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RaNtara 4Shot: Brighter Future (Page 2)

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Really gud start...continue pls.

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It was a nice starting.

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Here's the next one.


Chapter 2

"You know it's not safe to be sat here at this time."

Without looking up she replied, "Go away."

He stood there watching the strange girl carefully.

"Look, I am in no mood to argue with you right now."

She got up to walk around him. A few metres away from Raghu the recorder slipped out of her hands and smashed on the ground.

"No." Raghu heard her gasping sob. "What have I done she said, cradling the broken pieces."

"Buy yourself another one." He rolled his eyes, thinking she was probably mentally disturbed.

"Papa."

She inhales sharply as blood oozed from a deep cut on her hand caused by the sharp edge of the broken plastic.

"What's so special about it?" He wondered. Why would she be crying about a piece of plastic.

"Papa. Papa's voice."

"What?"

"It's the only thing I have of him. He's gone faraway. No one can reach him anymore. Ishaan misses him but he doesn't know the truth. Neither does mama."

Meaning?"

"My father is dead. That's why we're here, in a city where we don't want to be."

Raghu eyes filled with regret but only for a smallest fraction of a moment.

"Papa always said not to keep anything bottled up inside yourself. I didn't listen to his advise. And here I am talking to a goon. A man who gets a thrill out of fighting, guns and threatening people. I disagree with my father on one of his sayings."
"Never be angry with a person. It's their intention and upbringing you should be angry with but a person like you should be locked up in a cell and left to rot but what can we do, this country is too corrupt to put criminals away."

Raghu hands balled into fists as he tried to rein in his anger.

"Go home." He uttered with authority in his voice as he walked toward the entrance of his home.

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Next day 4am.

"Antara. Antara get up. We can't find your mother Antara. Please get up." Noor Apa frightened voice

"What? Mama's not in the house?" She questioned. Before Noor could reply she was off.

Antara rushed down the stairs and out of the house. She walked around dodging boxes in the street. She walked past the garage and there was her mother talking to Raghu.

"Mama, do have any idea how much you frightened all of us?"

"Antara, this boys was shouting at you. Wait until Doctor Saab comes back, he will tell off this boy."

"Yes mama."

"Antara, has Doctor Saab phoned yet?"

"No mama. There's no signal in the area papa is in."

"Oh."

"Mama come on let's go inside."

Mami rushed toward them.

"Didi, where were you. You gave us all a fright. Come, let's go inside."

Antara was about to walk back towards the house when she turned around.

"What did you say to my mama?"




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Edited by jav101 - 17 July 2013 at 9:14am

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awwsum chapter...well done

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that was superb... just can't wait to read more! i wonder what raghu told antara's mother?! please update soon!

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