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RaYa FF - mann ki lagan...ishq hain tumse, updt 139 (Page 12)

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...Ram ne zid karke apni dadi ko Mumbai leke aya gaya, kyun ki Ram apne dada dadi ka bohot ladla tha, aaj bhi woh dadi ki baat ko taal nahi sakta hain, isi liye yeh saara natak rachaya hain.



Well Ram and Priya are now in Amritsar aur woh dono haveli pahaunchne hi wale hain, toh zara dekha jaye haveli me kya scene chal rahe hain.


Lalaji di kothi, yehi naam se mashoor hain Lala Suendranath ki haveli, jo kisi palace se kam nahi hain. Typical haveli with big courtyard and plush garden. Toh isi haveli ko aaj sajaya jaa raha hain, aaj se 10 din baad iss ghar ki badi beti yani Neha Kapoor ki shaadi hain. Ram and Priya get down from car and entered the haveli. Everyone was waiting for them.


Rishabh – ma, dadi bhai aa gaye hain, he screamed and came runningly and hugged him.


Neha came hurriedly and said, aa gaye, fursat mil gayi aapko, said this teasingly.


Priya was watching this silently. This is the first time she is witnessing such things.


Neha – waise tum akele aye ho, kya?


Ram was still hugging Neha and said, nahi mere saath, saying this he turned his side to find Priya is standing just behind him, he side hugged her and came inside. Priya was startled with his hug but managed to keep her face normal.


Ram – this is Priya, Priya Sharma and Priya, she is Neha, my sister and he is Rishabh, my younger brother.


Neha looked at Priya, in fact she scrutinsed her for while and then said, fatty not bad, am impressed, good choice bro, said this she hugged Priya. Priya felt warmthness in that. By that time, Dadi and Krishnaji also come there. Ram introduced Priya with everyone.


Priya took blessings from dadi and Krishnaji. Dadi is very happy to see Priya. Now all settled on the hall and started to chat.


Ram – choti kahan hain?


Neha – aur kahan uski favourite jagah, bazaar, Vikram ke saath.


Krishnaji – Priya, beta tumhare ghar me kaun kaun hain?


Abhi tak Priya ne kuch nahi bola, actually she was watching the family bonds, specially that of siblings. Itne saalon me yeh pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Toh Krishnaji ke sawaal ne usse thoda chauka diya, woh ek baar Ram ki taraf dekh ke phir boli, jee main akeli rehti hoon, mummy papa 17 saal pehele guzar chuke hain.


Yeh sunn ke sab ko dukh hua, lekin koi kuch bol nahi paya, tabhi dadi boli,


Dadi – puttar jiska koi nahi hota hain uska waheguru hota hain, wohi dhyan rakhhte hain apne bachhon ka


Priya smiled listening to dadi.


Neha – toh tell me Priya, tum kya karti ho?


Priya – main Hotel me kaam karti hoon, as FB cum Banquet Manager.


Next sawaal Neha poonchne hi wali thi ke peeche awaaz ayi, Bhaiii


Ram turned and saw that Natasha is coming to him runningly. Natasha comes and hug him tightly and said, kitni der kardi aap ane me, pata hain aap ko kitna miss kiya.


Ram – kaisi hain tu, aur tera internship kaisa chal raha hain?


Natasha – achha chal raha hain lekin aap nahi the toh mazaa nahi aa raha tha


Rishabh – sachh bhai, jitna mazaa aap ke saath seekhne me hain utna kisi ke saath me nahi hain.


Ram – ok done, chalo baki ka internship mere saath hi hogi.


Vikram – zara idhar bhi gaur farmaiyye saale sahib, hum bhi line me khare hain.


Ram and Vikram laughed and hugged each other.


Vikram – kaisa hain tu? Yeh poonch ke Vikram ne Ram ke kaan me bola, tu  toh Natallie ko lanewala tha, yeh kaun hain?


Ram then again introduced Priya to Natasha and Vikram.


Natasha was very excited but Vikram ko daal me kuch kala laga, he knows Ram in and out and he knows Ram doesn't like Indian girls, aur iss ladki ko dekh ke bhi waisi nahi lag rahi hain toh he thought to ask him but in private.


