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I kind of like how AU your fic is... Nicely written too! Please PM me when you update Smile

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Hey guys! Hope you like this chapter!


Chapter 3 

Antara was about to walk back towards the house when she turned around. 

"What did you say to my mama?"

"Nothing."

"Look, just stay away from my family. Being in close proximity to you would mean their lives would be at risk. And I don't want their lives to be at risk just because of a goon who achieved respect by spreading dread and has impure intentions for everything he does. Someone like you would not consider your parents and siblings as your number 1 priority but for me my family is everything."

Rage was burning throughout Raghu's entire body. He grabbed hold of her arms and pressed her against the wall that he previously had his back to. 

"You made made the wrong move by threatening me. Now watch what I do to them. Watch them in pain, in shame and their regret about coming here."

Antara brushed off the threat and walked into the house. 

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12.00 noon,
Basti

Ishaan walked out into the blazing heat of Mumbai, examining his new surroundings. 

Whilst he was looking at some kids playing football on the other side of the street, a car emerged out of nowhere speeding down the road towards him. Before he had a chance to react he was hit by the vehicle and land several metres away from where he was originally standing. A crowd gathered around the body of the young child who's was bleeding and limbs were positioned in an abnormal manner.

"Ishaan." He registered a unfamiliar voice along with the voice of his sister. 

"Ishaan, look at me, please." Antara begged he saw a blurred shadow through his vision.

"Hey chote, hang on." Raghu voiced was collectively calm, but his mind was screaming for the child he felt he had a connection with. 

Ishaan felt himself being picked up before he lost consciousness.

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2.30pm
Bombay Hospital

The worried faces of Antara and Mamaji waited impatiently for the doctor to emerge from the hospital room. A few moments later the doctor exited the from the room. 

"Doctor, is Ishaan ok?" She questioned as she rushed towards him.

"Well, the patient has broken his right leg in two places, dislocated his left shoulder and sprained his right arm. His leg will be in a brace for approximately 6 months, the left arm will be in sling until it heals and the sprained wrist will be in a brace for up to 3 months.  As well as this he seems to have a severe concussion and for that reason I would like to keep him in hospital overnight for observation. If he doesn't deteriorate he should be able to go home tomorrow. Here are some medication which you'll need to get from the pharmacy."

Mamaji got the list from the doctor, before the doctor walked to his office. 

"Oh dear god. Antara the medication on this prescription are very expensive. How are we going to pay for the treatment?"

"Mamaji don't worry about that I will sort that out when I come back. I'm going home to collect something's for Ishu. I will be back as soon as I can."

Without letting Mamaji reply she walked out towards the entrance, making her way back home.

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3.05pm
Basti

Antara got out of the car after paying the taxi driver. 

It seemed strange that nobody was present outside at this. The only noise that could be heard was the wind howling and a booming sound from the garage where Raghu normally spent all his time. 

Curiously, Antara walked toward the direction of the suspicious sound. Her whole body was paralysed from what she saw.


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Edited by jav101 - 17 July 2013 at 9:12am

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Note to All Readers:
I will try to update at least once a week, since summer holidays are approaching. If I don't I will let you know in advance. 

And thank you to all who comment, read and like this FF. 

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Nyc update. Cntinue soon Embarrassed

 Btw plz update ur arvi ff also Cry

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