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Joined: 28 October 2012
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
You ended itCry
Didn't expect it to be so soon, but love this story and
I hope you start something comedic like this soon.
The ending was actually perfect for this Khushi and Arnav as we are used to them bickering all day long. Beeing all lovey-dovey wouldn't suit their characters.
Please do start a new story and Pm me if you do so. Love your humour.

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shree10 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mastermagician

Originally posted by -Delilah-

Originally posted by shree10

How are His insolence and the awesome Ms Lucknow doing??

Why did His insolence kiss Lavs or let Lavs kiss him??



LOL His Insolence is resting in his royal chamber. Awesome Miss Lucknow's having a very busy day converting oxygen into carbon di oxide as she reflects about the insanity called life.

Actually, Lavanya didn't kiss Arnav. She just hugged him. The rest of it was Khushi's overactive imagination.

leave it to Ms. Lucknow's overactive highly creative imaginations!!!ROFL

Ah.. ok. Just an imagination! You put my restless heart to peace. Now off to read 8 and 9 asap.

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Snoowfall IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
D too good,his fantasies LOL

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
awesome...
no words,
just mindblowingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Javeria3991 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Superb update.
Why did you end it too soonAngry
I really enjoyed reading it. 
Superb story 
Funny hilarious
Awesome vocabulary
Beautiful 
You gave a happy ending to arnav and Khushi 
Khushi was obstinate winter phlegm for arnav. ROFLWell it would be nice if arnav had entitled Khushi with some  sweet title
Please write more funny stories.
I am going to read it again.

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Charmz_58 IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 3371

Posted: 27 August 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Wonderful!

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ASRphanki IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 29 July 2012
Posts: 4684

Posted: 27 August 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
The bestest and the sweetest and the funniest short story i hve ever read!!
Hats ff to u for writing so briliantly..
Loved it completely

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Arshix144 IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 24 September 2012
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
D when you said you will be ending both of your FF's soon I did not expect the last chapter this soon. I know I promised that I won't be sad but I can't help express the fact that I will miss this one terribly. It was such a mood lifter and Fun FF right from the get go and all the way through! I tell you there are not alot of these kind of FF's out there. *sighs

On to the Chapters, Chapter 8 was so good I had to read it twice! Seriously Arnav and Khushi's banter, Arnav getting side tracked and not explaining what he was there for right away and eventually expressing exactly how he felt about her, his jealousy and possessiveness over Khushi's possible date with Rohan/Rohit/KaranLOL, then we had my absolute favourite moment and that is Khushi's genuine and innocent confession and Arnav's heart warming reaction.

Loved it all, loved your unconventional ending as well with Khushi addressing her last diary entry to her future self and Payal, very smart of her to announce ending her diary entries there or promising herself not to write anymore because things were going to get rather personal after all she was going to get personal with his insolence!  I remember making the same mental note to myself about never writing anything personal ( particularly about family members) if I was ever to resume writing diary entries.LOL

Thank you for this wonderful Journey once again, hope to read more of your work in the near future!

PS. The Call me maybe song is now forever stuck in my head ( thanks D!)

PPS. I already miss the previously sane CEO aka his insolence and MS Awesome aka KKG


Edited by Arshix144 - 27 August 2013 at 8:16am

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