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incarnadine IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 10:00am | IP Logged

Great update D! 

Loved Khushi's voice recordings. She's so prepared for the punishment LOL and ready to annoy him.
Aww Arnav was missing her chatter Embarrassed that was sweet. Especially when he moved close to her and let her sleep on his shoulder Embarrassed

I always love the "things I learnt" part. And Arnav's sign-off was pretty hilarious. Previously sane LOL

Read the poem of Boss vs Me. 
It is perfectly apt for Arnav and Khushi Tongue

Loved it! :)

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mistyrains IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Arnav is so adorable. It strikes a chord every time doesn't it -  a quiet Khushi? It like a room is devoid of life. Amazing chapter! <3 

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Anarocksick IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
"If you are happy and you know it, bang your head,"  LOL

Hilarious stuff, Delilah! I absolutely looovee your khushi. She is just so effin' cute and funny, dammit! 

Btw, Khushi dear-future-selfs are fun to read, her craziness shining through them. But Arnav's singh Raizada's dear-future-selfs get unbelievably funny when I start imagining him doing all those things that you make him do and all those things that you make him say. LOL Damn girl. 

The exchange of poems part was hilarious! Keeping quite LOL and Khushi's interpretation of it. Dayummm. 

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Big smile  ... 

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diyadivya IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
dat was fun
loved it

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thetelleroftale Groupbie
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Hello Delilah,
I just came across this work of yours and I must tell you that this is the first FF I'm leaving a comment on.
A lot of the FFs here either have good plot or good language but rarely both. Yours is one of the rare ones and the comedy just feels like an added bonus :)
I have great admiration for people who write good comedy, being an amateur writer myself I know just how difficult this is. One tends to second guess if something that sounds funny in one's head will actually be that funny on paper! But you have a natural flair, so you should trust your instincts :)
Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to follow this one and also look up your other work!

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Ni_singh Goldie
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Hilarious...read all the parts and enjoyed them...waiting for more
thanks for the pm

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_disha_ IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Notes to Self :

1) Do NOT read DFS in a public place with no Restroom around. D'oh

2) As if fangirling over fictional characters wasn't enough u have started fangirling over FF writers.Confused

3) When u read Delilah you feel you know her just because your name starts with a D. Silly


Your True Self  D !

Ps: Loved the update !LOL 

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