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OS: The wretched letter! (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! Thumbs UpLike Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!Hug

absolutely right lilly... if actors are given this much detaiiing of the emotions n the overall scene..they cn visualize d scene vry easilly and the final act will be a masterpiece like this OS.. 


Yaar!! Woh din kab ayega??Day Dreaming Mera halaat to Karan - Arjun ki Raakhi jaisa ho raha hain...Sillypagal jaisi, bikhre huye baal lekar bolte rehna... " Mera A2 ka ayega...confession scene ayega, Antara chala jayega"!!ROFL

OHH GOD lilly.. you are hillarious... ROFLROFL 

 a  song dedicated to this impatience..

aaoge jab tum (confession)  o saajna... AKA forum phool khilenge... 
nachenge amitians.. nachege amitians ... jhoom jhoom ke... 
do dil aise milenge... LOLLOL

Kya baat hain!! Just apt song for the situation!! Thumbs UpTussi chha gaye Aman ji!!Dancing

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! Thumbs UpLike Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!Hug

absolutely right lilly... if actors are given this much detaiiing of the emotions n the overall scene..they cn visualize d scene vry easilly and the final act will be a masterpiece like this OS.. 


Yaar!! Woh din kab ayega??Day Dreaming Mera halaat to Karan - Arjun ki Raakhi jaisa ho raha hain...Sillypagal jaisi, bikhre huye baal lekar bolte rehna... " Mera A2 ka ayega...confession scene ayega, Antara chala jayega"!!ROFL

OHH GOD lilly.. you are hillarious... ROFLROFL 

 a  song dedicated to this impatience..

aaoge jab tum (confession)  o saajna... AKA forum phool khilenge... 
nachenge amitians.. nachege amitians ... jhoom jhoom ke... 
do dil aise milenge... LOLLOL

Kya baat hain!! Just apt song for the situation!! Thumbs UpTussi chha gaye Aman ji!!Dancing aapki is baat par ye song (changing d lyrics a bit)-- 
har dua salaam...mulaqat mein..
chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai lilly teri saubat mein...Hug

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! Thumbs UpLike Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!Hug

absolutely right lilly... if actors are given this much detaiiing of the emotions n the overall scene..they cn visualize d scene vry easilly and the final act will be a masterpiece like this OS.. 


Yaar!! Woh din kab ayega??Day Dreaming Mera halaat to Karan - Arjun ki Raakhi jaisa ho raha hain...Sillypagal jaisi, bikhre huye baal lekar bolte rehna... " Mera A2 ka ayega...confession scene ayega, Antara chala jayega"!!ROFL

OHH GOD lilly.. you are hillarious... ROFLROFL 

 a  song dedicated to this impatience..

aaoge jab tum (confession)  o saajna... AKA forum phool khilenge... 
nachenge amitians.. nachege amitians ... jhoom jhoom ke... 
do dil aise milenge... LOLLOL

Kya baat hain!! Just apt song for the situation!! Thumbs UpTussi chha gaye Aman ji!!Dancing aapki is baat par ye song (changing d lyrics a bit)-- 
har dua salaam...mulaqat mein..
chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai lilly teri saubat mein...Hug

 Too good!! Apke liye kuchh lines to depict my happiness " Mhare hiwra mein naache mor tat thaiya thaiya / Aise bandhe dosti ki dor hui main bawariya / Badla mausam, badle nazare, ya badla hain nazariya?"Hug

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! Thumbs UpLike Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!Hug

absolutely right lilly... if actors are given this much detaiiing of the emotions n the overall scene..they cn visualize d scene vry easilly and the final act will be a masterpiece like this OS.. 