Now all sat in the hall and chatting. Neha ko Priya bohot achhi lagi hain aur Priya ko bhi Neha achhi lagi. Priya ko thoda darr tha ke yeh Kapoors kaise honge, but she find them very grounded par sabse badi baat hain ki yahan aake usse ghar jaisa feel ho raha hain. She can feel the warmthness in Dadi and Krishnaji's behavior. 


By now it was almost noon so everyone geared up for lunch, toh Krishnaji ne Neha ko ishara kiya aur kahan ki Priya ko apna kamra dikhane ke liye. Ab Haveli is two storied, in the ground floor there are 8 rooms excluding the hall and in the second floor there are 6 rooms with a big covered verandah cum portico and above the second floor it's the terrace. The entire haveli is too big with old architectural structure. The interiors are well furnished. Neha along with Priya came in the second floor. She brought Priya to her room. Priya's room has a good view as it faced the garden. Priya opened the window and let the sun rays peep in her room. Neha was watching her and she said,


Neha – pasand aya room?


Priya turned and gave a sweet smile and said bohot.


Neha – achha suno, ab tum change karlo, if u want u can have shower also, u will get everything in the bathroom, agar kuch chahiye toh bejhijak bol dena.


Priya – jee


Neha came to her and keep her hand on her and said, Priya agar kabhi bhi koi dost ki zaroorat pare toh yaad rakhhna main hoon tumhare saath.


Priya – kya main aapko Neha kehkar bula sakti hoon?


Neha – toh kyat um mujhe aap keh kar bulane wali ho, fatty mujhse thoda hi bada hain, agar usse nahi bulati toh mujhe kyun bulaogi aur waise bhi dosti me koi formalities nahi chalti, saying this she hugged Priya.


After some times they parted and Neha asked Priya to come down jaldi.


On the dinning table, everyone is seated and enjoying their meal. Priya was feeling little awkward sitting right beside Ram but Natasha made her sit. Ab khaane ke waqt baatein nahi hogi yeh toh ho nahi sakta toh aaj sab Priya par tut pare hain, sabko inquisitiveness ho raha hain ki Ram aur Priya kahan mile aur kaise. Yahaan aane se pehle yeh baat Ram aur Rajat ne sochi thi aur Priya ko yeh baat batayi bhi thi. Toh wahi sara jhooth shuru hua.


Rishabh turning to Priya and said, aap bhai ki honewali patni hain toh iss naate aap humare bhabhi hui, toh main aapko bhabhi bula sakta hoon, na?


Priya kuch bole usse pehele hi Ram ne bade conviction ke saath bola, bilkul bula sakta hain saying this he looked at Priya, Priya only smiled at Rishabh.


Rishabh – toh bhabhi yeh bataaiye bhai se aapki mulaqat kaise huin? Aur kahaan


Ab Ram was expecting such questions from his family toh he was ready, he saw everyone is eager to hear the story. Ram was about to start the story when dadi interrupted and said, oye Golu, tu chhup reh, Priya ko bolne dena. Ram closed his mouth and stared at Priya.


Priya – woh actually main aur Mr. Kapoor………………..


Neha – Mr. Kapoor, tum fatty ko Mr. Kapoor keh kar bulati ho?, saying this she laughed and with her Natasha and Rishabh also joined. Dadi and Krishnaji smiled.


Natasha – bhabi lag raha hain aap aapne boss ko bula rahi hain.


Priya was little embarrassed and looked at Ram and said, woh kya hain na actually yeh mere boss……………………Priya couldn't finish her sentence when Ram cuts her in middle and said, actually I have been to her Hotel so many times for business meetings toh she addressed me in that so that's why, hain na Priya?


Priya couldn't have any other option but to say YES


Natasha – wow! yeh toh pura filmy scene hain, hearing this all laughed.


Neha while laughing asked, toh Priya batayo kisne pehele propose kiya?


Ab Priya was feeling really awkward, nahi woh kuch bol paa rahi thi aur nahi Ram ki taraf dekh paa rahi thi, toh iss baar bhi dadi ne rescue kiya, she asked everyone not to tease Priya and the lunch went smooth. Everyone was happy to have Priya as Ram's would be wife, everyone has accepted her.


