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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet lost the baby, now what will be her decision on relation with prem??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful song seq. Superb update. Prem aur geet ab to alag ho jayenge na
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear...
So sad that Geet lost her baby...
But happy that she opened up to Maan..

Maneet understanding is superb...
Song selected is one of my all-time favourites...Thanx for that...[BR
]Pls continue soon...

Thanx also for pm...Edited by Mehek25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

After separation Part 10

I dedicate this part to Tia.She had discontinued reading this ss when Maaneet split with Prem-Geet union.But here Maaneet united.

Prem:Sorry to disturb you both.Geet...I know that in this situation you hate to see me.Sorry.I just felt like enquiring about your health.
Geet:I am alright.
Geet was not pleasant seeing Prem.Understanding that he left the room silently.

Geet got discharged.She entered her room.Seeing the toys there she burst into tears.She took a doll and caressed it.Nilanjana and Naintara became upset seeing it.
Ni:Geet...
NT:Geet...you need to take rest.
Naintara made her lie down.
She lay down hugging the doll.She was very upset.

Prem came.
P:Geet!
GEET:You?Can't you give me peace of mind?I should  have died along with the baby.
P:Geet!What are you saying?
G:I lost my baby damn it.
P:Geet...I thought you were not sad.Because that baby was mine.The symbol of betrayal.
G:Don't insult my baby.Just because my baby was your blood I did'nt hate it.I am not that bad like you.You won't understand that as you are a heartless monster.
Prem felt sad:Sorry Geet..
Geet did'nt respond.
P:Geet...Can I tell you something?You married me for our baby.But since we lost our baby,you don't have to stay here.Don't sacrifice anymore.You can go back.Go back to your love Maan.He is still waiting for you.
Geet looked at Prem unbelievingly.

P:Don't be shocked.Only Maan deserve you.God punished me by taking my baby back.I can't bear your hatred anymore.Please go back to Maan.
G:I told you many times that with this impure body I can't go to Maan.
P:Stop it Geet.For Maan there is nothing purer than you.If you are refusing to go back to him that proves that you are selfish and you don't care for Maan's tears.
Geet was out of words.Her eyes were welled up with tears.

After a few days...
Prem came to the front room.
P:Dad...mom...everyone...I have decided to leave for UK.I got a job there.
They were shocked.
Nilanjana:Then Geet?
P:She will be here with her partner.I have no right on her as I have signed the divorce paper.
Everyone was shocked.
P:She was never mine.She belongs to Maan.
Everyone was shocked.
Shekhar:What did you say?
P:Yes dad.Maan and Geet cannot be happy without each other.Please don't oppose rtheir relationship.
They all were sad.

Prem went near Geet.
P:Geet!
G:Tell me Prem.What do you have to say?

P:Geet...You are free from me.Within a few months legally we will be separate.But for us now itself we are free from each other.Maan is wakting for you.Please don't give him more pain.Go to him Geet.
Geet was so emotional that she could'nt speak anything.
P:I realised that I have no position in this house and in your heart.Then there is no use of staying here.So I am leaving for UK forever.
She looked at Prem unbelievingly.

P:I realised that forcefully I cannot get love.So what's the point in staying here with you?
G:Finally you realized that nothing can be gained through crooked ways.
P:Yes.Anyways...don't worry Geet.Even for your wedding with Maan I won't come back.Because I know that if i attend the function no one will have peace of mind.
Geet could'nt speak anything.
P:I am leaving to the airport now.Bye.
Geet did'nt know what to say.He just left.


Sameera was looking at the flowers in the mall.
S:So beautiful.
Suddenly Nihaal embraced her from behind.
S:Nihaal!

N:So you recognised me?
S:I can...because who else has the guts to embrace Sameera?
N:So sweet.
S:It's a surprise that you are also here.
N:I had a feeling that you are here.So I came here.Luckily my feeling was right.
She smiled.
She handed over the flowers to him:Love you Nihaal.
N:Love you too Sameera...
He took a red rose from his pocket and gave it to her.She blushed.


Yash,Meera and Maan came clapping their hands.
Y:Love is blossoming...cool.
Nihaal-Sameera were shy.
Sam:Maan...what about Geet?Did you propose to her?
Maan:No.I am nervous.
Meera:Hey come on Maan...She is our Geet.Why should you be so nervous?
Nihaal:Go ahead Maan.

