Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

After separation Maaneet Epilogue pg54

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After separation Part 1

This SS is inspired by my SS Living 2gether with luv or friendship? But this SS has a lot of differences.New characters & new scenes r included


Due to public demand in this SS Rajeev and Aamna will play Dev and Naintara.


A grand party'

Dev and Naintara were celebrating their Wedding Anniversary.

Dev and Naintara were immersed in a romantic dance.

Thoda sa'

After the dance everyone clapped hands.They were very happy.
Maan went near them.

M:You both are made for each other.You both are lucky'that's why you both are able to be with each other.
Dev looked at his lady love romantically:That's true bro.We are lucky to have each other.
She blushed.

D:Bro'you also have a girl who loves you a lot.

NT:Yes,Geet loves you a lot and I know how much my Devarji loves Geet.

M:Yes.Geet is my luck.But as far as Dad does'nt approve off our relationship how can I be happy?You both know how dad blasted at me yesterday night.

Dev and Naintara became sad.

D:Don't worry Bro.Dad will accept Geet.We have hope.

M:I have no hope.
They became dull.

After the party'

Dev and Naintara were shocked to see Maan packing his bags.

D:Bro,what are you doing?

M:I am leaving.

They were shoked.

D:Bro!

M:Dad told me to leave if I am not willing to obey him.I cant obey him.I can't leave Geet.So I am leaving.

NT:Devarji,wait.I will speak to dad.

M:No need Naintara.There is no use.Dad can never understand me.

Maan's dad came:Let him leave.

D:Dad,what are you saying?

Maan' dad:The person who can't obey me cannot live in my house.Whether he is my son or not.

Maan's mom cried:What are you saying?Our son'

NT:Dad'why are you against Maan Devarji' relationship with Geet?Geet is a nice girl.

He:Geet is a nice girl.But she is not perfect for Maan.

Maan left the Khurana Mansion with irritation.

Maan's mother cried:Maan'Maan'

Maan turned back and looked at her with tears.Then he walked away.

Naintara was very upseSameera:Dev'Maan only played cupid to unite us.Luckily dad also supported us.But when Maan needed our help we were helpless.I can't bear it.I feel ashamed.

D:Naintara,don't be upset.Iam sure that Maan and Geet will unite removing all hurdles from their path.

NT:But where will he go?

D:Where else can he go?He will go to his best friend Sameera's house.

NT:I hope so.Sameera will support him.



A rainy night'.
Unexpectedly Sameera heard Maan's voice:Sameera!Sameera!
SAMEERA:Maan?
She opened the door.She saw the depressed Maan drenched in rain.
SAMEERA:Maan!Come inside.
He got inside the house with his luggage.She saw it.
SAMEERA:First you dry your hair and change clothes.Otherwise you will catch fever.
He goes inside and changes his clothes.Then he came back.

SAMEERA:Maan..what happened?
MAAN:I left the house.
Sameera was shocked:Why?
MAAN:Dad is against my relationship with Geet.He wants me to marry someone else.So i broke my relationship with that house.
SAMEERA:But can you break your relationship with your parents?

MAAN:Mom is with me.But dad...he is too cruel.

SAMEERA:You could have tried to convince him.He may not be knowing how serious you are about Geet.
MAAN:There is no use.I tried my level best.But he does'nt believe that Geet is my true love.
SAMEERA:Geet...?
MAAN:Today morning she left to UK for her studies.I went to her bedroom to surprise her.She was sleeping.She had worn a violet night gown.She looked so beautiful.I caressed her beautiful silky hair.She opened her eyes.She was surprised to see me.


Flash back'
Geet:Maan..why did'nt you tell me that you are coming here now?
MAAN:To give you a surprise.
GEET:Really?Then i will also give you a surprise.
M:What surprise?
G:Wait..
Geet went out of the room.Maan waited there.
After some time Geet came with a box.
G:I made food for you with my hands.
Maan was surprised:Wow!I was craving to eat the food cooked by you.
She smiled:That's why I prepared it for you.

She served him food.He kept looking at her without tasting it.
G:Why are you not eating it?Eat it Maan.
M:If you don't feed mewith your hands how will I eat?
G:You naughty.
She tickled him.They both burst into laughter.
Geet fed him food.He hed her back.Then he became emotional.
M: I will be able to eat your food only after a year.
She became sad.
G:Maan...don't be sad.1 year will go very fast.
She buried her face in his chest.

