhi hoga...u just wait n watch okkππ
very nice awsome manyata uday ki meet par end this so much unfair n this is so much short chapter please give the long chapters n please update regular loved it muah this is it...i loved hayaaa ab kiya hoga sam n uday both loved manyata but ab dono he handsame cool dahing loving caring han kisko millegi humari nutcut manyata?
maha
welcome back jani...hope u well after long time u come ur all firend
misss u like me i miss you so much missing you welcome again too kr n
manveerian world n thanks for the longest comment sweet mai isi comment
ka wait kari thi itna acha n sab confusion jaldi door hojayaga or sab
pata chal jayaga tab tum sab ko sabar ajayaga lol isliya abhi sawal ke
jawab update mai millega lol now bye n hugs miss you u come so scrap me pleaseππn take care ur self first okkππn update rooz kaise karu time nai milta lol but phir i will try my level best
{uday
manyata shocked to see eachother after long time both eyes are filled
both see eachother eyes in painfully both so much involved painfull eye
contact n little bit romantic eye contact}
uday:princess tum yaha..??what are you doing there?? {he said painfully} manyata:wo mai i m sorry i dont know u come there i m really sorry please leave my gown... {she is crying uday see her tears he unable to control n hold her shoulders wipes her tears} uday:shhh see in my eyes n tell me why r you crying kisi ne kuch kaha tumse?? manyata:nai wo mai...mujhe {she hold her head n little unconsious den uday pic her on his strong arms both lovely eyecontact} {background song}
Tumse mil ke maine jaana Ishq kya mohabbat kya Bhool baitha sab kuchh main to Din kya, raat kya.. chaahat mein...
{uday hands around her waist n her both hand rest around his neck n both still in eyecontact} {after
10 minutes both come to the sense manyata stands up n uday also stands
both not eyecontact again both dont see eachother eyes}
uday:princess r u okays? manyata:yes mai chalti ho..ππ uday:tum akaili ayi ho?? manyata:han..
{manyata
just not fine she being faints again but n uday try too held her again
uday towards manyata but sudden sameer come n hold manyata waist n
caressing her checks manyata again faint}
manyata:me fine sam u go n enjoy ur party me going now sorry.. sam:shut up manyata r u mad tum kahi nai jarahi chalo hum doctor ke pass chalte han.. manyata:nai iski koi zarorat nai han me fine tum jao mai chale jaogi.. {uday so much angry now} {uday go towards her n hold her arms tightly sameer just shocked n manyata scared}
uday:you
just shut up what do u think u r so strong princess no no u r week now i
know u always being sherni n forget ur health but now u dont forget
your health you r week so dont be being sherni now.. {he said loudly}
sam:uday just releax...n bdw u both know eachother? {uday come to his sense} uday:no
we dont know eachother bas hum kuch saal phale ek meeting par mille tha
or aj so hum just firend han abhi tak..rite manyata?? sam:okayss now manyata tum mere sath chalo..
{manyata eyes are fullfiled n but uday is angry he go so sudden one girl come n hugged him}
uday:heya baby kaha thi.. {he see manyata eyes n hugged the girl so much} {sameer busy too busy attend guest n manyata sit one table n uday hugged her more tightly} {manyata crying } {uday broke the hugged} uday:hii baby kaha thi tum pata han mai tumhare begair kitna sona pan lagraha tha bilkul akaila hogaya tha mai yaha..riddhima i m die widout you dont leave me alone again riddhima:u said i m leave you noo uday i m searching you after half hour but pata nai tum kaha tha hokiya gaya tumhe.??
{uday
so much hurt manyata n both little pain full eyecontact manyata
remember all moment n she see uday hugged another girl manyata bit of
angry n she stood up n leave this party uday see n uday tensed becoz
loves manyata}
uday thinking:where are you princess mai tumhe nai
kuch hone doga tumhari tabiyat theek nai han damit tumhe apni parwah
nai han bilkul bhi...