After the lunch everyone retired to their room. Priya came to her room and started to unpack her things. After finishing it she took out her book from her bag and was about to read when she heard the knock on the door. She asked to come in and with that Neha came in.


On the other hand Ram was in his room and was working in his I pad. While working he was thinking that what will be his family's reaction when they come to know the truth. He was in his two minds, he isn't ready for marriage and at the same time can't hurt his dadi and maa. He was even thinking ke kahin Rajat ka yeh plan flop na ho jaye, but he couldn't think much as he got a call from his client. Udhar Priya ke kamre me Neha aayi hain,


Neha – I hope mai tumhe disturb nahi kar rahi hoon?


Priya – nahi nahi, main toh bas aise hi, beytho


Neha – waise Priya, mujhe thoda ajeeb lag raha hain, don't mind saying but fatty ne tumhe kaise propose kiya, I mean tum itni simple ho, sober ho aur fatty toh……woh mera bhai hain aur main janti hoon woh kaisa hain bas isi liye thoda ajeeb laga, don't mind yaar


Priya just smiled but didn't say anything, ab bolegi kaise jab usse khud nahi pata ke Mr. Kapoor kaise hain, woh soch rahi hain kya musibat hain, Shruthi yeh tune mujhe kahan fasa diya, but she kept her face straight.


Neha in her usual way started blabbering but Priya ko achha lag raha tha, actually yeh sara pura mahol hi uske liye naya hain par kahin na kahin usse yeh warmthness, yeh care achha lag raha tha. Dheere dheere Neha ke saath uska rapport bar raha tha, by the time it was evening, Priya almost Neha ke bare me sab kuch jaan gayi thi, uske saath saath Ram ke bare me bhi aur yeh Kapoor family ke bare bhi, Neha ne toh apni aur Vikram ki love story bhi suna di usko. Priya find her very grounded and straight forward, Neha me woh snobbishness hain hi nahi. Baaton baaton me Neha ne bhi Priya ke bare me jaan liya, uska past aur uska present, bas Ram aur uska relation ke bare me thoda confusion reh gaya but Neha didn't give so much attention to that.


Ab sham ho gayi thi toh Neha ne Priya ko leke neeche hall me chali ayi hain. Shaadiwala ghar hain, toh logon ka ana jana laga hi hain, toh yeh dono jab neeche aayi toh moholle ke kuch buzurg ladies aayi thi, dadi se milne aur Neha ko ashirwaad dene. Neha along with Priya came and seated beside Dadi. Neha greeted everyone and they all gave her the blessings. Ab sab Priya ki taraf dekh ke poonchne lage ke kaun hain yeh?, toh dadi said she is Ram's would be wife. Everyone was very happy and pleased to hear that out. Yahan Amritsar me Ram ko sab bohot chahta hain aur Ram kaafi popular bhi hain, toh zaahir si baat hain uski honewali biwi bohot chahiti hogi sab ke liye. Dadi asked Priya to take blessings from them, while Priya was about to take blessings Neha said something in her ears and Priya followed her. Ram was coming down the stairs when one of the old lady asked him about his well being, Ram came to hall. That lady again said that his would be wife is very pretty and saanskari too, Ram just gave a glance to Priya and saw she was taking the blessings from elders and for brief seconds Ram stared at her, actually Priya was wearing the salwar kameez but she had covered her head with the dupatta and she was looking very beautiful in this attire. Priya felt shy hearing this and she looked up and saw Ram is staring at her which makes her more shy. All the elderly ladies blessed her and she came and sit beside Neha. Ram also came and joined everyone in the hall.


After the dinner, Priya came to her room and stand in front of the window. Bachhpan se hi Priya ko raat ki andhero me aasmaan ki taraf dekhna bohot pasand hain, kabhi tare ginti hain toh kabhi apne mann se baatein karti hain unko niharte huye, aaj bhi woh apne mann se baatein hi kar rahi thi. Aaj sham ko jo hua uske baad woh thoda emotional ho gayi hain, bado ka ashirwaad aur pyaar kya hota hain usse kabhi pata hi nahi chala, ghar me mummy papa ke ilaava koi nahi tha, dada dadi, nana nani ka pyaar kya hota hain woh yeh jaan hi nahi payi par aaj jab woh Ram ki dadi se mili usse bohot achha laga, phir sham ko itne saare buzurg usse ashirwaad diya, she was feeling blessed. Kehte hain buzurgo ki ashirwaad bohot shubh hoti hain, par uska dil iss baat pe khatak raha hain ki yeh jo saare cheez ho raha hain yeh sab natak hain, jab yeh baat inn logon ko pata chalegi toh inn sab ko bohot dukh pauhchhega. Kitne ache hain Mr. Kapoor ke gharwalen aur woh inn sabko…………Priya couldn't think anymore, closed the window, changed and come to the bed.


