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Virika ~ Life maybe limited bt not Love *EHMMBH DT Note P6* (Page 2)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
totally awesome too  good

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
Awsome
Continue soon plz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
hayee hayee..wt an updatee..great and awesome start...keep continuinggg..im lovinggg it... plss PM me..thnku so muchh :D

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Nyc start Thumbs Up
Continue Soon 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Thanku for the feedback...
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Part 2
Jeevx runs from there blushing.
Jeevika enters her class. She goes n sits at the back sear.
Class president Preeti goes and talks to jeevika. Preeti likes jeevika because she is sweet and simple.
P: hi mera name preeti hai , m class president , if u have any problem den come to me.
J : thanku. i m Jeevika.
P: Jeevika , u look like u belong from a traditional family.
J: yes i do.
P: thats gud wrna yaha is class me sb MODERN type larkiya hai. Chalo me tume apne frnz se milati hn.
J: ok
P: guys she is Jeevika, hmari new frnd n new student.
Jeevika meets everyone
Ajay (JEEVIKA'S CLASSMATE) : oye behenji apna naam to bta.
P: ajay behave yourself.
A: guys hmare class me ik BEHEN JI aayi hai , Preeti kya kam thi k ik or behen ji agae.

On the other side viren enters his class.
Girls drooling over him Wink
Are ye to Viren Vadhera hai <3
Hayee itna hot larka class me
Varun - are ye to viren hai
(VARUN is viren's childhood friend)
Viren - hi guys me new student hn.
Varun- Are hi viren muje pehchana?? me varun
Vi- hi varun tum yaha?? tum b law parh rahe ho?
Va- ha viren. wse tum kse ho bht saalo baad tum se mulakat hue.
Vi- me bilkul thk hn yaar tu kesa hai? n tu to NewYork me tha na?
Va- ha wo daadi ki death k bd yaha pe hn.
Vi - oh ok
Va- hm chalo acha hai k tum yaha ho.
Tara (viren's classmate) enters the class :

Tara: hellow boys. oh ye to hmare class me Hott Viren Vadhera hai.
Bell rings. Class ends.
Preeti to jeevika : acha jeevika mujhe kisi se milne jana hai next class me milte hai.
J: ok preeti mje b jaana hai (jeevx wana meet viren Wink )
on other side Varu to viren: acha viren next class me milte hai abi mje kisi se milne jaana hai late nae hona.
Vi: ok ok bhai tu ja mje b ik friend se milne jaana hai.
Va: kia pehle din hi kisi ko dost bna dia or hme pta nae kon hai wo dost ?? Tongue
Vi: yaar tu b na...chal me tje milata hn
Viren Varun goes out and Preeti and Jeevx comes out of their class.
Viren smiles , Varun: kia hua kise dekha jo smile kr rha hai
Vi: wahi friend hai Jeevika jo bahar a rahi hai
Va: ooohhh to ye bt hai ... Wink Tongue
P: hi Varun , ye dosra kon hai tumare sath?
Va: are tum ise nae jaanti ye VIREN VADHERA hai, and ye mre bachpan ka dost hai
P: hi viren.
Vi: hi
P: varun ye meri new frnd hai Jeevika , or jeevika ye wahi hai jis k bre me me tje bta rahi thi , jise me psnd krti hn Embarrassed
Va: mje pata hai is ke bare me Viren ne mje btaya
P: ok chalo varun , jeevika me tumse class me milti hn.
Va: chalo preeti , bye guys
Varun preeti left. Virika Alone Smile
V: finally hme tym mil gya milne ka.
J: jii... apki class kse gae??
V: bht achi n aapki??
J(thinks of how ajay behaved with her ) : meri b bas thk gae laikin preeti ne mje aesa na lgne dia k me nayi hn class me.
V:chalo acha hai. wse apke ghar me kon kon hai.
J: meri choti behen MAANVi , meri beeji , badi beeji n chacha chachi. n apke?
V: Mere Dada ji meri maa n meri badi maa , mera bhai n chacha chachi n unka beta,n dad ki death ho gae hai ,laikin  IK BIWI KI KAMI HAI Embarrassed
Jeevx Blushes Embarrassed ...
V: n apke mom dad?
Jeevz having tears in her eyes Cry n says - mere mummy papa ki death ho gae hai
V: oh sorry n ap please royi ga mat ap rotay hue achi nae lgti ...
J: ok.
V: Wse apki mom zarur bht khubsurat hogi
J: apko kse pta ?
V: kyu ki ap bhi bht khubsurat ho.
Virika talking and Taara sees them together and gets jealous Shocked
T: ye larki kon hai viren k sath ...
Annie(T's chamchi :P): maybe uski girlfriend hogi
T: huh viren jse hottie ki koi hot girlfriend hogi mre jaise, ye behen ji nahi...
Taara goes to viren ...
T: hi viren
v: hi taara .
T: viren ye kon hai ??
V: Ye meri friend hai
T: mje pta tha k tumare choice itni buri nae ho gi girlfriend k mamle me
Jeevx felt bad .
V: Taara zubaan smbhal k , Jeevika k baare me aesi bte na kro !!! wo meri dost hai ...
To be continued in next part
i noe it was boring but will try to make next part romantic :)


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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
res...
#unres...
me first!!!!!
party time...
the update is mind vlowing..   
its totally fantastic ...
ajay calling behenji to jeevika...
go to hell ajay...
nd viren nd jeevika meet after their class. .
soo sweet!!!!!
cont soon...
cant wait!!!!!

Edited by millee18 - 25 June 2013 at 9:45am

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
reaallyyy beautiful...love the bonding betwn jeevika n preethi... looking forward for the next updatee...  keep continuingg... 

loved the strting frendship of virika...great gng... :D awesommeee

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Aww my frnd fizzy dis is an awesomest story dude awww just love each n every bit of it n hayeee when viren said "EK BIWI KI KAMI HAI " I WAS BLUSHING LIKE ANYTING n aww i even love preeti n thanks fr the pm n updates soon pls pls pls UPDATE FAST MY FIZZY FAST

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