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Smitar's: Finding Khushi #11 Link to #12 on Page 1 (Page 95)

P4rveen12 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful and breath taking update, absolutely amazing.

The update was written exceptionally well. 

Love all the clothes choice you have made, they are gorgeous and so beautiful.

Wow, Arnav and Ganesh's reaction when they saw there lovely brides descending the stairs, simply wonderful.

Finally the wedding coming up, so excited to read the next part. 

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
im loving this tamed asr!!! and the bindaas khushi :)))

only you can write a simple story and make it sound so special smita Clap

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Nice story it looks so specual

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Lovely updates Smita.
Naniji gifting those heirlooms was a nice scene. Love the way they have included Anamika in!Smile
 
Mami's English is too hilarious and you have the Perfect dialogues for her! Mamiji scaring all with her different eye-shadows cracked me up.LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
But in end she helped Khushi too.. and the cutest part was.. Khushi asking Pappi.. Tongue 
 
finally, the day is here. And along with Brides.. these grooms are blushing too.Wink Both Arnav and Ganesh's encounter with Buaji was so sweet!
 
and at the end, Lion is out to devour his Bride in open.. Embarrassed what will happen to her later in the night.Wink
 
Thanks Rashmi for PMs. and Smita.. udpate soon. Big smile

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Awww love all their outfits
the guys are so impatient

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Great update

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome update , wait for next update .thanks for the pm

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Superb Update
Thanks for the Pm

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