ManVeer ~~[[ishq kiya mohabat kiya]]~~

Posted: 10 years ago









sanaya my bestie my hubby thank you so much...thanks for the always help me n thanks for the idea my sweethrt pricess love you tons by tons hugss


MANVEER MARRIED DAY MANYATA RUN TO MANDEER TOWARDS AKASH UDAY WAITTING HER ON MANDAAP IN RAJMAHAL THIS STORY BEGIN ALL STAND IN HALL SHE COME ALWAYS TOWARDS UDAY BUT UDAY THINK SHE STILL LOVE AKASH SO HE GO AWAY ALWAYS N DONT LISTEN HER DONT GIVE HER CHANCE TO EXPLAIN EVERYTHIG N GO LONDON SHE IS FULLY CHANGE SHE IS YOUNG GOOD YUVRANI SHE DONT LAUGH ONLY DOING WORK SHE DONT CARE HERSELF N ALL SHE FULLY CHANGE AFTER THREE YEARS LATER JAY BEING MARRIED TO JAGGAT N SETTLED ON AUSTRALIA UNNATI VIJAY BEING TO COUPLE N ALWAYS SUPPORT MANYATA SO MUCH DS STILL LYING ON COMA KOMAL N BRIRAJ BUSY N DEVGARAH PLACE N MANYATA BUSY IN MUMBAI WORKS N DEALS N ALL UDAY STILL LIVE IN LONDON...

CHAPTER ONE PRECAP:MANVEER MEET IN PARTY.

GUYS YOU ALL SO MUCH SUPPORTING ME THANK YOU SO MUCH UR SCRAPS N COMMENT LIKES ON MY OS I LOVED UR SUPPORT N THANKS FOR APPRECIATE MY FIRST WORK I LOVED UR RESPONCE N ALL WANT I WRITE MORE SO KK I WRITE ONE MORE STORY PLEASE READ THIS STORY

INDEX

PROLOGUE PG.1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86168163
CHAPTER 1 PG.1 {SCROLL DOWN}
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86171965
CHAPTER 2 PG.11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86341066
CHAPTER 3 PG.21
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86505337
Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago






all wakeup in devgarah mahal manyata vijay unnati all eat bf(break fast) n convo start

vijay:manyata bhai u know when mamu sa n mami sa come back??

manyata:yeah vijay bhai mom dada say both  come back after 1 month.. any problem vijay bhai so tell me i think i helping you..

vijay:no no u dont help me becoz u r doing many work already n i no need help mai tu bas aisa hi pouch raha tha..

manyata:okay unnati why u come so late n how long time u come rajmahal?

unnati:ohh sorry manyata mai  zara busy thi??

manyata:who's person??

unnati:nothing..

manyata:ohh hoo how i m forget u busy wid my brother rite?

unnati:nah..
[shy]

vijay:acha bas manyata bhai teasing band n ready hojao jaldi se sameer se milne jana han na??

manyata:yess kk unnati u also join me please..
[feeling alone]

unnati:no manyata wo aj mujhe...
[sudden she stop the line]

manyata:wat??

unnati:nothing just i m busy so me not come next time babes..

manyata:ohoo wow grt..vijay bhai n unati alone wow...ahem ahem

unnati:aisa kuch nai han me going yet bye guys..
[she feel shy n she blushing]

[manyata also go towards her room n start wering jwellery gown n apply the makeup]

[manyata stands up n see her face on mirror n said]

manyata:how's it...

[sudden uday come n back hug her manyata very happy n big smile on her lips..she turn n her both hand around his neck]

manyata:tum agaya nai tum nai hosakta ya zaroor meri imagination han..tum tu mujhse naraz hokar chale gaya tha na..

uday:yeah princess u right this is my ghost not me lol n yes i m angry but i still love my princess...

[he said n slowly slowly his lips come towards her lip she closed the eyes tightly]
[but sudden manyata open her eyes n see den uday is not there this moment is imagination only she start crying n sit on her knees

manyata:q nai bhool parti mai tumhe q mere
sapno mai meri baaton mere khayalo mai sirf tum hi ho why uday why uday q aj 3 saal hogaya lakin aj bhi tum nai aya bhool gaya mujhe q chale gaya mujhe chor ke mujhse baat kare begair q chale gaya mujhe dante zabardasti karte why uday why??kyun mujhe akaila chor diya tumne??
[why i m unable to forget u why my dream my talks my thinking only for you?? why uday 3 years later but u dont come back u forget me uday why u leaving me widout talking why u going??u shout me u tolerate me  why uday why why why???why u leaving me alone??]

