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Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

Arshi ff ~" Socha na tha" uptd chapter 4 pg4 5\8

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged

This is my first attempt to write
an Arshi ss I never wrote any ss , ff or os so I reuest all the readers of this
ss to give me their feedback so that I
can write it better



My ss is a continuation of the show in my view what the past of Asr's
parents should be and how arshi solve this mess


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               PROLOGUE


                            


               It had been 4 months from their
s.. now please do have a look on prologue


remarriage
Khushi never in her dreams have thought that this would be her life after
sharing those beautiful moments , his sorrows, his dreams. But now it feels
like she is an stranger for him she is his wife, lives in his house , serves
her daughter in law's duty towards his family , quietly listens taunts from
dadi and mami , faces lustful eyes of Shyam but for whom she is facing all this is no where for her rescue
sometimes she feels that he has forgotten that he has a wife or may be never
considered her as his wife . She feels suffocated in his house.


     Yes his as no one in this house considered
her as a family member nor her sister Payal and
to the most Arnav or Asr.


                             So how did you feel reading Prologue please let me know should I continue this ss your
constructive criticism is warmly welcomed.




Edited by arsneh - 05 August 2013 at 12:52am

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INDEX
chapter 1~ scroll down

chapter 2- page 2


chapter 3 -page 3
chapter 4-page 4

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Edited by arsneh - 07 August 2013 at 5:02pm

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
sounds nice
do continue
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simply brilliant.loved it

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Note: Before you start reading the first chapter of this ff I want u all to know that in this ff that here the past that that destroyed Arnav's family and turned him into ASR is very much different from the show and it will have many layers. Also I wanted to tell u all that Khushi will be directly responsible for it.
                      Now its time to present first chapter
 
                               Chapter 1
 
      A man was sitting  on the bench of the garden his mother has created in hope to find the answers of his questions that are wandering in his mind after the revealation of truth from his dadi that the girl he loved more than his life is the same person whom he hated more anything , that the girl whom he considered  as his angel  who brought happiness in his life is same the girl who was responsible for the destruction of his family , she is the sole reason of his bitter past and miseries .
      After the truth revelation he came here to ask his mother to what to choose and how to act now. He wanted the solace from his mother , he wanted that someone came and wake up him from sleep and the truth will become just a bad dream.
         He is crying bitterly , he is completely broken , he has no strength to act it seems as if now he has given up he don't know what he should do now . What he should be now
A son who will take revenge of her mother's sufferings or a lover who will forget every suffering and forgive her love and be with her. He really don't know what to choose.
          He is thinking how everything has just changed in five hours before five hours he was living in a dreamland where he was going to marry the love of his life his Khushi whom he got after so much of pain and suffering but now they are together and always be happy he was hoping for a happily ever after but no life always have different plans for him it seems as if he didn't deserve to be happy whenever he tries to be happy he was forced to be sad by the life and as always it happened today too. After his dadi told him that Garima is the same woman whom he hated till core and Khushi is the girl that was used by Garima to accomplish her plan.
        He stood up finally  and with determination in his eyes he left for the place where Khushi is waiting for him with the  belief that he will definitely come as  after spending 6 hours in dilemma he  had finally made the decision or say plan.
  Precape: Arshi's marriage with some twist
          So how was the chapter please let me know  what are ur views regarding this chapter and since its  a first attempt of  a science student to write something  I hope u all will help me to be better  in expressing myself.
 



Edited by arsneh - 09 July 2013 at 9:49pm

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is it that tough to comment 222 views and just 2 comments seriously
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i think arnav will marry her for revenge

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sounds very interesting...Continue soon...

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