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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: gal.angel
Janny dear juz brillant work :D sam entry was nice .. now itz love triangle n seeing sam pic i fell for sam also itz not fair :P uday n sam r both handsome guys n fren too.. aab ek k toh heart break hoga..but love d ending wen manveer see eachother n waiting for nxt update dear :D

Osina :P

osina thank you so much dear...!!!
yeah both handsame u just wait n watch hope u liked it...but u read it lol den u understand the concept😉😉
yeah haert break bhi hoga jodi breakers bhi hoga lakin love birds bhi bane ga love vivvah bhi hoga...u just wait n watch okk😆😆

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Kiarawinget16
AWSMO CHAPPYS ...👏

thanks for reading n welcome too manveerian my imagination world...👏👏😊😊

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: ...manyata...
very nice awsome manyata uday ki meet par end this so much unfair n this is so much short chapter please give the long chapters n please update regular loved it muah this is it...i loved hayaaa ab kiya hoga sam n uday both loved manyata but ab dono he handsame cool dahing loving caring han kisko millegi humari nutcut manyata?

maha welcome back jani...hope u well after long time u come ur all firend misss u like me i miss you so much missing you welcome again too kr n manveerian world n thanks for the longest comment sweet mai isi comment ka wait kari thi itna acha n sab confusion jaldi door hojayaga or sab pata chal jayaga tab tum sab ko sabar ajayaga lol isliya abhi sawal ke jawab update mai millega lol now bye n hugs miss you u come so scrap me please😊😊n take care ur self first okk😛😛n update rooz kaise karu time nai milta lol but phir i will try my level best

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: arpita_wadhwa
superb update👏👏
loved it to the core 😳
Again the pics were superb 👏
Just loved it ..
I have nothing to say except as it was just PERFECT😊
update soon😊

bacha thanks for the coment..😉😉
thanks my madhuri diksaht loved ur comment😊😊
loved you😆😆
hugy🤗🤗

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

{uday manyata shocked to see eachother after long time both eyes are filled both see eachother eyes in painfully both so much involved painfull eye contact n little bit romantic eye contact}

uday:princess tum yaha..??what are you doing there??
{he said painfully}
manyata:wo mai i m sorry i dont know u come there i m really sorry please leave my gown...
{she is crying uday see her tears he unable to control n hold her shoulders wipes her tears}
uday:shhh see in my eyes n tell me why r you crying kisi ne kuch kaha tumse??
manyata:nai wo mai...mujhe
{she hold her head n little unconsious den uday pic her on his strong arms both lovely eyecontact}
{background song}

Tumse mil ke maine jaana
Ishq kya mohabbat kya
Bhool baitha sab kuchh main to
Din kya, raat kya.. chaahat mein...

{uday hands around her waist n her both hand rest around his neck n both still in eyecontact}
{after 10 minutes both come to the sense manyata stands up n uday also stands both not eyecontact again both dont see eachother eyes}

uday:princess r u okays?
manyata:yes mai chalti ho..😭😭
uday:tum akaili ayi ho??
manyata:han..

{manyata just not fine she being faints again but n uday try too held her again uday towards manyata but sudden sameer come n hold manyata waist n caressing her checks manyata again faint}

manyata:me fine sam u go n enjoy ur party me going now sorry..
sam:shut up manyata r u mad tum kahi nai jarahi chalo hum doctor ke pass chalte han..
manyata:nai iski koi zarorat nai han me fine tum jao mai chale jaogi..
{uday so much angry now}
{uday go towards her n hold her arms tightly sameer just shocked n manyata scared}

uday:you just shut up what do u think u r so strong princess no no u r week now i know u always being sherni n forget ur health but now u dont forget your health you r week so dont be being sherni now..
{he said loudly}

sam:uday just releax...n bdw u both know eachother?
{uday come to his sense}
uday:no we dont know eachother bas hum kuch saal phale ek meeting par mille tha or aj so hum just firend han abhi tak..rite manyata??
sam:okayss now manyata tum mere sath chalo..

{manyata eyes are fullfiled n but uday is angry he go so sudden one girl come n hugged him}

uday:heya baby kaha thi..
{he see manyata eyes n hugged the girl so much}
{sameer busy too busy attend guest n manyata sit one table n uday hugged her more tightly}
{manyata crying }
{uday broke the hugged}
uday:hii baby kaha thi tum pata han mai tumhare begair kitna sona pan lagraha tha bilkul akaila hogaya tha mai yaha..riddhima i m die widout you dont leave me alone again
riddhima:u said i m leave you noo uday i m searching you after half hour but pata nai tum kaha tha hokiya gaya tumhe.??

{uday so much hurt manyata n both little pain full eyecontact manyata remember all moment n she see uday hugged another girl manyata bit of angry n she stood up n leave this party uday see n uday tensed becoz loves manyata}

uday thinking:where are you princess mai tumhe nai kuch hone doga tumhari tabiyat theek nai han damit tumhe apni parwah nai han bilkul bhi...

chapter three is done...

chapter 4 precap:manyata unconcous manveer kiss...😛😳

please leave ur comment must..
do hit like button please...😊😊

janny..

Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

res

unres ...

yeah me first ...

Coming to the update .. (main bhi naa )

sooo..

Superb update di .

It was emotional but .. finally manveer met

Pics were superb ...

I just love the way you write

Precap ..

Update soon di ...

Edited by .-Arpita-. - 10 years ago

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angleroops

@angleroops

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

hey the update was very saddy sadyy

but happy to see manveer meeting

i hope the misunderstanding solves in next update

nd we can have some romance 😳

its a request

plsss update soonnn

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Jannat

@Janny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This content was originally posted by: roopali15
hey the update was very saddy sadyy
but happy to see manveer meeting
i hope the misunderstanding solves in next update
nd we can have some romance 😳
its a request
plsss update soonnn

helloo...welcome to my story
thanks 4 the lovely comment...😊😊

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey mah dear coco...

Well the update was very emotional...

Gosh they still love each other...

Hope they confess soon..

And who was that girl sticking to her like fevicol...

Loved it coco...

Do continue soon...

And thanx for the pm..

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