[she crying alots n thinking all moments]
chapter one is done..

chapter two precap:manveer meet in party

do hit like button n leave ur comments..

bubye next chapter posted on 25th june.

janny.


{noo res box}

Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres
yipeee me first to comment...
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aaj lagta hain mera din  bahut acha hain
i mean raat bahut achi hain...
πŸ˜†
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now my no more bakwaas
cuming to the ss
janny ...
maate meri ek aur ss
my god yaar
god only knows wat else is in store for us frm ur writing brains
🀣
i guess god only knows that
gos
now
the prologue is amzing
it is nyc
another manveer ss
gr8
prologue was nyc
and
the first chappyy
was amzing
my god manveer married
and
truly
kudos to u for the first chappy
 amzing  yaar
u r a very gud writer i must say
honestly
 just luvd the first chappytruly
mindblowing
fantabulous
gr8  going yaar
i wud luv to read a kr os or ss frm u also
do start thinking abt it
and
this ss sounds amzing
do c**tinue with it
update next chappy soon...
and
for the update and prologue
πŸ‘
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Edited by jas112 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
I M SO SORRY FOR MY RES DEAR ITS REALLY GUD CONCEPT N GUD UPDATE MANYTA IS RUDE ... AWW I M FELT VERY BAD FOR HER ... VB N UNNATI CONVO IS REALLY GUD !! I M EXCITED HOW MANVEER MEET UDAY LOVED HER BUT HE IS UPSET WID HER !!! SO I THINK THEY MEET REALLY EMOTIONALLY OR MUJHE DAR IS BATH KA HAI UDAY NE KAHI DUSRI NA PTA LI HO πŸ˜‰ KYU KI GUSSE MAI VO KUCH BHI KAR SAKTA HAI πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† N I LOVED MANVEER SO MUCH SO PLZ KOI CHUDAIL MAT LAIYO B/W THIS IS REALLY NICE UPDATE !!! 
 
Edited by priyash.. - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by huma12.


Awsssmmm


THANK YOU HUMA...😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by jas112


res
unres
haaww u always resy...😑😑
yipeee me first to comment...
πŸ₯³

wow congoo...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
aaj lagta hain mera din  bahut acha hain
i mean raat bahut achi hain...
haaww raat kyu achi han..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
πŸ˜†
πŸ˜†
πŸ˜†
now my no more bakwaas
coolπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
cuming to the ss
janny ...
maate meri ek aur ss
my god yaar
u like it thanks bachaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
god only knows wat else is in store for us frm ur writing brains
🀣
haww u know wat i m so intelligent
i guess god only knows that
gos
now
the prologue is amzing
it is nyc
another manveer ss
gr8
thank you so much yar u make my day
prologue was nyc
and
the first chappyy
was amzing
my god manveer married
and
truly
kudos to u for the first chappy
 amzing  yaar
u r a very gud writer i mπŸ˜†ust say
honestly
 just luvd the first chappytruly
wow i m flying hahahahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†u dil khush kardiya...this is it...
mindblowing
fantabulous
gr8  going yaar
i wud luv to read a kr os or ss frm u also
do start thinking abt it

this ss sounds amzing
do c**tinue with it
update next chappy soon...
and
for the update and prologue
πŸ‘
πŸ‘
πŸ‘
ur comments always very nice n make my day n long LOL




thank you so much i loved it!
awsome comment...<3
n han age bhi aise comment karte raho
n yar kriyansh n swaron par ek ff likh tu rahi ho dont worry jaldi os bhi likh dogi apke liya bacha now bubye hugss
Edited by Janny.. - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by htgcute


Awesome...



THANKSπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
that was really nice!!
awesome prologue...waiting for the first meeting...update soon!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
love it
and i couldn't see the pain of manyata
i had a question if j love uday then why j married jaggat
i love manyata imagination scene 
upload soon
Posted: 10 years ago
really nice.updatr
can't see manveet in pain
eaiting for. their meeting
plz plz plz do something so that they couldn't get seperate waiting for next prt
plz lz plz update soon

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