Happiness:When Viraat's Heart Spoke(Sequel)Pg 6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sumana123

LOL ...I agree that' my dream man...and ...Sad OS agree too..but I showed the other side of the coin ..that we should not trust a man who ignore us at some point of time

Sumu rotlu... 🤣 Lets party 😉

one of the best os i read.

Sumu you are just AMAZING <3 You write Beautifully! Left you a longer comment on FB! :) 

Beautiful OS!! ❤️ Emotional but very realistic.. Virman got separated in the end but still somewhere I loved the ending.. Manvi's words about her husband and Virat's realization are just awesome 👏👏.. Virat made a mistake and he realized it too but life didn't give him a second chance.. We should never ignore our loved ones.. Loved it Sumana ❤️❤️.. Very well written 👏👏.. Take care 😊

beautifully written! 😊😊 

You are truely an amazing writer, who sticks to the realities of life and what they bring us, the lessons you embed in your stories are amazing, and the way you bring them out..hats off women, i loved this! <3 :*

:'( i thought in d end may be virman will be together
but no...it was a amazing story
but virman seperated i didnt like d end :(

sad ending...
bt lv d OS...   
n ur writing is awesome... well described virats emotions...
expecting 2nd part n happy endingEdited by sweetyyyyyyy - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: viratmanvi

Unres ( i know wat was in your mind while u wer wriitn this os.😛 n its just mindblowing )

comin to your os ,

you know ususally i hate sad ending.. but your os ending gave me sum kind of satisfaction...simply loved the ending.. ..it was sad. but a need to show such end..

in life . we hardly get  a 2nd chance.

if u get the oppourtuniy u shud grab it in first instance..we realise the real worth of sum1 in our life once its too late

Ba i absoulutely lovd your os the mesgse you treid to convey is beautiful.. n  a much needed one..

it made me teary😭

awesum os.. n hope u fine now😛

LOL  still sulking u can expect another OS...😆😆😆 ...Mwaah for the comments

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

You are truely an amazing writer, who sticks to the realities of life and what they bring us, the lessons you embed in your stories are amazing, and the way you bring them out..hats off women, i loved this! <3 :*

Awww