Yaar!! Woh din kab ayega??Day Dreaming Mera halaat to Karan - Arjun ki Raakhi jaisa ho raha hain...Sillypagal jaisi, bikhre huye baal lekar bolte rehna... " Mera A2 ka ayega...confession scene ayega, Antara chala jayega"!!ROFL

OHH GOD lilly.. you are hillarious... ROFLROFL 

 a  song dedicated to this impatience..

aaoge jab tum (confession)  o saajna... AKA forum phool khilenge... 
nachenge amitians.. nachege amitians ... jhoom jhoom ke... 
do dil aise milenge... LOLLOL

Kya baat hain!! Just apt song for the situation!! Thumbs UpTussi chha gaye Aman ji!!Dancing aapki is baat par ye song (changing d lyrics a bit)-- 
har dua salaam...mulaqat mein..
chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai lilly teri saubat mein...Hug

 Too good!! Apke liye kuchh lines to depict my happiness " Mhare hiwra mein naache mor tat thaiya thaiya / Aise bandhe dosti ki dor hui main bawariya / Badla mausam, badle nazare, ya badla hain nazariya?"Hug

kya baat hai.. aaj toh mehfil lagg gayi... Big smile pta nahin kavi n sara khan hain..!! forum looks deserted... feels like u n me are two hawks mandraofying over a dessert..Shocked

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

Originally posted by grintson

Originally posted by lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! Thumbs UpLike Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!Hug

absolutely right lilly... if actors are given this much detaiiing of the emotions n the overall scene..they cn visualize d scene vry easilly and the final act will be a masterpiece like this OS.. 


Yaar!! Woh din kab ayega??Day Dreaming Mera halaat to Karan - Arjun ki Raakhi jaisa ho raha hain...Sillypagal jaisi, bikhre huye baal lekar bolte rehna... " Mera A2 ka ayega...confession scene ayega, Antara chala jayega"!!ROFL

OHH GOD lilly.. you are hillarious... ROFLROFL 

 a  song dedicated to this impatience..

aaoge jab tum (confession)  o saajna... AKA forum phool khilenge... 
nachenge amitians.. nachege amitians ... jhoom jhoom ke... 
do dil aise milenge... LOLLOL

Kya baat hain!! Just apt song for the situation!! Thumbs UpTussi chha gaye Aman ji!!Dancing aapki is baat par ye song (changing d lyrics a bit)-- 
har dua salaam...mulaqat mein..
chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai lilly teri saubat mein...Hug

 Too good!! Apke liye kuchh lines to depict my happiness " Mhare hiwra mein naache mor tat thaiya thaiya / Aise bandhe dosti ki dor hui main bawariya / Badla mausam, badle nazare, ya badla hain nazariya?"Hug

kya baat hai.. aaj toh mehfil lagg gayi... Big smile pta nahin kavi n sara khan hain..!! forum looks deserted... feels like u n me are two hawks mandraofying over a dessert..Shocked

Sach mein yaaar!! But felt gr8 2 c u online!! As usual missing Sara & emerald.Ouch I won't be onln tonightCry Aj kal forum mein baat na karun to raat ko neend nahi aati.


Edited by lily.lotus.rosy - 24 June 2013 at 4:12am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
 Wonderful work dearie!!!Thumbs Up
"Varsha :Dekh Ammu, Amitji kafi samajdar aur sulje hue insaan hain. Tumne dekha nahi kis tarah se Kajal ke papa ko unone madat ki aur kissiko kanokan khabar bhi nahi hui. Ussi tarah shayad uss ladki ko bhi koi pareshani hogi, aur woh baat Amit kumar kisiko bhi batana nahi chahthe. Jab Amitji keh rahe hain ki sahi waqt par sab bata denge tho tu etani fikir kyu kar rahi hain !"
 
I really wish thing turn out to be this way.

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dwani13

  After reading this i feel a great relaxation.Ye anthra-manthra track had made me mad.kab vo dhonom ek ho jayegha?us sundar pal ka inthazar mem hai ab mem.

I wish that this antra  unknowingly would help amit to realize his feelings for amita and it will help us to see perfect   "PATI AMIT"Day Dreaming

thanks a lot for this superb part.i am so much proud of myself having such a buddy who is the owner great realistic,romantic thoughts of life.

Hugthis is for you.

Thanks dear! Glad that you liked it.This is for u.Hug



Edited by emeraldeye - 24 June 2013 at 9:04am
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by grintson

You nailed it again Kavi...Thumbs Up  Me and My whole Vocab is feeling helpless... how to express how i am feeling right now... the sad part of the OS stirred my soul and the happy wala part is making me feel like having butterflies in my stomach... Big smile 
it was jussst beautiful... Heart

Hey Aman, thanks. Smile Happy that you liked it.

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