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RaYa FF - mann ki lagan...ishq hain tumse, updt 139 (Page 57)

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here I come with the next part, this part will be the end of flashback and present will come in, so ENJOY


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...kyun ki dil me toh sirf Ram hain aur jo kuch bhi hua usme uska dil juda hua tha''''''Priya wiped her tears and came out of the room and went downstairs.



At the breakfast table everyone was chatting and doing fun. Aaj sab Neha ke peeche pare hain khaas kar ke Ajitnathji, he along with Rishabh and Natasha teasing her. Priya was watching them with a smile on her face'''''..after coming from terrace, she came to her room and headed straight towards bathroom, she took the shower, freshened up and came in front of the mirror when she saw her bruised lip. She covered that up with her lip gloss. Kaal raat se Priya woh kangaan peheni huyi hain, she looked at them, they were heavy and traditional, she brushed her fingers on them and closed her eyes, some droplets trickle down her cheeks. She wiped the tears and came downstairs''''''''everyone was enjoying their breakfast ke tabhi Neha asked Priya why is she looking so pale?


Neha ' r u ok?, tabiyat toh theek hain tumhari?


Hearing this Ram looked at Priya but Priya didn't even glance at him and said, haan main theek hoon, bas actually kaal raat baarish me thoda bheeg gayi thi isi liye thoda sa zukhham ho gaya hain.


Neha ' koi medicine li hain tumne?, kuch du kya?


Priya ' arrre nahi, main theek hoon, don't panick yaar.


Ram was watching and hearing this, he felt Priya is suppressing her emotion, but he didn't say anything.


At the evening, guests have started coming aur Lalaji ki kothi roshni se jagmagah uthi. Vikram ke ghar se shaagun ki mehendi aa gayi hain aur Neha bhi ready hain. Aaj Neha qayamat dhaa rahi hain, jo lehenga usne yahaan se khareedi thi, usne aaj wahi pehena hain, she was looking extremely gorgeous and beautiful, mehendi aur sangeet ek hi din me hain toh everyone was doing their last minute preparation to showing thumbs down to opponent. Kothi ki hall me aaj sab beythe hain. Priya helped Neha to dress up and of Neha's insistence Priya has to wear the saree which Neha gifted her. Priya is also looking beautiful in that saree, she let her hair open and kept it aside, her neatly lined kohled eyes are sparkling, a deep lipstick is giving her the perfect look for the evening, with that a big earing with lots of kaanch ki chooriya making her special in the crowd.


Vikram has come with his family and was waiting for Neha. Ram was with him, chatting when all the people cheered and shouted seeing Neha coming down along with Priya. Vikram had a smile on his face and Ram was happy to see Neha, next he saw Priya and for some moments he kept staring at her. She was looking absolutely stunning in the saree. Ram saw Priya in saree for first time. All came and seated in the hall. Neha ko pehele shagun ki mehendi lagwayi gayi, Krishnaji aur Emma ne pehele lagwaya phir baki sab bado ne bhi lagwaya, uske baad Krishnaji asked Priya to put the mehendi,


Krishnaji ' beta tum bhi Neha ko mehendi lagwayo, aakhir tum iss ghar ki honewali bahu ho, haq hain tumhara, for brief seconds Priya didn't say anything but came and put the mehendi on Neha's hand and hugged her saying Congratulations.


Shaagun ke mehendi ke baad, shaadi ki mehendi lagwani ki baari aayi, toh jo jo ladies mehendi lagwayenge woh sab beyth gaye, Neha ne Priya ko bulaya,


Neha ' arrreee Priya, tum kahan jaa rahi ho, idhaar aao, tum bhi lagwayogi


Priya ' nahi Neha, mujhe bohot kaam hain abhi, sab mehemaan aaye hain, thoda unn logo ko bhi attend kar lu


Neha ' koi bahana nahi chalega, tumhe bhi lagwana parega, chalo beytho, saying this Neha pulled her and Priya has to give up.


Priya extended her hand aur mehendiwali designs banana lagi, kuch der baad Neha ne Priya ki mehendiwali ko boli ke uss ke haath me Ram ka naam likhne ko, yeh sunn ke Priya chauk jati hain aur dekhti hain Neha usse dekh ke hass rahi hain toh Priya also gave a smile par usne mehendiwali ko boli naam na likhne ke liye, par tab tak usne likh diya tha. Priya se ab bardaasht nahi ho raha tha par woh apne aapko samhal rahi thi bohot mushkil se. Mehendi lagwane ke baad sangeet shuru hua, ladke aur ladki walo ne jam ke apne talent ka pradarshan kiya, ek ser to duja sawa ser, koi kissi se kam nahin, Rishabh aur Natasha ne jam ke naache wahan dusri taraf Vikram ke cousins bhi kam nahin the, woh log bhi bhaari parr rahe the, isi beech Vikram aur Neha ko bhi nachwaya gaya, aakhir me sab shaamil huye, yahaan tak Ram bhi par Priya nahi huyi, usne ek bahana bana diya aur beyth ke inn sab ko dekhti rahi.


