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Happiness:When Viraat's Heart Spoke(Sequel)Pg 6 (Page 5)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
AWESOME OS.

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Sumu you are just AMAZING <3 You write Beautifully! Left you a longer comment on FB! :) 
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Beautiful OS!! Heart Emotional but very realistic.. Virman got separated in the end but still somewhere I loved the ending.. Manvi's words about her husband and Virat's realization are just awesome ClapClap.. Virat made a mistake and he realized it too but life didn't give him a second chance.. We should never ignore our loved ones.. Loved it Sumana HeartHeart.. Very well written ClapClap.. Take care Smile

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
beautifully written! SmileSmile 

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
You are truely an amazing writer, who sticks to the realities of life and what they bring us, the lessons you embed in your stories are amazing, and the way you bring them out..hats off women, i loved this! <3 :*

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
:'( i thought in d end may be virman will be together
but no...it was a amazing story
but virman seperated i didnt like d end :(

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
sad ending...
bt lv d OS...   
n ur writing is awesome... well described virats emotions...
expecting 2nd part n happy ending

Edited by sweetyyyyyyy - 23 June 2013 at 10:35pm

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by viratmanvi

Unres ( i know wat was in your mind while u wer wriitn this os.Tongue n its just mindblowing )

comin to your os ,
you know ususally i hate sad ending.. but your os ending gave me sum kind of satisfaction...simply loved the ending.. ..it was sad. but a need to show such end..
in life . we hardly get  a 2nd chance.
if u get the oppourtuniy u shud grab it in first instance..we realise the real worth of sum1 in our life once its too late
Ba i absoulutely lovd your os the mesgse you treid to convey is beautiful.. n  a much needed one..
it made me tearyCry
awesum os.. n hope u fine nowTongue


LOL  still sulking u can expect another OS...LOLLOLLOL ...Mwaah for the comments

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