Next day in the morning while having breakfast Vikram came in and joined.


Natasha – kya jiju, ab toh sirf 9 days bachhe hain aap woh bhi Di ko dekhe ya mile bagair reh nahi pa rahe ho? Saying this she giggled.


Neha gave a glaring look to Natasha.


Krishnaji – bas kar chhoti, ab Vikram tera jiju hone wala hain, ab uska taang kheechna chhod.


Dadi – waise chhoti ne baat toh bilkul sahi ki hain, saying this she laughed and with her everyone including Vikram.


Vikram – ab bhai tumhe kya pata hain judai kya hoti hain, pehele pyaar karo phir pata chalega, kyun Ram?


Hearing this Ram coughed as he sipped in his juice.


Actually Vikram wanted to have words with him, he is smelling something different in this Ram-Priya matter, toh tabhi aaj subah subah he came here.


Ram composed himself and smiled. He understood what Vikram is pointing at and thought of having words with him.


After the breakfast got over Neha said to Krishnaji that she needs to go to the shop for the trial of her wedding dress.


Krishnaji – theek hain chali jaa par chhoti ko bhi le ja.


Neha – ma main Priya ko leke chali jaungi, saying this she turned to Priya and said, hope u won't have a problem.


Priya smiled and said no


Krishnaji – theek hain tum dono chali jao, par samhalke, aur jaldi wapas ana.


Neha – ma main gadi leke nahi jaungi, hum log rickshaw me jayenge.


Krishnaji smiled and said, theek hain chali jana.


Now Priya and Neha are in the shopping mall. Pura raasta Priya aur Neha gappe ladate huye aaye hain, ek toh Amritsar ki gaaliyan aur upar se rickshaw me, Neha ko yeh ride bohot pasand aaya hain, she was excited like a small kid, actually itni freedom Mumbai me nahi milti hain toh yahan aake woh iss freedom ko enjoy karna chahti hain aur iss me Priya uska saath de rahi hain, haala ki Priya ko yeh sab adat hain, woh Pune me bhi aisi hi rehti hain, simple. Ab jahan Neha ho wahan chhup rehene ka toh sawaal hi nahi hota hain toh Priya ne bhi Neha ke saath jud gayi, actually thodi hi samay ke andar yeh dono ek dusre ke kaafi close ho gaye hain, bhale hi inn dono ki age me difference kyun na ho.


Priya – ek baat puchhu tumse, agar tum bura na mano toh?


Neha – bura kyun manungi, puchho?


Priya – tumne apna shaadi ka joda yahan se khareed ne wali ho, mera matlab hain ki…….I mean, wahan Mumbai me toh bohot saare malls hain aur upar se u r the head of Kapoor Garments, toh…………….


Neha smiled and said, sab ko yehi lagta hain par actually baat yeh hain ki maine apne liye joda select kar liya tha aur leke bhi aayi hoon par yahan aake maine iss shop me yeh dress dekhi toh mujhe instant pasand aayi toh maine socha kyun na ise bhi le lu, mehendi aur sangeet me yeh pehen lungi.


Yehi baat karte karte yeh dono mall pohonch gaye aur shop par bhi. It is a designer shop and branded one. Toh jab Neha pohonchhi wahan par the shop owner Mrs. Khurana was there. She came and exchanged greet with Neha. Neha Kapoor, the head of Kapoor Garments, sab jante hain usse, toh Mrs. Khurana was very happy to see her there. She personally took the initiative and the alter part was done quickly and finally jab Neha trial dene ke liye bahaar ayi she was looking stunning. The lehenga is very pretty with heavy zari and motifs embossed in it. The choli is in different colour but the combination looks vibrant. Neha was indeed looking very beautiful. Neha ne ishaaro me Priya se poocha and Priya signaled her in affirmation. Neha become happy and went to change.  While Neha was changing, Priya was just looking at the shop and come to a section where sarees were being laid for display, she was looking at when she felt someone tapped her shoulder, she turned and saw Neha was standing.


