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A Najma SS: Imperfection Is Beauty---ON HOLD

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:55am | IP Logged
A Najma SS: Imperfection Is Beauty


So, ever since I have seen Qubool Hai, I have always had a soft corner for Najma aka Tamatar. She is cute, cheerful and faces the troubles that we all can relate to. She is imperfect and yet beautiful which is why I would like write an SS/FF about her. You'll are welcome to join me on this journey and I hope I am able to do her character(which will have certain changes. You'll seeWink!) justice. Big smile

A/N: The characters belong to 4 Lions. I do not intend to hurt any religious sentiments and if I make any mistakes, feel free to tell me. 
This piece of fiction comes from the delusional part of my brain that says I can writeLOL. That does not mean you can copy it. Thanks.

Index:

Chapter 1-First Day Jitters: Page 1
 
Chapter 2-Back To College, Huh?: Page 3
 
Chapter 3- Tall, dark, handsome? Puh-leez!: Page 5
 
Chapter 4-Lying and hiding the truth is not the same thing! Right?: Page 9
 
Chapter 5- Woh... Actually and Winking For The Win!: Page 12
 
Chapter 6-Modern Day Karan-Arjun?: Page 16 


Edited by -Devanshi- - 09 August 2013 at 12:53pm

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Chapter 1: First day jitters

'Beep. Beep. Beep.'

Najma rolled over in her sleep, her hands searching for her mobile but her eyes remained shut, refusing to surrender to her mobile's torture in its attempt to wake her up. She finally found the culprit, hiding under her pillow still making that annoying noise which also happened to be her alarm ringtone.

She peeked through one of her eyes to see the time and gasped! It was already nine o'clock! She had an hour before her first lecture starts!

Late on her first day! What kind of an example would she be setting for her students?

Ms. Najma Ahmed Khan, joining one of the best colleges in Bhopal at the tender age of 22, late on her first day. First impressions thou art a bitch. 

She had a rushed shower, dressed up in her best salwar-kameez in a jiffy, gulped down her a breakfast so quick as if she was playing 'A Minute To Win It', slung over her tote-bag hastily and was about to leave when a voice which she could never ignore and disobey stopped her in her tracks.

"Najma."

Some other day, she would patiently wait for her brother, Asad Ahmed Khan to complete his favorite morning speech--- How A Woman Should Behave Outside The Four Walls Of Her House. She had it etched in her mind and she was so bored of that speech that she had recorded it on her phone and had modified his voice so that his voice sounded squeaky and very funny-- it topped her list of stress-busters. But not today.

"Hi bhaijaan. I mean Good Morning bhaijaan. No, scratch that, Assalum alaykum bhaijaan. I am getting late for my first lecture. Allah hafiz bhaijaan!" Said Najma in such a hurry that it sounded like a tongue twister.

Her feet were moving but she was not moving ahead. Huh? She looked down to see that she was jogging in that one square tile for the past thirty seconds. Thirty seconds? Shit! She didn't have a single second to spare!

"Najma, wait--"

She had lost hope when Zoya, their guest, no, their relative and her best friend saved the day like always.

"Mr. Khan, you owe me one."she said with such smugness that she immediately had his undivided attention. Zoya winked at Najma and told her to leave immediately through her eyes. 

"Exactly, for what Ms. Farooqui?" Asked Asad ready for the new madness that was coming his way in the form of Ms. Zoya Farooqui's antics.

Najma sent a flying kiss her way. She took a last look at the adorable couple and wondered why they had still not confessed to each other about their feelings when everyone around them knew what was going on. She shut the door as quietly as possible after she left.

She was going to miss another epic Khan-Farooqui fight. So much for getting a life and a job.
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This is going to be a light-hearted story with a dash of romance(duhLOL!). AsYa will be there but the focus is going to be on Najma. Hope I made you smile somewhere. Let me know how it was and if I should continue it. 

Appreciation and constructive criticism equally welcome.

Buddy me for PMs.Big smile

Love,
Devanshi.


Edited by -Devanshi- - 24 June 2013 at 1:07am

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
She is indeed cute!
Asad-Najma's relation is so beautiful.
res!Will read your ss later!

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kainat-

She is indeed cute!
Asad-Najma's relation is so beautiful.
res!Will read your ss later!


Thanks!Sleepy I hope you like it!
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
nice.continue soon

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Very nice..I adore namja's character.. Looking forward to a story of her own..
And it will be interesting to see asya thru her eyes 

Do continue :)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sasir

nice.continue soon

Originally posted by ReyaPM

Very nice..I adore namja's character.. Looking forward to a story of her own..
And it will be interesting to see asya thru her eyes 

Do continue :)


Thank you guys! Hug
I am already working on the second chapterBig smile

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Hey,
You are correct in hoping that you made us smile...a full 100watt smile!!!! Najma is indeed endearing and I love her bond with Asad...hope you explore this beautiful relation too...awww AsYA...Their epic fights...this story will be so much fun...and with a dash of romance...I'm eagerly waiting for the next partBig smile

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