Maan reached the terrace where Geet was standing.
Maan:Geet!
Geet turned back.
M:Geet...I told you many times that I want you.But you did'nt give me a positive reply.But I will keep expressing my love till you understand my heart.I love you Geet...I can only love you.Without you I can't live.

Apni aankhein khaali kar de
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de

Geet became very emotional:Maan!

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Hamein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge


M:Now you can take any decision.
Maan went away.
Naintara came hearing their conversation.
NT:Geet,accept Maan.Otherwise he will be shattered.He is the one who is breathing you.Don't break his heart.
Geet's eyes were wet.

That night Geet was thinking of Maan and his love...the moments she spent with him.
In the morning..
G:I have to talk to Maan.I won't let him be sad.He must be in his office now.I have go now.
 Immediately she took her car and went out.On the way she saw a flower seller and bought some red roses.Then she started driving.

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Hamein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge



Geet reached Maan's office.
Geet screamed:Maan!
Maan came out of his cabin.He was surprised:Geet!
She threw the rose bouquet at him.He caught it.

Do yeh saugaat tum,
to zamaane ki hum
Do yeh saugaat tum,
to zamaane ki hum
Har khushi se mukar jayenge

G:I love you Maan...
Maan was surprised:Geet!
He extended his arms.Geet ran into his arms where she was most secure.He leaned towards her face romantically.She closed her eyes.He just kept looking at her face with passionate love.

Hum mar jayenge
Hum mar jayenge



She opened her eyes.They both smiled at each other.

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Hamein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge

Then they both went on a long romantic drive.
Tere kaandhe se hi lag ke
Yaara beete umar saari
Socho kaisi hogi kismat
Hua yun to phir hamaari
Saare aansoo to hon tere
Aur aankhein hon hamaari

After some months legally Geet got separated from Prem.Then happened Maan -Geet's wedding.
Maan and Geet promised each other silently to be with each other and share sadness and happiness with each other.

Tere dard hamein jo mile pyaar mein
Tere dard hamein jo mile pyaar mein
Hum khushi se yun bhar jaayenge
Hum mar jaayenge
Hum mar jaayenge
Everyone was very happy.Maan-Geet got blessed by Shekhar-Nilanjala.
Sh:Geet...If I had seen your heart before you both would have united long ago.
G:Dadiji..
Maan:Dad...now you understand Geet very well and accepted her as her daughter.What more do we need?
They smiled.
Dev:Bro...I am so happy for you.
Naintara:Maan devarji...never leave Geet's hand.She is only yours.

Maan smiled:Yes,I will always hold her hand close to my heart.
He held her hand close to his chest.Geet blushed.

 Sameera:Finally Maan got his soul mate.If not can't even imagine what would have happened to them.They both suffered a lot.
N:Now don't be sad about the past Sam.Because now they both are together.
They both smiled.

Yash:Congrats buddies..
Meera:We both are so happy for you guys.

Night...
Geet sat on the decorated bed as a shy bride.Maan came and sat near her.
He caressed her.She closed her eyes feeling his magical touch.She was lost in him.He looked at her deeply.

Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho
Dil ne tujhko hi pukaara
Tune humko hai banaaya



He held her hand and pampered her completely with his love.


Tune humko hai sanwaara
Chaahaton ko rab ka hai
Hamein tera hai sahaara
Bas tera saath ho
Chaahe jo baat ho
Bas tera saath ho
Chaahe jo baat ho
Tere kehne se kar jaayenge
Hum mar jaayenge ho..
Hum mar jaayenge

Maan removed her jewellery.
Geet melted in Maan's love and gifted herself to him.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Hamein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jaayenge
Hum mar jaayenge ho..
Hum mar jaayenge
The next morning Maan woke up finding Geet sleeping close to him.
He smiled thinking of the sweet moments they spent on the previous night.He held her more closer to him...more deeply...deciding not to let destiny take her away from him.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Hamein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jaayenge(Aashiqui2).

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending
loved it allot
atlast maaneet are together!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE FINALLY MAANEET ARE TOGETHER REALLY HAPPY WITH THERIE REUNION THANKS FOR UPDATE AND PM 
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Posted: 10 years ago
luved the end!!!
very beautifully written..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely ending
maaneet married
waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooho finally Maneet got married .. Felt slight bad for Prem.. But he deserved that he tried to snatch that thing which only belongs to Maan.. Nice update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so finally prem realised that by forcing someone we can't get love nd they get divorced
nd happy that finally maneet r married now
thanks for the pm