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hello everyone, I am here with my new FF on RaYa, I am still skeptical about the post. If you all do find this FF uninteresting plz do let me know, I will the then stop posting it.

one more thing, yeh FF thoda flashback aur present time mila ke hain, jo aap sabko padte waqt pata chal jayega, I hope aap ko yeh concept achha lage, so here I present




mann ki lagan...ishq hain tumse

 



Pyaar ek khoobsurat ehsas hain jise shabdon me dhala nahi ja sakta, usse sirf mehsoos kiya jata hain. Kehte hain duniya me pyaar se badkar koi cheez nahi, yeh amar hain, ajar hain, iska vinash nahi hota hain, bhale hi insaan chale jate ho par unka pyaar hamesha reh jata hain, shayad isi liye log aaj bhi Romeo-Juliet, Heer-Ranjha, Shirin-Farhad ko yaad karte hain, khair yeh toh huye characters ke naam jo kahaaniyon me amar ho gaye hain, real life me bhi kai naam hain, itihaas ke panno par bhi kai naam hain jinhe aaj bhi log yaad karte hain, Prithviraj-Sanyukta, Jodha-Akbar, Baz Bahadur-Rani Roopmati, Baji Rao-Mastani.


Main yahan characters ya itihaas ke panno se naam ginwane ke liye nahi aayi hoon, main sirf ek simple si love story kehne beythi hoon jo hamare aas paas ki hi hain, humare beech me hi ho rahe hain, do bohot aam insaan ki khaas kahaani, jo aam hoke bhi bohot khaas hain.


Kehte hain dil ki awaaz uss tak pohonch hi jati hain jahan usse jana hain, woh apni maanzil dhoond hi leti hain. Duniya kehti hain ishq chhupaye nahi chhupta, shayad isi liye har bar dil ki baat zubaan pe aake ruk jati hain?, dil uski ek ahat pe jhoom uthta hain, bechain ho jata usse dekhne ke liye. Yeh hain dariya prem ka iski ulti dhaar jo ubhra woh doob gaya aur jo dooba so paar.


Yeh story hain Ram Kapoor aur Priya Sharma ki, inn dono ke pyaar ki, inn dono ki aankahi kahaani, jise pyaar ne ek alag hi rang me rang diya. Do bilkul alag insaan ki ek bohot pyaari si kahaani.

 

 

 

 Mr. Kapoor,

Main jaa rahin hoon. Peechle 10 din me jo kuch bhi hua uss sab ke liye aapko thanks kehna chahti thi. Aap ne meri zindagi me woh khushiyan leke aaye jiske bare me maine sochna hi chor diya tha. Pariwar kya hota hain, rishten kya hoti hain main sab kuch yahan aake jaana, baro ka pyaar aur choto ka respect mujhe yehi aake mili, shayad isi liye log kehte hain dil ka rishta kabhi kabhi khoon ke rishte se bhi bade hote hain. Aaj lagta hain mujhe mera pariwaar mil gaya hain.

Maa ki amanat lauta ke jaa rahi hoon, unko kahiyega ke yeh Kapoor khandaan ki badi bahu ka hain. Neha aur Vikram ko meri taraf se bohot saari shubh kamnaye dijiyega, Rishabh, Natasha ko mera bohot sara pyaar.

Aap par mera koi haq nahi hain par phir bhi keh rahi hoon, aapka pura pariwaar aap se bohot pyaar karta hain, shayad aap ko samajh nahi aaya hain, par maine yeh dekha hain, kabhi unhe koi dukh mat dijiyega, pariwaar ki ehmiyat kya hain yeh main samjhti hoon shayad isi liye maine yeh baat keh di. Sab aapko zindagi me settle hona dekhna chahte hain, un logon ki chahat ka maan rakhne ki koshish karna.