Neha – agar pasand hain toh le lo


Priya denied and said that she was just looking at them, nothing interesting.


Neha – r you sure, waise collection achhi hain aur yeh wali tumpe bohot jachhegi, saying this pointed out a tomato coloured red saree with silver border, indeed the saree was pretty.


Priya said, no actually I was just looking at them, waise bhi mujhe saree pehnna nahi ata, saying this she kept her face down.


Neha tabhi bolti hain, its not big deal dear, main sikha dungi, and no more argument am going to pack this for you.


Priya – aree Neha suno toh mujhe sach me nahi khareed ni hain, main saree pehenti bhi nahi hoon, khamakha…………………..


Neha – nahi pehenti ho toh iska matlab kya zindagi me kabhi nahi pehenogi, waise isse tum mere sangeet me pehnna, bas ab koi aur behes nahi, am going to gift u this.


Neha ne Priya ki ek nahi suni aur woh saree pack karwaliya, with that her dress. Ab yeh dono bahaar aye aur ghar jaane ke liye rickshaw ki taraf jaa hi rahe the toh Priya ko kahan se jalebi ki khushboo aayi woh idhar udhar turn karti rahi and finally usse jalebi ki dukaan mil gayi, she said to Neha that she loves to eat jalebi and practically dragged Neha to the shop. Ab jalebi Amritsar ki speciality bhi hain aur uss dukaan ki khaas baat yeh hain ki wahan ki jalebiyaan bohot bade bade hote hain toh Priya aapne aap ko samhal nahi payi aur le aayi apne aur Neha ke liye ek ek. Jalebi bohot garam thi aur upar se it was dipped fully in chasni toh khaate waqt haath se raas tapak raha tha. Neha and Priya relished their jalebis and had second helping.


Neha – pata hain dadi aur Ram dono ko jalebi bohot pasand hain


Priya – toh main thoda gharwalon ke liye bhi pack kar leti hoon.


Neha was watching Priya, she was so excited for jalebi, she is really very sweet, very simple. She was thinking kya Priya ko pata hain fatty ka past and his behavior, uska itne saare ladkiyon ke saath rehna, she only wished his brother and Priya to be happy. Yehi sochte sochte Priya aur Neha dono phir se raaste pe aa gaye and they took the rickshaw and come back.


When Priya and Neha entered they saw Krishnaji and Dadi were seating in the hall.


Krishnaji – aa gaye tum dono, Neha tera trial hua?, zara dikha toh dress?


Dadi – shaadi ki ab sirf 9 days baki hain aur tu abhi bhi dress khareed rahi hain, hey waheguru, iss ladki ka kya hoga?


Neha came and hugged tightly and said, zindagi me shaadi ek hi baar hoti hain toh itna haq toh banta hain na mera.


Dadi – achha chal ab dikha zara kya layi hain


Neha – zaaroor dikhayungi pehele thoda mooh toh meetha ho jaye, dadi pata hain aaj aap ki pote hi honewali bahu aap ke jalebiyan layi hain.


Priya felt awkward hearing 'pote ki honewali bahu', she looked elsewhere.


Dadi – arrre waah! Tujhe kaise pata puttar mujhe jalebiyan pasand hain?


Neha – sirf aap ko nahi dadi, isse bhi bohot pasand hain, mujhe kheench ke le gayi Chunni halwayi ke dukan pe, khud khayi, saath me mujhe bhi khilaya aura ate waqt pack karke bhi le aayi.


Dadi – Chunni halwayi ka! arre waah!, woh toh mera mann pasand halwayi hain, tune mera dil khush kar diya beta, jeete reh.


Krishnaji – Priya, beeji ko jalebi bohot pasand hain, jao beeji ko paros do.


Priya went to kitchen to bring the plate. In the mean time Neha was telling both of them how Priya was excited about the jalebi aur kaise woh bachhen ki tarah khaa rahi thi, Neha was telling them about her innocence and child like attitude.


