Posted: 27 August 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Who can know this better than I about what siblings are capable of doing!? As a kid my Choti would go all "Mummy tumhe pata hain issne (being me) kya kiya?" and when my mom would ask my Di to corroborate, the truth ki devi that she was would immediately say "Haan Mummy"
But I still love my sisters. So...
You actually do comedy better. I would never guess that the same person who is writing STS wrote DFS too. The humor is that good
and the writing style is novel too
When I read stories like these where each update makes me laugh, every other sentence is witty, and I get my dose of sarcasm too... I cant help but kick myself for not being with the story from the start.
I cannot really go into each update and point out everything that made me laugh or made me think what a crazy imagination she has! It is nigh impossible.
So let me just say that I
intelligent humor which your story gave me. Put your brains in a chest, lock it, chain the chest to a rock and push it into an ocean while you bury the key somewhere---- is so
Even without reading your FAQ, I wanted to applaud the way in which you recreated the initial pull of ArHi chemistry though your story is absolutely different from the show.
Arnav cant help but feel attracted to her, her grace, her beauty, her chirpiness, her jingling noises, her voice, her movements, her clumsiness, her antics and so much more all giving rise to his 'magical moments' while at the same time knowing that she is absolutely different from him, with different POV for life, that she is insane absolutely and completely insane... yet she is the one around whom he can laugh, feel his headaches dissipating, feel at peace, feel for her, feel protective for her, feel care, feel love... feel a little like Arnav more than ASR...
Khushi might have awesome in her DNA (That she watches IPK and loves all things related to it is proof enough
) but her awesomeness is always overpowered by his thoughts, his words, his deeds... she jokes with him, 'blackmails' him, pushes her luck with him, tries to stay quiet for him, feels possessive about him, feels comfortable around him, wants him to be happy with her, doesnt like him to be upset with her, is loud and brutally honest with him, she feels a companionship with him of all people, feels jealous, feels care, feels love for him... she is just herself with him...
Even in the show right from the start there was this something
about them together which you sketched here very well...
About the future episodes... Delilah all of us are wondering why did they do what they did... Anyways...
Payal and her honeykins were funny and cute too...
And Guptas really dont know subtle, do they?
I loved loved loved loved loved the story. There was never a dull moment or even a fraction of a dull moment with this story.
Thanks for sharing it with us
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 30 August 2013 at 4:01am