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Smitar's: Finding Khushi #11 Link to #12 on Page 1 (Page 72)

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sujata5 Senior Member

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Fabulous as always Smita!!!

A bit short but full of feelings and hope...

Loved the line of Khushi:
You have to put up with my sankiness for the next 62 years. My poor Rakshas!" 

Hope the next update is longer...

Thanks for the PM Rashmi...

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Finally they will be wedded tomorrow...
Gosh it's going to be awesome...

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ammavedu80 Goldie

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Nice update
I loved this phrase

"You might live up to 90. You are 28 now." Khushi said. "62 years. Poor Arnavji!" she sighed.

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sphobic Goldie

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Evening to ho gaya , NandKishore!!!

Impatient,aren't I???LOL


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tinsel IF-Sizzlerz

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A sweet and brilliant updateClap

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Lucky for the group that none of the elders were awake… everyone seems to have forgotten about the brides and grooms not seeing each other before the wedding, or does that apply only to the wedding day itself? The contrast between the couples is cute: Anamika's and Ganesh's love seems to float along on gentle waves whereas Arnav's and Khushi's love is accompanied by alarums and excitement… Anamika & Ganesh smiled at each other. Khushi clapped her hands in excitement and smiled widely into Arnav's indulgent face. His tender eyes lapped up her joy and reveled in it… Arnav's every thought and action exudes a tenderness that clearly shows how far he has progressed as a man and a lover… his greatest wish is to keep that childlike smile on Khushi's face! Anjali teasing the couples and Akash, Payal, NK and Gaurav smiling at their expense brings back a sense of normalcy after the fiasco of a stag night! Ganesh turned to leave, but found that Anamika had a firm hold on the hem of his T-shirt… nice to see the calm and collected Anamika take a leaf from Khushi's book… her words are an acknowledgement of the new life she is embarking upon, a new beginning where her love and trust are reciprocated tenfold… Ganesh's declaration of undying love was moving in its simplicity and directness! Of course, one can't expect Khushi to leave things on a serious note… she is bound to come up with her out-of-the-box viewpoint just to tease Arnav and to lighten up his mood after those stressful moments at his undesired bachelor's party. But, all said and done, she is sure their marriage is going to be a longlasting one! "What!" Arnav looked perplexed, as he often did at Khushi's pronouncements... that's so true… he never knows what's going to come out of her mouth, and keeping up with her mental processes is a full time job… but he wouldn't have it any other way… love Khushi's self-deprecating humor! "Arnavji, lower your arms." Khushi invited. Arnav lowered his arms obediently, but asked, "Why?" Well, she's got him half-trained, the rest can happen after marriage… I doubt Arnav will have any objections to the same, if a kiss is what it gets him! The conclusion was adorable… a short and sweet update! Eagerly awaiting the wedding ceremony and thereafter.

The accompanying images made me really nostalgic!

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Sweet update!! Can't wait for wedding

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