Maan to Sameera:It was such a sweet moment.I dropped her to the airport.We both wept.Geet will be in UK for more than one year.I will miss her.Since she has gone there we can't get married soon.I don't want to tell Geet that I left my house.She will be upset.
SAMEERA:Don't worry Maan.You can stay here till your dad's anger melts.
He smiles:Thank you so much Sameera.You are my best friend.No one does such a great thing for the best friend.
She says in her mind:Maan'you will get your Geet.No one can stand against your love.

Sameera:Maan...don't be angry with your dad.He will be very upset now.He loves you very much.
Maan:You are supporting my dad?Why is he against my love.He knows how much i love Geet.
SAMEERA:He will understand how much you love her.Give him some more time.One more year is left.Right?
Maan is silent.
MAAN:Yes,one more year is left.I hope he will realize his mistake.Living a life without Geet for one year...oh!I miss her Sameera.
She thinks:Geet is so lucky to be loved by Maan.
SAMEERA:Maan..you look very upset.Chill.Everything will be alright.
Maan tried to smile.

MAAN:If you were not my best friend i would not have been able to sit like this now.I would have gone crazy.
She smiled.
MAAN:I was scared whether you will also leave me alone.
SAMEERA:I will never leave you Maan.Because you are my best friend.

MAAN:I'm lucky to get a best friend like you and a best girl friend like Geet.When Geet expressed her desire to do higher studies i did'nt agree..because i did'nt want Geet to be away from me even for a moment.We had a small argument.Others thought we are breaking up.But everyone was surprised to see us together at a party.


Maan recalled...
Party...
Geet was dressed in a glittering saree and matching accessories.Maan was bowled over by her beauty.He could not resist himself.He went towards her surprising everyone including Geet.Because everyone thought that they had a break up.
Geet could not believe it.
GEET:Maan?
MAAN:Won't you dance with me?You hate me that much?
Geet became upset.
She held his arm.
GEET:Let us dance.
He smiled.
They both danced passionately to the song
'Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hai
jaane kya bole man Dole sunke badan
dharkan banii zubaan..{Khamoshi}.

Maan and Geet looked at each other while dancing.
GEET:I was surprised when you invited me to dance with you.Because i thought you wanted to break up with me.
MAAN:Breaking up with you?If so,i would not have told you not to leave India for studies.I want you to be with me always.That's why I told you not to go.
GEET:Maan...I'm sorry.I will not go anywhere.
MAAN:No Geet.You must do your higher studies.Only for one year or something.Time will go very fast.
She was surprised:Maan!
He smiled.She also smiled.

Present..
Maan:I told Geet that time will move very fast.But it's moving slowly.
SAMEERA:Don't worry Maan.Wait patiently for your love.
MAAN:Yes.

The calling bell rang.Sameera opened the door.That was Maan's twin brother Prem.
SAMEERA:Prem!Come inside.
Prem came inside.
MAAN:Prem!When did you come back from Delhi?

P:Half an hour back.Then I came to know that you left the house.So sad.

Maan:How did you know that I was here?
P:I saw you both in the car.So I guessed you were with Sameera.
MAAN:How is the situation over there?
Prem:Dad is sad.But he is still angry.
MAAN:Dad is stubborn.
P:Did Geet contact you after reaching UK?
MAAN:No.Once she gets the number she will contact me.
P:I'm leaving to UK for my job.
MAAN:Really?That's good.
Prem says in her mind:I'm sorry Maan.I'm cheating you.I'm going to UK not only for my job,but for my Geet.My main intention is to gain Geet's heart.I love your Geet and I want her.
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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
wait so this means that will maneet be together
or will prem get her too
i hope not man
then what will happen to maan yaar
uff this is gonna be even more difficult man
as he has only geet and no one else
okay there is sam though
ufff what will happen
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
it is the same
lets see what happens next????/
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Posted: 10 years ago
maaneet lv each other
bt so many probs in their way
n now hs own bro cheating him
hope nothing goes wrong
cant see my maanu or geet with some onleelse
hope geet realize his intentions
Edited by tiakashyap - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Prem is leaving to geet
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...im confessed...will maaneet b 2gether...will b with prem...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
shuru nehi hue aur agaya kabab mein haddi...

interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely startine n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
Maan dad not accepting geet
Liked sameera...
Omg prem wants geet...
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear..congrats in the new SS! Lovely update! Poor Maan! Hate Prem! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. Maan loves geet so much.
Bt ye villian prem. I hate him.