Krishnaji hearing this said, beeji mujhe sach me ajeeb lag raha hain ki Ram ne aisi ladki pasand ki hain, itni samajhdaar aur shaant swabhav ki ladki Ram ke saath kaise rahegi, mera beta toh………………….


Dadi – Krishna, Ram bhi utna hi achha hain, apne pariwaar se woh bohot pyaar karta hain, tune dekha hain na, kaise woh sab kuch samhal liya tha Amar ke baad, sab ka kitna khayal rakhhta hain, manti hoon thoda zyada ziddi hain aur gussewala hain, par dil ka bada saaf hain………………….


Krishnaji – par beeji uska woh shaadi na karne ki zid aur apni zindagi apne hisaab se chalna, kahin inn sab ke beech Priya ko taqleef na ho, bin maa baap ki bachhi hain, kahin Ram ne usse agar hurt kar diya toh…………………


Dadi – kuch nahi hoga Priya ko, main janti hoon mere pote nu, woh aisa kuch nahi karega jisse Priya ko taqleef ya dukh pohnchhe, aur mujhe Priya par bhi vishwaas hain, wohi hain jo Ram ko samhal sakti hain, tu dekhna main keh riya si, Priya nu iss ghar vich aur mere Ram ke zindagi vich khushiyan hi khushiyan le aavangi.


Krishnaji said, rab kare aisa hi ho.


Ab Priya kitchen se bahar aake yeh sab sunn rahi thi, aur usko bohot bura lag raha tha, ek galati ka ehsaas ho raha tha, yeh log itne ache hain, kitna soch rahe hain uss ke bare me aur woh inn sabko dhoka de rahi thi, she sighed and came with the plate.


Dadi – ja puttar tu Ram ko yeh plate de aa, usse bhi bohot pasand hain.


Neha teasingly said, ha ha jao Priya, hum tumhe disturb nahi karenge, take your time.


Hearing this Priya felt really shy, she took the plate and came to Ram's room. Ram was on his phone when Priya came to the room. She knocked the door. Ram saw her and ended his conversation. Priya entered with the plate and said, woh dadi ne kahan tha aapko jalebi bohot pasand hain toh unhone bheja aap ke liye, saying this she kept the plate on the table and added, garam hain, samhal ke khaiyega.


Ram looked at her and found simplicity in her. Ram ko Priya kaafi alag lag rahi hain, actually jis tarah ki ladki ke saath Ram rehta hain, Priya waisi bilkul nahi hain, thodi alag hain, aur yehi alag cheez Ram ko Priya ki taraf attract bhi kar rahi hain aur confuse bhi, waise bhi Ram ka manna hain ki koi bhi Indian ladki is not his cup of coffee.


Ram took the plate and start eating the jalebi, he was relishing to its fullest, Priya was standing there and was watching him, koi nahi kahega yeh scene dekh ke, ke yeh Ram Kapoor hain, the business tycoon, Kapoor Industries ki maalik. Priya smiled looking at him. Toh tabhi Ram ne poocha,


Ram – Priya, I hope u r comfortable in my house, koi problem toh nahi hain?


Priya – I am fine Mr. Kapoor.


Ram – thanks Priya to help me in this, saying this Ram bite a big chunk of jalebi and due to its hotness he started to panick and because of that some amount of chashni fall on his T-shirt. Ram saw this and uttered a sh**t and started to wipe that when Priya asked him not to wipe that with his hand, instead she searched for some cotton and soaked the cotton in water and came closer to him and started to wipe it. Now Priya is standing very close to Ram. While Priya was cleaning, Ram suddenly clutch her waist and pull towards him, Priya baffled with his action and before she could say, Ram signaled her not to say anything as Neha is standing close to the door. Hua yun hain ki Neha, Priya ko bulane aa rahi thi and she saw Priya and Ram standing close and Ram took the opportunity of this situation. Ab Neha ne yeh dekh liya hain and she hides herself behind the pillar but she can hear them out. Ram on the other hand pulled Priya really close to him, this led Priya very uncomfortable. She can feel Ram's right hand on her waist.


Ram – tum yahan kya aa gayi ho, tum toh meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi ho?, pata hain main tumhe kitna miss kar raha tha.


