ManVeer ~~[[ishq kiya mohabat kiya]]~~ - Page 6

Hey... I just read the prolouge and 1st chappy...

Hey Janny !

How are you ?

I am really sorry for being late in commenting 

 

Coming to the update,

The prologue was nice !

It was nicely written !

Great work 👏

 

I feel sad at the turn of events 😭 

Uday should have given her a chance to speak 😡

But can't blame him entirely ...

Poor guy !

Must have felt betrayed and heart broken himself 😭

 

The chapter was superb !

Manyata imagining Uday was sad and good !

Ok ... I know that sounds silly ... 😆

Egarley awaiting manveer meeting !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

 

P.S. Janny, i am sorry. i know i said that i am commenting but then we had net problems so couldn't comment !

CONCEPT is reallly nyccc MANYTA is lil sadu types I loved unnati waala part ..

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice concept...can't wait for manveer meeting...nd thnx for pm...

thankxx so much deary yeah updayed now ...ur welcomeEdited by Janny.. - 10 years ago

first of all a big big sorry for commenting so late...
was stuck a bit!!!!
well the concept is truelly awesome!!!
omg Uday London chala gaya???
kese jeete honge dono ek dusre ke bager!!!
awesomely written update soon!!!
plz do pm me

Originally posted by: afsuu

wow

janny what a update

lovely ,unique style of writing

thanks so much babes sis i loved ur comment so much very nice pic loved ur comment hugs😊😊
Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

awesome update...😊😊

thankss so much😊😊

Amazing
Loved it l
U write nicely
Hope we get an outstanding update soon

Originally posted by: arpita_wadhwa

Ok i know i am very late .. sorry for that  ..

coming to the story .. 😊
it's alright sweety..😛😛

PROLOGUE 

aww poor manyata .. usse bolne ka chance bhi diya 😭

i am feeling bad for her ..
yeah he is so much angry 😡😡

but poor uday .. usse bhi dukh ho rhaha hoga  😭😭

by the way .. prologue was beautifully written 👏

thanks jee han i m glad u liked it..😊😊

CHAPTER ONE BHI HAI ? 🥳


what do u think??😡😡

aww ... such an awesome chapter dii...👏👏

loved it to the core 😳

vijay-manyata talks were superb .. loved it 😳

aww .. manyata imagining uday .. that was soo sweet ..😳

and the pictures u added just added more beauty to the story ..👏

I totally enjoyed reading ..👏👏

well done ..😳

and next chapter on 25th june ?

aaj hai 25th june ..

jaldi update karo...😊

I am waiting 😊

P.S- i loved this update 👏

thank you so much my little sister i loved ur comment😆😆ali ka kiya hoga ab😭😭heheh lol nice comment bdw aj update kardogi jaldi hi dont worry nice comment also😊😊u make my day

sweety bye hugy hugy
sweety i update now...😆😆
Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago

Sorry for replying so late

The prologue was amazing
Truly loved it
Really felt bad for both Manyata n Uday

First chapter was amazing
Loved it a lot

Thanks for the pm n plz continue soon 😊