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Taarey os: My love for you(Rasiya song) (Page 6)

sona_taarey Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
awesome dear thnx for pm

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Super awsome os...i jus luved it to d core.
Viji.Chandran IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
awesome os...
u gave a diff dimension to the most famous rasiya seq of taarey...
it ws just amazing...
perfectly n beautifully written...
pinal_TaaRey Goldie
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
nice superb i loved it thanx to pm me
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
awesome os
2111_shweta IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Awestruck...
My lappy screen is burning...
Writing in first person made it more awesome...

If there had been a course on love making, he would have completed his Ph.D in it by now.
Nice oneLOLLOL

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Awesome story
loved it
it was hot, intense and sensual
 
samiha_taarey Goldie
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
1st of all i m really
sorry-desi-glitters-7di 4 being sooo late ...
ok enough of my melodramaLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL nw vl comment 4 the osWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
di after reading the os i was just lyk
i trully dont hav any wrds 2 praise the os or ur writing skill!!!!!

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when i hav given the dare 2 u i knew tht u r the only person who vl do 100% justice with this bt i never ever thought tht it would be sooo awsome actually it was beyond on awsome
frm the starting till the end i was just awestruck...
di quote nehi karna chahti thi bt kuch lyns mujhe itni achi lagi ki mai quote kiye bina reh nehi pa rahi hu...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I was busy questioning myself how come my awkwardness took leave in the dark alone

If there had been a course on love making, he would have completed his Ph.D in it by now
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I used to wonder how these strong muscles were very careful on not hurting me even though desire and rush passed through his veins which were clearly visible on his eyes.


They were his tools of pleasurizing me, bringing out my inner desires, weapon to kill my awkwardness in front of him...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

wont quote the lyns of passionate part because then have 2 quote the whole part as there wasnt 3-4 lyns bt the whole passionate sequence was decribed brilliantly...
it was damn hot, aggressive & romantic...

"I don't love anyone's company other than you!" he said and kissed my fingers. I had to hold her waist as per choreography,but it never sent any feelings down my spines which I get while holding you!"he kissed my neck softly and I turned to the other way to give him better access..
"I don't love myself the way I love you. I remember you always let it be day or night." I moaned his name biting my lower lips in pleasure. "You are my wife, my life, my breathe,ad my soulmate…" he said caressing my earlobes now. If you ever doubt my love for you, just remember this night…" he said and covered us with our blanket and clicked the button of the night lamp, surrounding both of us with darkness and rest of the night we cherished our love. My frequent moans were the only sound that lasted the rest of the night.

this is the best part fr me...
at the end just wanted 2 say di i m just sooo happy tht i hav given dis dare 2 u & i want 2 thank u frm the bottom of my heart 4 accepting the dare...
undoubtedly this is one of the best os i have ever read in IF...

Totally Awesome


di 4 this awsome os...
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Edited by samiha_taarey - 29 June 2013 at 10:44am

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