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annys Goldie

Joined: 08 July 2012
Posts: 1458

Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Heyy blessy this is really beautiful .. we love people not their body... i really love thiss ...

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LilButterfly003 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 26 August 2009
Posts: 15280

Posted: 30 June 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Aaaw!!! <3

That was so cute and beautiful!!!Embarrassed

Truly loved it!!Heart

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..SunnYaara.. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 July 2012
Posts: 13890

Posted: 04 July 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
it was beautiful os...i loved it soo much...don't blush balloon lol...had tears at end...

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babyhumz IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 March 2007
Posts: 6964

Posted: 04 July 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged

i have to start with that 
i never lie in my reviews and i wont lie her 
im in love 

and im speechless

this!! was beautiful 
you set me on a roller-coaster no joke  

and it was wasnt the storyline that did that to me 
it was emotion you made me sit through 
i LOVED it 
there only a few writers who make me emotional (including preet and shree) and you just joined the group! 

by the way you nearly broke me phone Wink 
i dropped my phone on the table i think 2-3 times when it was a scene i could read.. i had to stop there 

my favourite parts!!!!! ALLL 
lets start from top! 
loved the words you used to describe Khushi's feelings (they were touching)
i could feel her pain and was sooo real... if your writing like this now how great will you be in  few years time Shocked

there best friends Awww (i like this story line!) love that he's there for her to protect her but still teasers her.. every relationship is like that 
Lavanya OMG so evil wanted to separate the two and arnav had a Crush on HER! i knew she was evil the moment i knew he crushed on her 

then the video (i dropped my phone her) that was painful for me to imagine, i think i have seen it in a movie.. was so painful for the girl .. it even reminded me of 'the Cinderella story'  movie similar thing happens there. i was hurting inside here!!! Cry Cry had a tear drop at the end of my eye. 

his question left me speechless, glade she ran off she wouldnt of been able to speak then 
then she ran 

when he said 'i love you'

knew she would belive i understood both of them here!!! thats how great your story is 
if i was in Khushi's shoes i wouldnt of believed it 
and in Arnav's shoes i would be mad too

wait his confession OMG Shocked Shocked Shocked Star Star ClapClap Clap Clap Clap Clap 
a girl he's always loved 
the whole Lavanya thing was to hid his feelings 
the deept of his love how hie hid it 
my favourite line 'princess of my heart'      

then he wins her over this little kisses awww.. she still say no constantly.. then he runs away Angry 

and he pikes her upLOL  awww

but the way it all fixed up 
perfect!!! (more than perfect) 

Amazing story my love 
i really am so Proud of you!!! 
sorry i read it late 
but its shocking that i replied this fast LOL LOL blackmailing works with me Wink 

i love you!!! 
and love this story 
going to share the link with me readers Wink 

it touched my heart!!! 
i cant blame you reader for wanting to kill you if i wrote like you i think my readers would kill me too Wink

Edited by babyhumz - 04 July 2013 at 3:07pm

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Ashavi Goldie

Joined: 31 August 2011
Posts: 1412

Posted: 04 July 2013 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
LOVED THE OS 2 D CORE AND WAS SPEECHLESS FOR SOMETIME bt then decided 2 say as it forced me 2 say that it was truly FANTABULOUS...

 the best part of this OS s
Arnav: look at it'see who is know who is that girl? She is my love. I loved her since we were kids..i fell in love with her when I first met her in aashram. But I decided to be her friend. Because I was scared of her reaction..dont know how she will react..? then another girl entered..i acted like im in love with her just becoz of my friend..i don't want her by any chance to know that im in love with her..because of the fear that she will leve me..

Kushi's eyes filled with tears..she gazed at her reflection

Arnav: did u see her? Her cute..just like a kid..she is my laddoo. Her cheeks are so chubby..when we were kids I used to pull them a lot..and the blush on her face..its not make up..she is a natural beauty..the princess of my heart..but she'she thinks that she is not worth of me..i love her so much..very much'but how should I tell her that her personality doesn't matter..she is always beautiful for me..i need her..but she is asking me to let her go'what should I can I convince her that she is the queen of my heart..

it showed how much Arnav has noticed her both inner and outer beauty and he is ready 2 do anything 2 convince her that HE DESERVES HER...

was crying seeing Khushi's insecurity and pain as i can understand it very well bcoz even i am fat and am always made fun of...Khushi feels that she s ugly and Arnav deserves much better person than her...



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keetha... Senior Member

Joined: 29 May 2010
Posts: 825

Posted: 06 July 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Awesome yar...!!! loved it

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anamnoor Goldie

Joined: 17 June 2012
Posts: 2046

Posted: 07 July 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
its beautifuli have no words to describe it
it made me cry,angry,smile and everything
arnav's confession stole my heart hayeee Day Dreaming Heart
thanks babyhumz for suggesting me dis osHug otherwise i would have miss this beautiful piece

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kavyanjali08 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 March 2013
Posts: 2780

Posted: 07 July 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Awww itz so cute...chubby khushi & handsom arnav ko pyaar huwa n bech mein aa gai witch lavanya...i m happy he made hr feel spl n xpssd his feeling so cutely...u myt write a prt2 of it i wanna c it plz mayb with khushi losing few kgs n arshi getting married with few fb of aftr post-confession how things were n whn dey got married i wud luv 2 c khushi giving a gud payback 2 lavanya plz coz paybacks r bitch i wnt khushi 2 give la 1 plz plz prtty plz w/a cherry on top write a prt2 of it plzzz*w/a puppy face*

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