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Virika ~ Life maybe limited bt not Love *EHMMBH DT Note P6* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
ahha 
nice nice 
 i loved it 
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayee fizzy <3
this is awsome <3
n not boring at all :D
continue soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 3:
Sorry for late update cux i was busy with shifting to another city
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Viren : Taara zubaan smbhal k jeevika meri dost hai and me uski bezati bardasht nae kr skta
Taara: huh watever!! 
V: jeevika chalo yaha se
Virika left... T jealous 
J: kia zarurat thi taara se mre liye larne ki
V: mujh se tumari bezati brdasht nae hui is lye
Varun and preeti comes
P: jeevika chalo class me chalte hai class ka tym hai
J: ha chalo , Bye viren ji
Vi: lakin...ok bye 
Va : chal viren hum log b chalte hai bye preeti and jeevika...
The day ends...
Viren goes to find his room in hostel
Viren enters... and sees that varun is his room partner
On other side Jeevz enters the room and finds preeti thr
P: are jeevika tum yaha mre room mai? ao na ander...wse tume apna room mila??
J: Preeti mera room bhi yae hai...
p: oh gr8 ... koi achi room mate to mili mujhe ..kuch months pehle taara thi meri room mate n kuchi dino me usne mje tang kr dia tha is lye mne room change kr dia.
J: ohh
NIGHT TIME ;)
VV room-
Viren missing jeevz
Varun : chal viren ab so jao suba jaldi uthna hai
vi: ok :)
Viren tries to sleep but he cant sleep ...wen he closes his eyes he remembers jeevika...
Vi: ye muje kia ho gya hai ...soo he nae pa raha me ... bs jeevika ka khayaal araha hai...ik kaam krta hn virat se bt krta hn.
viren calls virat 
Virat: hello mere bhai... kse ho
Viren: Bhai me thk hn .. tum kse ho
Virat: me b thk hu bhai ... kiya hua achanak meri kse yaad ayi , koi kaam tha kya bhai?
Viren: nae virat vo neend nae arae thi yr... aankhe band krte he jeevika dikhti hai
Virat: ye JEEVIKA kon hai ?? ;)
Viren tells him everything about jeevika 
Virat: ooohhh ye to kuch or he maamla lgta hai ;)
Viren: mtlb??
Virat: jb koi apko har jga dikhta hai and raato ki nind urh jaati hai to ye to pyaar hota hai (LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ;) )
Viren : tum bhi na virat kuch b bolte ho
TO BE CONITINUED ...
Edited by fizzyluvzkt - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
SUPERB!!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜³
Waiting For The Next One!! πŸ˜ƒ 
Better Write A Huge ONE!! πŸ˜­ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
eekks
loved it 
nice nice 
bt was small 
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Posted: 10 years ago
grt story...
luved all the parts!!
cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved d updates
amazing
superb
mind blowing
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update totally brilliant
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW
ekkss ...damn amazing hayeee love at first sight love the update fizzyy pls jaldi update kar plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late update...
FOR JENNY & my jeevika ji ridz :P
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PART 4:
Viren : bhai tu bhi na kya pyaar wyaar ...  
Virat: mre bhaee pyar kya to darna kia :P
Viren: Chal bht raat ho gae hai tu sooja.
virat: thek hai bhai aap bhi soonay ki kooshish kro
On otherside jeevika goes out of her room and calls manvi
J: hi mannu kesi hai
M: diii abi ae yaad meri :(
J: mannu tu bhi na me tujhe bhool skti hn. kesi ho tum?
m: me thk hn di ap kesi ho?
J: me bhi thk hn
Jeeman phone convo went onn...and jeevz dint realized that she has came to hostel's cafe. and viren was also thr.
J: chal mannu me baad me baat krti hn tujh se ...so jao
Viren has coffee mug in his hands and by mistake he drops the mug and the coffe spills over the floor and jeevika just turns and she was about to slip but viren saves her <3 and virika eye lock <3


viren totally lost in jeevz's beautifull eyes <3 
Jeevika also lost in viren
Viren's hand on her back...jeevika feeling his touch <3
but then jeevika breaks the eye lock
--EPIC EYE LOCK ENDS --
Viren : sorry.
J: its ok but aap yaha itni raat ko?
V(still lost) : haa wo mujhe tumhare waja se neend nahi arahi thi
J (shocked) : mere waja se
v: kia?? nae wo me apne bhai ko keh rha tha phn  pe :P wo us ne raat ko phone kia is lye 
J: ohhh acha
V: Marte marte Bach gae viren...
J: apne kuch kaha
V: nahii nahi to kyu apne kuch suna
J: nahi..acha gud ni8 abi humien sona chaheye raat boht ho gae hai 
V: ha acha..gud ni8...
Jeevika leaving and she agains slips and comes in viren's arms and virika's lips too close
Viren about to kiss jeevika
J: gud ni8 and leaves from there
END OF PART 4
I noe its bit boring but twists coming soon in the story :)