Priya didn't utter a single word, she kept looking other side. Ram was still eating his jalebi and relishing that.


Ram – hmmm, this jalebis are too gud, tumne khaya hain?, chalo main tumhe khilata hoon, saying this he put a piece in Priya's mouth, Priya had no choice left but to eat from his hand. Priya, even can't move as Ram's grip on her was quite tight. Ram signaled her to say something.


Priya looked at him and said, Mr. Kapoor, ab chhodiye mujhe, koi aa jayega, toh kya sochega.


Ram could feel her uneasiness but he wanted to continue his drama as Neha was still there, so he said


Ram – kya sochega? yehi sochega ke inn dono ko bhi romance karne dena chahiye akhir pati patni jo honewale hain, haq bannta hain, bilkul, saying this he leaned forward to kiss her but Neha came out from her hide and said in her usual tone


Neha – kya kar raha hain fatty, kuch toh sharam kar.


Ram after seeing Neha coming, left Priya, and said, tu yahan kya kar rahi hain?


Neha – main Priya ko bulane aayi thi, par yahan toh kuch aur hi chal raha tha, Priya dadi ne tumhe jalebi dene bheji thi, romance karne nahi………….


Ram – kyun nahi, meri honewali biwi hain uske saath main kya romance bhi nahi kar sakta?


Neha – oyyye! Kuch toh sharam kar, saying this she turned to Priya and again said, isse toh sharam hain nahi par tum bhi iske saath Priya?


Ab Priya ko bohot bura lag raha tha, ek toh usne kuch kiya bhi nahi aur upar se Mr. Kapoor ki aisi behavior, usse sab kuch bada ajeeb lag raha tha, Priya kuch bolne hi jaa rahi thi ke tabhi Neha ne usse hug kiya aur boli,


Neha – main mazaak kar rahi thi yaar, am so happy for both of you, bas tum dono aise hi raho, ek dusre me khoye huye.


Hearing this Priya felt really awkward. Toh tabhi Neha kehti hain, par abhi aur kuch nahi, abhi chalo, dragging Priya, dadi neeche bula rahi hain, saying this she dragged Priya. Priya turned and saw Ram is staring at her, Priya sirf ek jhalak Ram ko dekh payi lekin uski aankhen kuch aur hi bayaan kar rahi thi, she could see something in Ram's eyes.




sorry guys yeh update kuch zyada hi long ho gaya, I hope u ppl don't mind, mujhe laga ke story ko aage badane ke liye itna update toh dena hi chahiye, if u all like it then plz hit the "LIKE" button and do comment, whatever good or bad, I will wait for the comments

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it was beautifully written
u are unfolding the story nicelySmile
i hv read it b4 ur pm reached meLOL
thanks for the pm

after reading ur update iam also craving for jalebi, its my fav sweetConfused
mujhe abhi chahiye par koi lane wale nhi ghar pe
dukhti rag pe hath rakh diaLOL


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2ndSmile
wonderful update
different story and I like it.
jalebi scene is relly wonderful. when he feeds herEmbarrassed
I can imagine how priya feels. but I enjoyed a lot.
I have a feeling ki Priya will fall in love before leaving, and it will hurts her.Ouch
continue soon and thanks for PM


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res third LOL


awesome updt dear Tongue

u have described the place the relation
so beautifully
felt like am seeing them
aur vikky ko doubt agaya LOL
dekhenge pehenchaan payega
ya nahi Confused
thanks for pm
aur mujhe bhi chahiye jeelebhi
main tho 3 position pai hoo
tho sweet tho bantha hain Wink
cont soon dear

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Vikram is doubting ramShocked things are getting more interesting 
Waiting for more

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Omg mouth watering jalebii.. The way u described it.. Mujhey bhi khani hai

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Too good...and I'm happy it is long...still felt bad it ended...

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Originally posted by peeyara

it was beautifully written
u are unfolding the story nicelySmile
i hv read it b4 ur pm reached meLOL
thanks for the pm

after reading ur update iam also craving for jalebi, its my fav sweetConfused
mujhe abhi chahiye par koi lane wale nhi ghar pe
dukhti rag pe hath rakh diaLOL




chalo maine tumhare liye bhhej di, ENJOY

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