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Shanak OS.."Mere Paas bhi ik chand hain.."(PG2) (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:05am | IP Logged

here is second & last partSmile                                        


                                              Part-2

      Someone grabbed her by her waist, she tried to shout once again but before she could , lights  switched on'shocked to see him there'her big black eyes looked more big ''yes, it was him'.her Shantanu'..

     Shocked, surprised, confused or happy she herself doesn't know what she was feeling'she could only say one word ,"Aap?"

     In  reply, he just  said, "Happy Birthday  Khanak!!" & then he hugged her.

   Still confused, she asked  him "Shantanu, aap yaha kab? Kaise ? kyun?"

  He smiled n just said,"I luv you Khanak!" & then kissed her.

 She pushed him back & questioned him, "Aap toh studio jaane wale the?  Aapako toh waha hona  chahiye tha?"

   "Ji  nahi'.main wahi  hun , jaha mujhe hona chahiye''.apani  biwi  ke  paas!! Aur  waise  bhi  maine tumase  jhoot  kaha  tha'na toh meri koi meeting thi aur na hi koi recording'main toh yahi tha'tumhare  liye surprise plan kar raha tha." He said with his naughty smile on his face.

 "Jhoot??  Aapane  mujhase  jhoot bola?  kyun?" she give him angry look.

"kyunki  main  tumhien surprise dena chahata tha'.look here'isn't it looking beautiful?"  he hugged her from back''. There was beautiful set done by lights, heart shaped balloons, white & red coloured curtains  '.it was looking so romantic. A small smile appear on her face'he did all this just for her'she knew , he love her so much'n its his style to prove his love for her''.

  But, she  was not one of those girls , who melt so easily by his charm'sometimes she is more stubborn than him'.though, he made her so happy by his surprise'.but from morning he was testing her patience & now it's her to test his love'..

    He was waiting for her response'but there was no response her side'finally, desperately he asked her, "kuch kaho toh?" still holding her from back.

   "kya?" she asked back.

  Surprised on her reply  , he said, "kuch  bhi  yaar..."

 Now,  she  turned  towards him'"kya kuch bhi?"

Now,  he is already started loosing his patience, he asked her pleasingly," yahi, ke tumhien mera surprise kaisa l aga?"

 By his expressions, she understand..he is annoyed now'..enjoying his   situation she just said," accha hain!" by hiding her smile from him.

  Shocked, he asked her," bas Acchaaa???? Khanak, maine tumhare liye itana kuch kiya'aur tum sirf accha kah rahi ho?? You are so rude yaar!!" upset by her, he left her from his grip.

    She give him stern look and asked back, "Aur joh aap subah se mere sath kar rahe the who kya tha???"

  Now, he got it, to convince Khanak is not going to easy task for him''.

                                He made her sit on the jhula'.trying hard to convince her'"khanak maine yeh sab tumhare liye hi toh kiya'kyun ki main tumhare chehare pe khushi dekhana chahata tha'..kya, ab bhi tum mujhase naraz ho?"

       She felt bad by seeing his innocent face ,"Nahi'."

  Big smile appeared on his face'.he hugged her once again, "thank god tum maan gayi!!...accha, kya tumane  mujhe miss kiya? Waise main jaanata hun  ke tumane  mujhe bahut miss kiya"

  She pushed him back, "ji nahi' maine aapako bilkul bhi miss nahi kiya'mere paas aur bhi jaroori kaam hain."

   " Accha baba'.par jarasa toh miss kiya hi hoga?" he asked her with teasing tone.

   "ji nahi jarasa bhi nahi'bilkul bhi nahi."

 Now, really surprised by her reply ,  he asked her," What? Come on yaar khanak'.tum aisa kaise kar sakati ho'.tumhein mujhe miss karana chahiye tha'aakhir pati hun main tumahara'"

 "aur main aapaki patni'.janati hun mein'.toh?"

"toh, tumhein mujhe miss karana chahiye!" he said in authorized tone.

 "Aa ha ha'jaise aap bada miss karate hain mujhe , jab main aapake sath nahi rehati?" She asked looking at him.

  "haan ' karata main tumhein miss"

 She give him stern look,"Shantanu, kitana jhoot bolane lage ho aap aaj kal'.pehale subhah jhoot bola aur ab ek aur jhoot!!"

  Confused he asked her, "ab kya jhoot bola maine?" he grabbed her hand.

"Yahi  ke aap mujhe bada miss karate hain'..jab main yaha nahi rehati tab yah toh aap apane kam mein busy rehate hain'yah phir ghar pe Angelina Jolie ki filmein dekhate hain'..sab pata hain mujhe'aapako bahut pasand  haina who?"

  He is back to his anticts said,"nahi pasand nahi mujhe'..I love her so much!!"

Upset , she removed her hand from his "haan toh jayiye, jakar usaki filme dekhiye'yaha kya kar rahe hain mere sath'aap toh ussase bahut pyar karate hain na!!"

