Rang Badalti Odhani


Rang Badalti Odhani
Rang Badalti Odhani

Shanak OS.."Mere Paas bhi ik chand hain.."(PG2)

Miss.Wahian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged

So, here I'm thinking to write an OS on shanakSmile'..I'll post it in 2-3 parts'Hope U guys like itLOL'please forget the mistakes coz I'm not that much good in writing''

                                    "Mere paas bhi ik chaand hain'."


   It was her first birthday after their marriage'.she wanted to spend whole day with him only'.so, made many plans' He  too wanted dis birthday to make so much special for her'but, still he didn't wanted to make it big coz he was wishing to spent time alone with her only'..But, he is Shantanu Khandelwal'.he has his own style to celebrate & make days more special for her & them'

    In morning, Khanak cums in thr room with chai ka tray in her hand'She wore beautiful Shiffon red colour saari''She wanted to surprise Shan'.but, thing happen  totally unexpected to her'.

   As she entered their room..she saw  Shan was getting ready to go out side'.surprised & shocked, hurt all emotions crossed her face at the same time'still controlling own emotions she asked him,"Aap bahar ja rahe hain??"'Shan turned back towards the direction whr from the voice came'for moment  he felt that  his heart skipped out of his mouth, he lost his breath'..she was looking stunning in that red saari'he couldn't resist himself from admiring her'but, soon he recover himself n answered,"haan, khanak ik jarrori meeting hain.."'She was sad but can't show it on her face, as she know how much its important for him'"wapas kab aayenge??" '"Pata nahi khanak'jaroori meeting hain, pata nahi kab tak chalegi'.aur usake baad mein seedha studio chala jaaunga'.aaj naye album ki recording bhi karani hain'.agar der hi gayi toh tum khanak kha ke so jana.."'Now, she was abt almost to cry'but she control herself'just agree to him by nodding her head''He gave small kiss on her chick n left their room'.

              Heartbroken she fell on their bed..couldn't control her tears..but, after some time she gathered herself.."agar unako meri fikr nahi..toh main kyun rou unake liye..."  She went to batroom to clean up her face which was looking like total mess'..

      She tried to  engulf herself housechores'like cooking in kitchen, then did some gossips with Madhavi & Khushaboo bhabhi'.Both wished her for her birthday & give her some pretty gifts'.she thanked them with her beautiful smile'.though she was smilng, but it wasn't from her heart'. N here her cell beaped once'she took her cell..it was massage from shan'..her face lighten up after reading his name'egarly she opened dat massage'it was.."R u ok?"'quite disappointed  she reply," ji, main teekh hun"'.thr again he massaged her,"phir call kyun nahi kiya??'''..now, irritated she replied,"aapako kuch kaam nahi?? Meeting khatm hi gayi??"'.Surprised on her reply he massaged back"kaam toh hain'.par'" She again replied,"toh kaam kijiye'.meri fikr karane koi jaroorat nahi'." He read it n smile appear on his face'then he go back to his work'..after those massage there was no interaction happen between them'.


      Its  almost 7.30 p.m. neigther  he called her  nor  she call him'though she was desperate to talk to him , to went out all her anger on him'but still she control herself'.She was in their room..reading some books'Harilal cum their n asked her,"dadi wants her to bring some stuff from their tarece'" quite confused on dis  she went to the tarece ''it was so much dark there'.the moment she cum thr'.A big screamed out of her mouth as someone grabbed her by her waist'.

Edited by Miss.Wahian - 24 June 2013 at 4:05am

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Miss.Wahian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
I'm working on next part...ll post it soonEmbarrassed

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Maneesha_Shanak IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Wohooo neelu you are writing an OS...Big smile
Very nycc...i liked it...
shaan wanted to surprise khanak...so sweet!!
But i didnt like how he made her sad during the day time...Cry
Hope he impresses her now with the surpriseWink
awaiting next part...Big smile

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poo_j IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Wooow!!!Big smile Neelu you write stories..PartyEeeks..Big smile Big applause for sharing it with us!!!ClapClapClap

Loved it so much!!!Big smile  It's Khanak's birthday and she is full of expectation of how she and her hubby Shaan Embarrassed gonna celebrate it..But our burthal Shaan has some other plan..LOL All set to throw her a surprise!!!

She is really taken back when Shaan got ready and said he'll be busy the whole day..And he got awestruck by her look..Blushing Of course he has too..Wink

Poor girl cried on her birthday..Cry The message exchange was cute..He is such a tease..LOL Asking her whether she is ok..

Wow!!! It's a surprise party..Party Shaan must have gone in length to arrange for it..Hope he sings for her with a guitar..Embarrassed

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!!Smile

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MFRanjini IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
So happy that you are writing an OS NeeluHug

Its very cuteSmile, Khanak in red sareeEmbarrassed Shaan seems very naughtyLOL

Ab terrace pe kya hua? Aj hi update karoSmile

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jaisyjazz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
wow awesome
i love it
eekkss waiting for shan's surprise
plz update soon i m waiting :)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
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Another awesome writer ...WOW!! Star Didnt Knew you Write Dear. Thanks a ton for sharing it with us. Smile the first half was really really Beautiful. 

Wow its Khanak's Birthday & Shaan is planning A big surprise for her. She had made plans too but was disappointed when she saw him getting ready. Tongue i loved the way you have written her Emoticons & those cute Expressions. Little Anger & His teasing. Smile Khanak thought he forgot her Birthday where as he is busy planning for her. Loved the way he teased her with his massages asking she is fine Tongue Truly cute Dear So shaan decorated Terrace for her. how romantic & Khanak had no idea about it she stepped in thinking she is there to Do Dadi's work Smilelekin ab aayega Surprise Big smile

This is really cute & Exciting ...Do continue Soon this was Amazing Clap


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Miss.Wahian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for ur beautiful relpies...it means alotSmile

Edited by Miss.Wahian - 24 June 2013 at 10:53pm

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