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Smitar's: Finding Khushi #11 Link to #12 on Page 1 (Page 142)

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rulama

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Originally posted by Arshipriya16

awesome update di,very well written di.The pics r amazing love them all.Eagerly waiting for next one.

Rashmi di love ur interpretation too.& the most I liked was ur info about all 16 shringars.I didn't thought that u had that much knowledge about all this as a working women.Don't take me wrong but I thought that because mostly women in 21 century r doesn't know all this.But I appreciate ur knowledge abt Indian culture.
 

Priya,
Ufou! D'oh
Just because I wear shorts and T-shirts you thought I won't know!Shocked
LOL

I told u di dnt get me wrong still u misunderstood me.I didn't mean what I said.I wrote my that for all 21 century women[including me].So plz dnt get angry

Priya,

If I had got angry I would have usedAngry and LOL

Caught you!Wink

Thanks di,

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Brilliant Updates SmitaClap

Sorry.. No long comments this time!!!!! Disapprove Too stuck up with things! Ouch

Loved all the missed chapters! Heart

44 (1) - Awww.. Embarrassed Arnav called HP and told him to send Khushi... Maami helping HP? Shocked Wah wah!!! Clap
Khushi getting everything Arnav likes so that she doesn't have to take the risk again and again... LOL too cute! Embarrassed

"I thought I would get atleast a pappi for taking so much risk." she sighed. "Chalo, koi baat nahi..."

Khushi did not have to complete her lament.

Arnav dragged her into his arms, and dropped kisses all over her face. Khushi stood still, enjoying the burst of his passion, loving the feel of his hard lips on her soft face, thrilled beyond words at the force of his love...

"I won't give you cause for complaint tonight, Khushi." the devil whispered. "I promise to meet all your demands, like a good husband should."


I laughed sooo hard!!!! ROFL This was sooo ADORABLE! Heart Cute chapter! Embarrassed

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44 (2) - The men indeed look handsome! Embarrassed Especially Arnav ji! Wink

"Arnav Bitwaa, you looks good enough to eat!" Mami declared. Arnav took a step back in horror. Mami was unpredictable at the best of times.

Maami... OMG!!! Shocked Did she actually say this??? Shocked OHHH MYYY GODDD!! ROFL ROFL I can totally imagine Arnav's facial expressions! LOL To die for! LOL

Awww.. Buaji.. Big smile Loved the way she nazar utharo-fied for Arnav and Ganesh and they hugged her! Hug

NK and this hindi.. ROFL

"Khabar karo, Nannav, khabar karo." NK advised, laughing away to glory.

"Kisko khabar karoon?" Arnav asked, frowning. "And what?"

"Sabar, NK bhai!" Akash corrected him. NK pulled his ear. "Sabar, sabar! Sorry, Nannav, mere Bhai!"

ROFL! ROFL

OH my gosh... Khushi looks like a princess... Red.. Arnav ka favourite.. Arnav will surely eat her alive! Wink Blushing WOW Chapter... Finally shaadi time! Dancing

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44 (3) - Anjali teasing the duo.. Awww.. Embarrassed

Anjali asked, "Nani, Babuji, Ganeshji, shall we start? Otherwise Chotey will stand here all evening, looking at Khushiji!"

Loved the dialogue! Heart 

FINALLY THE WEDDING IS OVER!!! WOOOHOOO!!!! Party Dancing It was beautifully written Smita! Clap Day Dreaming

Arnav and Khushi off on a Holiday or shall I say.. HONEYMOON! Blushing Heart

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45 (1) - Haaayeee.. Day Dreaming ArShi part was soo mesmerizing.. The cute convo about the wedding Embarrassed and then finally Arnav's surprise at the Farmhouse! Day Dreaming

Ab to Suhagraat hogi! Wink Blushing

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45 (2) - THIS WAS ABSOLUTE FLAWLESS AND MESMERISING ROMANCE... love struck kiss Day Dreaming LOVED IT TO BITS! Heart

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I'm off to Thread #12 now! Embarrassed

@Rash - Thanks for the PMs! Hug

Love, Heart

Mrina

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commenting for part 43: section 1-9 ... SIMPLY AWESOME UPDATES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Finally they are married.. Day Dreaming Off to the next thread...

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 6:45am | IP Logged
jus finished reading till part 46 all sections!!
gosh all updates r JUST MINDBLOWING !!!

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Part 43 section 5 was good. Khushi is sooo innocent. Wonder what will happen at the party now Smile
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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
part 43 section 6 was good. I wonder if Khushi will gate crash the party Smile
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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Part 43 section 7 was good...but Oh no the party was a complete disaster...I hope there is no misunderstanding 

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