   Brusted out on dis..he asked,"omg..khanak tum jal rahi ho??"

 "jal nahi rahi main'aur waise bhi mujhe jalane ki kya jaroorat hain?"

 He hold her face in her palms , said "haan, woh toh hain'kyun ki tum janati ho'ke main tumase kitana pyar karata hun'.Angelina Jolie se bhi  bahut  jyada" he bent towards her to kiss her.

   She blushed on this & looked away'.then asked him, "Shantanu, woh  chand dekh rahe ho? Kitana khoobsurat hain na?"

  Still lost in her face, he mumered, "haan, bahut khoobsurat hain"

 "shantanu, chaand waha aasman pe hota hain!'

"haan, main janata hun'..par tum yeh nahi janati mere paas bhi ek chand hain'aur woh uss chand se kai  jyada khoobasurat hi nahi sexy bhi hain" he  said naughtly while  admiring her every feature of her face'which was glowing in his presence.

 Blushing on his compliment'she asked him teasingly,"aapaki filmy baatien kabhi khatm nahi hogi na?"

  " kabhi nahi'.waise khanak..maine tumhare liye itana sab kiya'.ek return gift toh banata hain'" he said while aiming for her lips.

  Again she pushed him back n said,"pehale cake kaat le?"

 Disappointed by his wife unromantic nature he said," bahut unromantic ho tum'chalo cake kaat lete hain"

   She smile on this'both cut the cake together'shantanu feed her piece of cake'after that, "she grabbed his collar & pulled him towards her & asked teasingly,"toh aapako return gift chahiye hun?? Aur kya  kaha aapane main unromantic hun??" surpreised by her actions , he lost all his words'n before he could say anything she  kissed him..

 

   Hope I din't bore you guys and U all like itSmile'sorry, for mistakes enjoy itSmile, how much I enjoyed while writing it LOL



Edited by Miss.Wahian - 24 June 2013 at 4:56am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Waah superb update neelu...Big smile
Loved it...
lol khanak is romantic and she proved it to shaanLOL
Nice update...
Waiting for the next partBig smile

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maneesha_Shanak

Waah superb update neelu...Big smile
Loved it...
lol khanak is romantic and she proved it to shaanLOL
Nice update...
Waiting for the next partBig smile
Thanks so much for liking itSmile
& there is no next partLOL Dis is full & finale...ab kiss ke bad ka tumlog imagine kar loWinkLOL

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
woww so romantic
loved how khanak was not giving it easily 
so chand ka title yaha se aaya hmmm i loved it Big smile
hahah shan ko chahiye ke khanak use miss kare are wah kya zabardasti hain LOL
keep writing dear :)))


Edited by jaisyjazz - 24 June 2013 at 5:22am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Miss.Wahian

Originally posted by Maneesha_Shanak

Waah superb update neelu...Big smile
Loved it...
lol khanak is romantic and she proved it to shaanLOL
Nice update...
Waiting for the next partBig smile
Thanks so much for liking itSmile
& there is no next partLOL Dis is full & finale...ab kiss ke bad ka tumlog imagine kar loWinkLOL

Oh no next part nahi hai...Shocked
Kya hai neelu you have left the best part for our imaginationEmbarrassedLOL


Edited by Maneesha_Shanak - 24 June 2013 at 5:29am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maneesha_Shanak

Originally posted by Miss.Wahian

Originally posted by Maneesha_Shanak

Waah superb update neelu...Big smile
Loved it...
lol khanak is romantic and she proved it to shaanLOL
Nice update...
Waiting for the next partBig smile
Thanks so much for liking itSmile
& there is no next partLOL Dis is full & finale...ab kiss ke bad ka tumlog imagine kar loWinkLOL

Oh no next part nahi hai...Shocked
Kya hai neelu you have left the best part for our imaginationEmbarrassedLOL

coz I knew, u hv best imagination power...tum voh sab imagin kar logi joh main soch bhi nahi sakati...lolz

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Loved it.. Smile Khanak is plesantly surprised by the party but not in a mood to show..She is in JKR avatar!!! LOL Shaan was expecting all praise!!!

Finally she relented and said its nice.. Smile But our burthal need more praise.. LOL

Both missed each other immensely but still played along!!! Embarrassed

And the kiss.. Embarrassed

Thank you for writing Neelu.. Big smile


Edited by poo_j - 24 June 2013 at 9:07am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poo_j

Loved it.. Smile Khanak is plesantly surprised by the party but not in a mood to show..She is in JKR avatar!!! LOL Shaan was expecting all praise!!!

Finally she relented and said its nice.. Smile But our burthal need more praise.. LOL

Both missed each other immensely but still played along!!! Embarrassed

And the kiss.. Embarrassed

Thank you for writing Neelu.. Big smile
I'm glad u liked it Poo...n thanx so much bearing with my crap...lol

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