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KriYaansh FF#2-Love vs Hatred:Part 28 Page 26

..Rish.. IF-Stunnerz

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^^Credits to Divya.
<font color="#cc3333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Finally with so many late updates , I managed to completed my 1st thread with the success of 22 parts of my story on KriYaansh. Thank you all, so very much ! I just can't thank you much for all that you guys have done for meHugKeep showering your love for me like this , always and forever !Heart</font>

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^^Credits to me.

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^^Credits to Akanksha.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc0000">Part 23 - Page 01</font>
<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Part 24- Page 06</font>
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<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Part 26-Page 16</font>
<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Part 27-Page 20</font>
<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Part 28-Page 26</font>

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Update 23: 


Finally Rey wiped her tears and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead and hugged her again, tight. She felt comfortable near him. It felt so safe near him. Rey tried to release her but she held him tight. Rey had a slight smirk on his face. He moved his hand on her head and made her believe that he will always be there for her, no matter what. In that same position they started walking further, Kria was standing there from a very long time and now her legs were weary and she couldn't walk any further.

She asked Rey to go back home but Rey informed her that he wouldn't go until and unless Kria had something. So they sat on the bike and went further to search for a food stall.


Sitting behind Reyaasnsh and enjoying the breeze on her face, was one of the best moments of Kria. She held him tight and rested her face on his back and Rey had a wide smile on his face. Kria cloed her eyes and felt he moment compeletely, the breeze hitting her face, the feeling of her beong near him made her feel that God had gifted him the best thing in her life and that is Reyaansh himself. That moment was a complete bliss for both of them. They both could have given anything for that time to stay still forever.


In some more time, Reyaansh finally found a food stall where he could finally feed Kria something. He asked Kria to keep sitting on the bike and he went to the food stall to get something but Kria didn't want to leave him even for a second , and so she went with him as well. Rey found a bench nearby and they both sat there for sometime. Rey kept his hand over her hand and ooked towards her and she looked at him as well. She gave a small smile and he smiled back. Rey said,"I will always be ther for you" and Kria smiled again and rested her head on his shoulder. They sat there for some time and then Rey excused himself from Kria to order something for her.


Meanwhile back in the party, Sharon receives a call from the people she sent to harass Kria. She was shocked to know that Rey had almost beaten them to death and saved Kria. She stamped her feet hard on the floor and started thinking that how would she confront him and Kria but at that very moment she couldn't think of anything else and disconnected the call.


Rey returned back with some pakodas and chutney for Kria. Kria saw them and smiled again and asked him that how come he knew that she loves pakodas? Rey just smiled back and said that I know everything about you. Kria took the plate from him and started eating it as if she never tasted food from ages. Rey saw this and started laughing. Kria turned her face towards him and signaled from her face saying what, but Rey said nothing and Kria again started eating them. Rey just continued staring her when he suddenly turned her face towards his, she only made her eyes bigger and Rey went closer to her, even more closer, raised his fingers upto her lips and then wiped off the chutney from there. Kria just smiled back and feeded him the pakodas too.


After having their little meal, they got up to go back. They sat on the bike and started their journey back to Kria's house. On the way, Kria rested on Rey's back and went off to sleep dreaming about nothing but the man of her life, Reyaansh.


After an hour's span, they reached Kria's place, Rey stopped the bike but Kria was still sleeping. He half turned and saw her innocent face sleeping. He caressed her face slightly and she woke up. She saw that they reached and so got off the bike. She waved bye to Rey and Rey got off the bike and waved bye to her and said, "Meet you tomorrow." She walked towards her house and Rey turned back to get on the bike once again. Kria stopped on her way and ran towards Rey and hugged her from back. Rey was surprised by this gesture but was happy too. He smiled and held Kria's hands. Kria hugged him for long and then stepped back, Rey turned and faced her. He caressed her face and kissed on her forehead.


Kria said," I love you a lot, I can never ever imagine my life without you. Today if you wouldn't have been there, maybe I would have died. Thank you for being there for me, always" and a tear drop fell from her eyes. Rey wiped off the tear from her face and hugged her once again and said," I can never ever leave you alone, I am like your shadow who will always be with you." He released Kria and she went back home and Rey went back to his residence.