Jo pyaar aur izzat mujhe yahan mila hain usko main khona nahi chahti thi, inn sab ke samne main sachhai bol nahi pati, unn logon ko main hurt nahi kar sakti thi, isi liye yeh khat chor ke jaa rahi hoon. Haan aur ek baat uss raat jo kuch bhi hua uss me aapko guilt feel karne ki zaarorat nahi hain, agar aage chalke kuch bhi hua toh uski puri responsibility meri hogi.

                                                                                                            Priya Sharma  

 


Aaj Kapoor khaandaan ki badi beti yani Neha ki shaadi hain Vikram Shergill ke saath. Amritsar ki Kapoor kothi aaj kisi dulhan se kam saja hua nahi hain, yeh Kapoors ki pushtayni haveli hain jo ki Lalaji ki kothi ke naam se mashoor hain. Lala Surendranath Kapoor, jo Lahore se Amritsar aye the partition ke dauran yeh kothi banwayi thi. Unka beta Lala Amarnath Kapoor yehi se apna karobar shuru kiya tha. Amaranth aur Krishna Kapoor ke bade bete Ram Kapoor, the head honcho of Kapoor Industries is a BIG name in business world. Lalaji ke 2 bete aur 2 betiyaan hain. Bada Ram Kapoor jo Kapoor industries ko samhalta hain, Ram se sirf 2 and half yrs chhoti hain Neha, who is the head of the Kapoors garment section. Rishabh and Natasha are also in Kapoor industries but working as intern. Vikram Shergill, son of Col. Abhiraj Shergill is also in the Indian Army as Major. He is a doctor by profession. Surendranath and Abhiraj were close friends, infact both wanted their child to get married and that what happened. Vikram was close friend of Ram and their neighbor too. Neha aur Vikram ki love story bohot purani hain and both the families are very happy with their union. Dadi, Jasmeet Kaur is still alive and due to her wish all have gathered in Amritsar. Kapoors are now settled in Mumbai, par dadi ke liye sab Amritsar me aye hain aur yahi se humari kahani shuru hoti hain.

 

Ram was reading the letter and somewhere he could feel the pain in Priya's heart. Aaj Neha ki shaadi hain, everyone is busy in that. Kuch der baad phero ki rasm bhi shuru ho jayenge. Ram came and sat on his chair, closed his eyes.

 

Flashback


Ram ' yaar ab main kya karoon?, ghar me sab ko pata hain ki main aur Natallie are going to be married soon aur ab main sab ko yeh kaise baatayun, upar se Dadi ka order hain ki usse leke ana parega?, how will I manage them yaar, mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain.


Ram Kapoor, the head honcho of Kapoor Industries is 35 years old, a typical Casanova man, loves to spend times with girls but don't want to commit, Natallie is his 9th girl friend. He is very handsome, smart and dashing, an eligible bachelor of the town, all girls are ready to be with him, chahe woh ek raat ke liye hi kyun na ho. He is a dream man of every girl, but he is a commitment phobic, aur isi chalte abhi tak usne shaadi nahi ki par sirf shaadi hi nahi ki, suhaag raat kai bar mana chuka hain. The problem with him is that he is not satisfied with anyone, kuch din rehene ke baad usse aur mazaa nahi ata hain. Krishna Kapoor, his mother knows his son and that is why he wants him to settle down but he isn't interested in it. Ram Kapoor ke girl friends ke list me abhi tak ek bhi Indian nahi hain, usse lagta hain Indian girls are too much rigid and sentimental. He is a diplomatic businessman, rude and shrewd but when comes to his family he is the most adorable and lovable son and brother. Neha is his best friend, though younger to him she knows her fatty well. Yes Neha calls him fatty as Ram was a Golu molu one in his childhood. The other person who Ram respects a lot is his dadi. Lalaji died some years ago when Rishabh and Natasha both were in college. Ram looked after them as his own child. He is a big brother but at the same time the most precious one of the family, actually he is the apple of eyes of everyone. Vikram who happens to be his best buddy knows him in and out. He tried him to settle in his life but Ram is simply not interested. Anyways ab problem yeh hain ki Neha ki shaadi hain aur Dadi ne order diya hain ki Ram apne would be wife ke saath Amritsar ayega. Ram has already left Natallie and he doesn't know what to do now so he came to his business partner Rajat Singhania's office. Rajat and Ram has been in collaboration for last 5 years. They are actually in Hotel industry and at present their Hotel Silver Arcade which is located in Pune is the biggest and giant in the town.  


