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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged

 


Today was suppposed to be the happiest day of her life...today was sumthing which she eagerly waited for...today she was going to introduce rey to tauji as hr bf...she was dancing in happiness bt who knew dat d d much awaited day 4 hr  had sumthing which she nvr thought of...A BRK UP..!!

                              she was in search of rey to tell him abt this...on the other side rey who was unaware of all this had sumthin else in mind..he was planing a brk up for taani's betterment...here taani's search finaaly ends after finding rey in the reahersal hall..she was abt to walk inside bt sumthing stopped hr...she heard rey talking to sharon ...

R-Sharon , of late Taani mujhe bahot irritate karne lagi hai...mujhe bhi cahiye ki meri gf carrier driven ho , ambitious ho...bt Taani , kya kya sochti hai woh shaadi barat n all hr stupid dreams...

befor she could hear anything else she ran away...unable to believe hr own ears..wat hr ears jst heard...she was unconsolable...she could nt believe that it was rey who said that all...after crying for hours at night she calls rey to cum to hr room through d window n den d brk up scene...after rey walks away...taani takes hr car n drives to a place...a place which probably luked like a rehersal hall...no one knew abt this place..nt evn swayam..n wen she reaches...

she plays a song

         

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

 Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

 Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan

 

 

Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan

 Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

 Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar  

(she dances greacefully...she was doing contemporary...hr prfct body moves...hr pointed toes...the pain in hr eyes...and d tear droplets falling off hr chocolate brown eyes...rey was stunned to see taani dancing like this'jst like  profesionals'..)

 

 

( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

 Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )' (2)

 Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

 Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

 

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka

 Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka

 Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein

 Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein

 Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai

 Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai

 ( Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

 Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )' (2)

 

Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aanhon Ko

 Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko

 Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishein

 Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein

 (whle dancing rey's words kept on going in hr mind...i wish ki meri gf bhi carier driven ho abitious ho  n all )

 

 

 Kahin Shak Hain Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai

 Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain

 Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

 Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

 Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

 Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

 Ho O O Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

 Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

 Ho O O O Ho O O O

 Na Poocho Dard Bandon Se

 Hansi Kaisi Khushi Kaisi

 Musibat Sar Pe Rehati Hain

 Kabhi Kaisi Kabhi Kaisi

 Ho O O O' Rabba, Rabba Ho O O Ho

 Rabba Ho O O, Ho O Ho Rabba

 

after d dance taani was talking to hrslf

T-  kabhi nhi socha tha ki aap aise honge...aapne kabhi janne ki koshish nhi ki  ki kyu maine aisa kahan ki mujhe carrier n all me koi interest nhi hai...woh isliye kyu ki...me bhi aap sab ki tarah hi ek dancer thi n dance me hi apna carrier banana chahati thi bt  tauji ko dance se sakth nafrat hai...main nhi cahati thi tauji mujhse nafrat karen...main kabhi unke bina apni lyf soch  bhi nhi sakti thi...mere paas koi aur option nhi tha...so mujhe dance chodna pada n jb dance chod diya toh kuch aur karne ka dil hi nhi karta tha...so maine abhi tak socha nhi tha ki kya karungi...n me nhi chahati thi ki sab ko pata chale ki me dancer hun si islye maine aapse jhut kahan ki mujhe carrier n all me interest hi nhi hai...( by this she was weeping bitterly...) bt rey aap...saying so she starts walkng towards the entrance n she is shocked to see rey there

.(yes..rey had followed hr without hr notice...n he was shocked seing taani dancin like a proffesional  n after listening to wat taani said he felt guilty..his heart broke into thousand pieces...he was cursing himself for all that he said n finally he spoke...)

R- T...A...A..N...I.

T- rey mujhe aap se koi  baat nhi karni

R- bt mujhe karni hai...

T- aap mere koi  nhi hote ki me aapki baat manu

R- taani listen i m srry ...i m ( bt taani dosent let him complete)

T- kitna aasan hota hai na dil tod ke srry bolna...

R- NHI HOTA !!! (he den holds hr hand n bangs hr on the wall... )

R- jaana chahati ho ki maine woh sab kyu kahan tha..

(taani was nt in sense to react..so rey continues...)

R- maine yeh isliye kiya tha kyuki me tumhe succesful banana chahata tha...i wanted ki tum strong bano n apne potential ko use karo...N trust me Taani tumse jyada dard mujhe hua tha jab maine woh sab kaha bt tumhare liye me kuch bhi kar sakta hun taani...yeh sab kuch maine sirf aur sirf tumhare liye kiya taani bt sach toh yeh hai ki  I LUV U TAANI'

taani was crying listening to all this...d love rey had for hr melted hr ...he was ready to live without hr jst for hr betterment...thinking all this she hugged rey tightly...I LUV U TOO rey...(n  she thinks ...i promise ki main apna carrier banaungi n apne pairo(legs ) pe khadi ho kar dikhaungi...dance me na sahi bt zarur kar ke dikhaungi...)

 

                             __THE END__

 

so guys how was it...agar bakwaas laga toh srry Ouch as this is my first one n maine isse bohot jaldi jaldi likha tha...Embarrassed

                        PLSS DO CMMENT UR THOUGHTS N FEEL FREE TO POINT OUT MY MISTAKES EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 




Edited by tareyfan - 23 June 2013 at 7:46am

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Wow Nice OS !! Taani as a Dancer but she hid her identity and in the end TaaRey patch-up !!

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged

Originally posted by TaaReyD3_Neha

Wow Nice OS !! Taani as a Dancer but she hid her identity and in the end TaaRey patch-up !!

thnks dear SmileSmile

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged
wow lovely os aishClap...mein ne kabhi yeh show nhi dekha but i like your writing alot.Thumbs Up...catchy dance and songEmbarrassed...loved it to the core amazing yaarHug plz write an os on anya also...Embarrassed
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
superb storyThumbs Up very well written...Embarrassed
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
nice os...Smile
well written..
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged

Originally posted by -meru-

wow lovely os aishClap...mein ne kabhi yeh show nhi dekha but i like your writing alot.Thumbs Up...catchy dance and songEmbarrassed...loved it to the core amazing yaarHug plz write an os on anya also...Embarrassed

thnks meru  4 d luvly comment Hug

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:28am | IP Logged

Originally posted by lavi_taarey

superb storyThumbs Up very well written...Embarrassed

thnks dear Smile

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