Dinner ke baad sab wapas chale gaye, kal shaadi hain toh bohot kaam hain, everyone retires to their room. Priya apne kamre me aati hain aur darwaaza band karti hain, she looked at her palms and saw her mehendi has dried up, she came to the bathroom and kept her palm under the water, saare mehendi dhul gaye, uske saath saath Priya ke aansoo bhi, woh nahi chahti hain Ram ka kuch bhi uske paas rahe, Ram ki naam ka mehendi bhi nahi, par kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor hain, mehendi toh dhul gaye par uska raang uske haathon me charr gaya, rang bohot gehra aaya hain uske mehendi ka, saath hi saath Ram ka naam bhi.


Next day in the morning, subah subah Neha ki haldi rasm ho rahi thi, aaj Priya bohot shant ho gayi thi, jo hulchal uske dil me kal pura din hua hain uska zara sa bhi aaj nahi hain, hothon pe bada sa muskaan liye woh sabki madad kar rahi hain aur beech beech me pics click kar rahi hain, kabhi Neha ki taang kheench rahi hain toh kabhi Rishabh aur Natasha ke saath milke masti kar rahi hain, saare rasmo me madad kar rahi hain toh dusri taraf guests ko attend bhi kar rahi hain, jaise maano woh apne aakhri pal ko enjoy kar rahi hain. Jab Neha ko haldi lagaya jaa raha tha toh Priya ne bohot sharaarat ki uske saath yahan tak ki jab Neha ne usse bhi haldi lagwa di toh bina kuch kahe aur bole lagwa bhi liya aur bohot maaze karte karte Rishabh ko apna camera thamake pics click karne ke liye bhi kahan. Sab ke saath woh enjoy kar rahi thi aur sab koi Priya se mil ke aur baat kar ke khush ho rahe the, isi beech Ram bhi wahan aata hain aur Neha pe thoda haldi bhi lagwata hain, toh tabhi baki sab Priya ko bhi lagwane ke liye kehte hain, thoda jhijhak ke baad Ram, Priya ko haldi lagwata hain aur Priya smile kar deti hain, toh Ram ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ke Priya ko hua kya hain, woh soch raha tha ke jo ladki kal itni udaas aur gumsum thi aaj woh achaanak itni khush kaise ho gayi, lekin yeh baat sochne ka mauka usse mila nahi aur woh wahaan se chala gaya, ab rasm khatam ho gayi thi toh Priya ne Neha ko le jaake uske kamre me chhod aayi.


Baarat aane me bas ab sirf aadha ghanta hi baki tha, aur ab tak Neha taiyyar nahi huyi thi, Priya, Neha ko madad kar rahi thi taiyyar hone me. Aaj Neha aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lag rahi hain, shaadi ke iss jode ko char chaand lag gayi jab Neha ne usse pehena, with matching jewelleries and make up she was indeed looking like a princess. Neha taiyyar ho gayi hain aur Priya usse dekhe hi jaa rahi thi, aur isi beech uske aankhon se aansoo nikal aye, yeh dekh ke Neha bhi emotional ho gayi and both hugged each other tightly.


Priya ' meri dost aaj kisi princess se kam nahi lag rahi hain, touchwood!, bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho.


Neha blushed and said thanks.


Priya ' kahin Vikram behosh na ho jaye!


Neha ' Priya tum bhi na, achha ab meri chhoro, jao tum bhi taiyyar ho jao, warna der ho jayegi.


Priya ' jaane se pehele kuch maangu tum se?


Neha ' kya?


Priya ' tumhara ek picture le lu, mandap pe toh le nahi paungi, tum beythi rahogi toh ek le lu, plz


Neha ' arrreee yaar plz mat bolo, aur iss me poochnewali kya baat hain, le lo, saying this she gave a pose and Priya clicked her last pic in Amritsar.


Priya ' thank you Neha


Neha ' ufff ho! Priya, ab jao jaake taiyyar ho jao, to tabhi baki ladkiyan aake kehti hain ke baarat aa gaya hain aur jaimala ke liye Neha ko neeche bula rahe hain, hearing this Priya said, tum sab Neha ko leke jao, main aati hoon. Neha goes with them and Priya kept seeing her'''''''.Priya came into her room, locked the door and changed her dress. She had already packed her things and now she was ready to leave. She put the kangaan in the box and kept the letter under it and goes out from her room.