Ram, Rajat ke chamber me beyth ke baat kar raha tha.


Rajat ' dekh Ram, ab bas kar, aur kitne din tu aise hi rehga?, kabhi na kabhi toh settle karna parega na, toh this is high time.


Ram ' dekh Rajat, am not interested in settling down, I don't believe in the institution of marriage, jab shadi ke baad bhi wahi karna hain toh shadi kyun karu, am enjoying my life.


Rajat ' aaj tujhe meri baat samajh nahi aa raha hain par jis din tujhe pyaar hoga uss din'''''''..


Ram ' ohhh!, hold on yaar, pyaar aur mujhe?, tu janta hain main pyaar me believe nahi karta, its nothing but a mere attraction, pyaar wyaar kuch exist nahi karta hain.


Rajat smiled and said, yeh tu iss liye keh raha hain kyun ki abhi tak tujhe tera pyaar nahi mila hain, jis din who mil gayi tab tu samjhega meri baat. I believe sab ke liye koi na koi zaroor bana hain, mujhe hi dekh le Shruthi mere zindagi me kya ayi meri zindagi hi usne badal di, am a happy man, pyaar sab kuch de deta hain zindagi me.


Ram ' mujhe teri koi baat samajh nahi aa raha hain, anyways leave this pyaar crap and solve my problem, give me some idea dude?


Rajat ' ghar me saaf saaf bol de ke tu shaadi nahi karna chahta


Ram ' ha ha very good, aur Dadi mujhe wahi zinda gar de, dekh Rajat main dadi ko hurt nahi karna chahta


Rajat ' aur yeh sab kar sakta hain, tu khud hi soch jab dadi ko teri harkaton ka pata chalega woh kitni hurt hongi, tune socha hain kabhi, aunty kitni hurt hongi?


Ram ' toh main kya karu, main shaadi nahi karna chahta, mujhe apni space apni freedom pyaari hain, aur waise bhi life ek hi baar milti hain toh let me enjoy that


Rajat ' tujhse toh baat karna hi mushkil hain.


Ram smiled.


Ram and Rajat were sitting in Rajat's chamber. Though Ram is Rajat's business partner in this business but he devote less time in this, Ram trust Rajat and that is why he don't interfere much in this business. Both have been friends for more than 8 years. Whenever Ram feel bored in Mumbai he spent some days in this Hotel. Rajat knows everything about Ram's life. As a businessman no one can beat Ram Kapoor, he knows how to handle and what tricks need to play in business.


In the cafeteria of the Hotel Silver Arcade, two young women are engaged in their conversation regarding the menu of the today's brunch.


Ayesha ' tu samajh nahi rahi hain yaar, ab menu me change karna bohot mushkil ho jayega.


Priya ' kuch nahi hoga, maine already sab arrangements kar liya hain, chefs se bhi baat ho gayi hain, they are also ready.


Ayesha ' ek baar phir se soch le, Rajat Sir se ek baar baat kar le


Priya ' maine unn se bhi baat kar li hain, he has given his nod


Ayesha ' ok, then lets proceed with the arrangements.


Ayesha aur Priya both headed towards the kitchen to see how the preparation is going on.


