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-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:26am | IP Logged
you finish it, too soon 

But the ending is lively and fresh especially arnav singh raizada proposal and Wow ASR actually thrown pebbles  :D

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GredandForge IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Its over?Shocked

I wish you'd have carried it a little longer.

I love this Arnav and Khushi. So adorable.

Perfect ending.Apt for the story.

I hope you'll be writing more in this style.

Thank you for a great storyEmbarrassed

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
i like the way it ended...i like your arnav and khushi...they can talk to each others how they like, no flowery talking, no politically correctness, no pretending so easy on to each others...i love them, laugh at them and also laugh with them ...if i made any sense...lol

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prati_incept Senior Member
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
its over? already? Cry

thanks for pm
well off to reading now

comments

why it had to end.. so soon... Disapprove

superb updates.. funny witty and engaging..
i wish you get a chance to write for films.. it ll be hit..
your lines are original, classy and really really funny..

and now im praising you...as if I get paid for itBig smile
im going to read it aging.. cant get enough of..

hope you start new ff soon


Edited by prati_incept - 27 August 2013 at 5:37am

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pearl.b Goldie
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Nooo I dont want this to end...this is one of my favorites here...Still awesome update...your khushi has me in splits every single time...I love her...superb..enjoyed reading every part of this FF. Hoping we will get more stories to read from you...Thanks for this beautiful piece of writing.

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katunkka Senior Member
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
As much as you had fun writing it I had so much fun reading it. you made me love your characters so much as hilarious as they are. You are a great writer and I hope I'll be lucky enough to read your future works as well and o hope you don't stop writing.

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luvbug IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Completed already??? Oh no... I'm so gonna miss this... I really enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters... Omg they were awesome... How do u manage to think like that n even write about it ...u r amazing... Will miss this for sure...will catch up with ur other stories

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incarnadine IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged

You made ASR throw stones at Khushi's window?! That was so cute though Embarrassed Truly, love can reduce anyone to anything.

I love Khushi's sense of humor. She's so chirpy and bubbly and innocent. And the way she is at so much ease with Arnav, that is the icing on the cake.

I loved the ending you gave this FF. I like open endings, at times, because I can create scenarios, using my not-so imaginary mind Tongue

I'm going to miss this story so much D! I always had a grin on my face when reading the chapters. It's such a mood-lifter! So thank you so very much for writing it Hug

I'm looking forward to more of your works! Smile
Tc <3

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