Wahaan neeche jaimala ki rasm chal rahi thi, as usual Rishabh aur baki ladkon ne Neha ko utha rahe the taki Vikram mala na pehna sake but some how he does and same happens with Vikram too. Everyone was cheering for bride and groom and was very happy. Ab jaimala ki rasm ho gayi thi aur shaadi was about to start, Ram ek corner pe khare hoke sab dekh raha tha, he is very happy today as his sister is getting married to his best frnd, to tabhi wahan Krishnaji ati hain aur kehti hain,


Krishnaji ' Ram, Priya kahan reh gayi, jaimala bhi ho gaya, jaa beta zara dekh toh kahin tabiyaat toh kharab nahi huyi uski?


Ram ' maa, aap tension mat lo, main jata hoon, saying this he came to Priya's room, he knocked the door twice, when no response came he pushed the door and found its open, he came inside calling her name but she was no where, toh tabhi Ram ki nazaar table par pari and he found the kangaan box and a letter under it. He took the box and opened the letter. He read the letter,


Mr. Kapoor,

Main jaa rahin hoon. Peechle 10 din me jo kuch bhi hua uss sab ke liye aapko thanks kehna chahti thi. Aap ne meri zindagi me woh khushiyan leke aaye jiske bare me maine sochna hi chor diya tha. Pariwar kya hota hain, rishten kya hoti hain main sab kuch yahan aake jaana, baro ka pyaar aur choto ka respect mujhe yehi aake mili, shayad isi liye log kehte hain dil ka rishta kabhi kabhi khoon ke rishte se bhi bade hote hain. Aaj lagta hain mujhe mera pariwaar mil gaya hain.

Maa ki amanat lauta ke jaa rahi hoon, unko kahiyega ke yeh Kapoor khandaan ki badi bahu ka hain. Neha aur Vikram ko meri taraf se bohot saari shubh kamnaye dijiyega, Rishabh, Natasha ko mera bohot sara pyaar.

Aap par mera koi haq nahi hain par phir bhi keh rahi hoon, aapka pura pariwaar aap se bohot pyaar karta hain, shayad aap ko samajh nahi aaya hain, par maine yeh dekha hain, kabhi unhe koi dukh mat dijiyega, pariwaar ki ehmiyat kya hain yeh main samjhti hoon shayad isi liye maine yeh baat keh di. Sab aapko zindagi me settle hona dekhna chahte hain, unn logon ki chahat ka maan rakhne ki koshish karna.

Jo pyaar aur izzat mujhe yahan mila hain usko main khona nahi chahti thi, inn sab ke samne main sachhai bol nahi pati, unn logon ko main hurt nahi kar sakti thi, isi liye yeh khhat chor ke jaa rahi hoon. Haan aur ek baat uss raat jo kuch bhi hua uss me aapko guilt feel karne ki zaarorat nahi hain, agar aage chalke kuch bhi hua toh uski puri responsibility meri hogi.

                                                                     Priya Sharma  


----------------------------FLASHBACK ENDS-------------------------------


Ram took the box and letter and came to his room. He sat on his chair and closed his eyes. He felt the pain of Priya from this letter. Kuch hi der me phero ki rasm shuru honewali hain aur koi bhi aake agar puchhe ke Priya kahan hain toh woh kya jawab dega''''''..yehi sochte sochte woh neeche ata hain toh tabhi Dadi poonchti hain ki Priya kahan hain, toh Ram kehta hain ki usse tez bukhaar aaya hain aur woh soo rahi hain, yeh sunn ke Krishnaji tensed ho jati hain aur kehti hain ke Ram ko usse doctor ke paas le jana chahiye toh Ram kehta hain ke usne medicine de di hain, ab woh rest kar rahi hain aur woh darwaaza band karke aaya hain ta ki koi usse disturb na kare. Hearing this everyone was bit relaxed and headed for the ceremony.


On the other hand Priya came out from Lalaji ki kothi and headed towards railway station. She was sitting on the platform to catch the train, badi mushkil se aaj usne ticket ka intezaam kiya hain Pune jane ke liye, yeh sheher, yeha ke log usse hamesha yaad rahenge, inn sab ko apne dil me sama ke woh yahan se jaa rahi hain hamesha ke liye, pata nahi zindagi me phir se kabhi yahaan ayegi ke nahi, the train entered the platform and Priya headed to her coach, before entering in the train, for last time she turned to see the city though its not visible still she saw aur ek dard uske dil me ubhar aaya, maano jaise kuch azeez cheez zindagi se chhuth jaa rahi ho. She closed her eyes and get into her coach.