Sitting in her room , Kria thought about the entire day , how she as anxious to meet Rey, how she wanted to dress up perfectly for his Mr.Perfect, how she felt on not finding him and then how scared she was when she saw those goons but eventually when Rey came to her rescue, she forgot everything else. She even remembered those days when both Rey and Kria used to hate each other and theirentire journey of hatred to love where love always won but she knew that there was someone somewhere who didn't want them to be in love and wanted hatred, but who was that person?! Who? …with this confusion, she slept and called the day off.


Next morning, Rey called up Kria and informed her that he would ome to pick her up as he thought that she is still worried about hat happened the last night but Kria assured him that she is fine but Reyaansh, being the protective boyfriend, refused and was obstinate that he would pick her up and finally Kria had to say a "yes".


Rey got ready in a red t-shirt and a pair of denims whereas Kria wore a red tank top and a white skirt. She was just wearing her shoes when Rey honked his ca horn meaning to call Kria out , and Kria came out running , all messed up with her books,bag,shoes and hair. Rey saw his innocent girl in trouble and readily came out of the car and helped her out. They thn sat inside the car and went to college.


On the way-

 Kria-"Rey, yesterday I was thinking about the yesterday's night…"

 Rey-"Kria don't think about that too hard, those goons could do nothing to my girl"

 Kria-" No, I mean about why did the message came from your phone saying to meet at Meera Road and who did that!"

 Rey-"I know who did that, yes, I know it"

 Kria-"Who?! That I won't tell now, I will tell you the name when the right time       comes."


They soon reached the college and then went to the canteen to meet the rest of their friends. Neha and Vishaka already knew about the last night's incident and they rushed to Kria to ask how she was and Kria smiled assured them that she was perfectly fine. Rey was searching for Sharon but he couldn't fin her anywhere and he finally asked Simmi about it but she herself didn't know about her whereabouts. Rey excused himelf and texted Swayam to meet him immediately in the rehersal hall and he texted the same to Kria as well.


In some time both of them reached there, by this time even Swayam knew what happened the last night, both of them were confused that why did Rey call them so urgently although Kria guessed what it could be.


That was the update , thank you for reading. Please HIT the like button and leave back your valuable comments! Next update will be on 30th June 2013. 

Loads of love,

Rishita Big smile

Edited by ..Rish.. - 23 June 2013 at 7:21am

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Madhu_ArSha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Res :-D. . . .
Unres :-D. . . . . .
Yupiee. . . . . . . . . .
Mai 1st. . .
Dhinchika. .
Dhinchika. . . .
Dhinchika. . . . . .
And cuming 2 d update. .
It was awsome. . . .
Kriyaansh all hugging hugging and chipking chipking. . . .
Bt,i lovd it. . .their promises,unsaid words. .long drive,food stall pe masti. . .and all. . . .
Seriously love the whole lovly-dovly update. .:-D :-D
and at last rey ne kriyam ko rh mein bulaya hai kuch imp baat ke liye. . .
Yupiee. . .toh finaly sharon ki pole khulne wali hai .. . .
Yupie. . .abb bhagwaan sharon ki rakha kare. .hahaha. . . .
M so excitd 4 d nxt update. .
Update d nxt part soon. .

Edited by Madhukumari - 23 June 2013 at 9:17pm

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged

see here I am...

coming to the update...

that was such a cuddly update...

i just loved the ongoing budding relationship b/w KR...

how beautiful and amazing...

the dhaba mein eating was lovely...

and the ay kria clinged.. awww...

ab sharon ki vaat lagegi...

love wins*gong striking*

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
awesome update 
rey s so sweet 
sharon man karta hai khoon kardun uska 
update soon

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Condo for your new thread finally u updated I was lyk w8ing from the ages awsum update I luved it and thanx for the pm

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awesome...Smile.loved kr part... ab sharon toh gaye...thanks 4the pm...

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