Priya Sharma is 27 year old Hotel Management graduate. She is the FB cum Banquet Manager of this Hotel. She lost her parents 17 years back in a car accident. After her parents demise she spent her life in hostels. She is basically from Pune. After her schooling she did the management in Mumbai and was a topper in her batch. Her parents left a home and some money in bank for her. She lives alone in Pune. Her neighbours Sudhir and Shipra Mishra are her so called local guardian. They have been residing in her house as tenant for past 25 years and treat her as their daughter. Their son Karthik who is 5 years younger to her is almost a sibling for her. Though Mishra's love her like their daughter still she longed for the love of the family. She has a secret dream that one day someone will come and take her to the another world where she will get her family, her own family, though she knows this dream will never come into being. Priya is a head strong girl, but very humbled and grounded, she knows the values of life and respects elders. She believe in the institution of marriage'''''..she joined Silver Arcade just after passing out of the college, has been working for past 4 years. Hard working, dedicated and passionate about her work, besides working here she is a freelance photographer and also spends her time in an NGO. Every Sunday she visits the NGO and give tuitions to those orphaned children. Though she is lonely but still she has a big family of her. She is happy and content in her own world. Her working place is her another family, she is very enthusiast and love to work in group, she shared a good relation with her colleagues but she is only close to her best buddy Ayesha, who is also in her team. Due to her sensitive and cheerful nature everyone in her team including other staff loved her.


Rajat though business partner of Ram but he is also in the administration of this Hotel. An MBA holder Rajat joined his father's business and 8 years ago he ventured in this business along with Ram. This is also one of the reason that Ram is so relaxed with this business. When Priya joined this Hotel, Rajat interviewed her. He saw the potentiality in her and offered her the job, in these 4 years with sheer dedication, perseverance and honesty she reaches her position. In fact Rajat came to know about Priya more from his wife Shruthi who happens to be her best friend in her school days.


While Ram and Rajat were still in their discussion, Priya knocked the door of Rajat's chamber.


Priya ' may I come in Sir!


Rajat ' come in Priya.


Priya entered the chamber and saw Ram sitting there. She knows him, actually the entire world knows him, but Priya knows him as the owner of the Hotel, lekin yehi sole reason nahin hain, Ram aksar iss Hotel me raat guzarta hain toh zahir si baat hain Priya knows that. Priya also wished Ram.


Priya turning to Rajat and said, Sir woh actually aaj brunch ka menu change hua hain toh aapki approval chahiye thi, saying this she forwarded the paper towards him.


Rajat took the paper, read it carefully and then signed it and handed to her.


Rajat ' Priya are u sure this will work it out


Priya ' am sure Sir, it will.


Rajat ' all the best for your exam then, said smilingly


Priya smiled and said thank you Sir.


Ram was watching this, the moment Priya went out he asked,


Ram ' what's going on Rajat?


Rajat ' Ram you remember we talked about some changes in our food section, this is that. Priya came up with a very innovative idea and today we are implementing that.


Ram ' Priya, u mean?...


Rajat ' she is our FB cum Banquet Manager, very efficient and hardworking girl'''''.suddenly something struck to Rajat and he said, Ram, I think we got the solution of our problem.


Ram ' what is it?

 

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part 1 -  page 1
part 2page 8
part 3page 12
part 4 -  page 21
part 5 page 39
part 6 -  page 57
part 7 -  page 79
part 8 -  page 98
part 9 -  page 121
part 10 - page 139


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Edited by jineejiggs - 10 January 2014 at 7:39am

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awesome prologue dear
just simply superb
cont soon
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awsomeee carry on soon

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Hi ,

please continue soon will love to read further . its very catchy . i want to read further. letter made my eyes watery

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superb ...plz continue yar...

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Its awesome dear nd very interesting too..letter part is very touchy Clap
Ram as a casinova...hmmm
Ab ram priya ko amritsar as his wife leke jayega..where she will meet his family nd they will spend time together...i m very eager to know whats next after letter part..
Cont soon plz nd thanx for pm

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beautiful start. loved the letter.
so many characters
Ram a casanova. hmm...don't allow him to play with Priya.
Priya under Ram and Rajat. Ayesha her friend. I don't like it.
please continue...I like it.Smile
 
 

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