Udhaar Neha aur Vikram shaadi ke pavitra rishton me bandh gaye hain, aur apne bado se ashirwaad le rahe the, Ram khada hua dekh raha tha, toh jab Neha aur Vikram uske paas aaye toh pehele Ram aur Neha dono ek dusre ke gale mil gaye aur Neha ro pari usse console karte karte Ram ne Vikram ko ek tight hug diya aur kahan samhal lena. Vikram smiled and said through his eyes that he will''''''..bidaai ka samay ho raha tha toh sab emotional ho gaye, Natasha ne Neha ko hug karke bohot royi, Krishnaji was also having tears in her eyes, Rishkabh ne Neha ko hug karke kahan, di we will miss you, Dadi ko Neha ne samhala aur Ram ne Neha ke taang kheenche, Ajitnath aur Emma ne apna sara blessings usse de diya, ab sab Neha ko vidaa kar ke hall me beyth gaye, aaj raat ke liye sab thak gaye the, toh Ram ne kahan ke sab jaa ke aaram kar le kyunki kal Neha pag phere ke liye aayegi toh uska bhi intezaam karna parega and with that he said to krishnaji that he will take care of Priya. Now everyone retires to their room and Ram came in his room. He took out the letter and box from his sherwani's pocket and kept on the table. He opened the box and found Priya has kept the kangaan very neatly. Ram came and sit on his chair and kept his eyes closed, sochte sochte kab aankh lag gayi pata hi nahi chala, he slept on the chair.

 


Neha ' tune aise kaise usse jane diya fatty, woh aise kaise chali gayi, tune kuch kahan toh nahi usse?


Ram was looking elsewhere, didn't say a word.


Vikram ' Neha, ab bas bhi karo, jo ho gaya so ho gaya, ab hume aage ki sochni hogi


Neha ' kya aage ki sochenge, ussne mere bhai ka dil toda hain, maa aur dadi ke pyaar ka yeh sila diya usne, main Priya ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi.


Hota yun hain ki next day jab Neha pagphere ki rasm ke liye aayi tabhi Ram ne sab ke samne Priya ki sachhai bata diya lekin pura nahi aadha sachh. Usne yeh kahaan ki Priya, Ram se shaadi nahi karna chahti hain isi liye woh chali gayi hain ek khat chhorke, aur Ram ne sab ko khat bhi dikhaya jo usne likha tha kyunki Ram ko aur koi excuse nahi sooja, woh directly apne gharwalon se yeh baat keh nahi paata toh usne yehi socha aur bol diya. Sab ko laga Priya, Ram ko chhor ke chali gayi aur Ram toot gaya hain toh sab koi Ram ko cheer up karne me lage hain.


Krishnaji kangaan ka box haathon me leke beythi huyi hain, maano jaise unhe vishwaas hi nahi ho raha hain ki Priya aise kar sakti hain.


Dadi ' main samajh sakti hain tujh pe kya beet rahi hain beta, par tu chhinta mat kar


Krishnaji ' kitne aarmaan the mere ke iss ghar ki badi bahu aayegi, mere Ram ki patni, mujhe laga tha Priya, Ram ko samhal legi, maine uss me woh kabiliyat dekhi thi, uske aankhon me maine mere bte ke liye pyaar dekha tha, par main kitni galat thi.


Ram ne tabhi kahan, maa mujhe shaadi nahi karni hain, main aise hi theek hoon, mujhe kisi ki zaarorat nahi hain, aap sab log hain na mere saath, bas mujhe koi nahi chahiye.


Listening to this both Dadi and Krishnaji shed tears and Neha came to him and started pacifying him by patting his back. Everyone felt the pain in Ram's voice, but Vikram was closely watching Ram but didn't say anything.

 

I think the flashback and present portion is now clear by my readers, if still anyone have confusion plz revert me back, I will made that clear, if u like the update, do hit the "LIKE" button and plz leave your comments.



Edited by jineejiggs - 27 July 2013 at 3:55am

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Awesome 
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uhuhu raya aag hogaya uhuh chali gayi wowoo

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poor priya she love ram 
but ram don't love her
she left the kothi now wat next
continue soon wating
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this was indeed a splendid and beautiful update.. i just love how maturely priya handle everything even after facing the biggest emotional hurdle.. the feeling of losing something was described more then perfectly.. and stupid ram this whole thing is still a drama for him, idiot.. hope vikram find the truth soon.. the story has reached on such a level that now waiting for the next update is just impossible but am eagerly and madly waiting for the next.. update very very very soon..

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Nicely written...
M Glad that nevik got married and at d same time sad for raya
raya separated...
Ram is such a lier Angry
he made everyone believe that priya is d culprit
vikram knows ram very well...
Fb letter part was very emotional...
Update soon
Hope ram realises his love

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madam ki mud achi hai kya dono update ..comments later Wink

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