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RaNtara 4Shot: Brighter Future

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Brighter Future
I will post this story on 23.6.13 by 2pm in Britain.
The FF is inspired by the precap on 21/06/13.

Edited by jav101 - 20 January 2014 at 1:16pm

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Chapter 1 - Below

Chapter 2 - Page 2

Edited by jav101 - 16 July 2013 at 5:50am

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Since I'm up early I decided to post the story so here it is. Hope you guys like it.

Chapter 1

Ishaan walked toward Raghu, Battery and Machmach, with a frown etched across his face. Their laughter made the frown lines on his face go deeper. Hastily, he picked up a stone lying nearby, without a second thought he threw the stone toward Raghu and hit him on the forehead.

Raghu rubbed his forehead, anger spread on his face. He focused on the space where the stone had been launched from only to see it was a little boy who he recognised as the new girl's brother.

His frown visibly disappeared as he saw the unmistakable anger and pain in the boy's eyes.

"How dare you hit bhai?" Machmach shouted, startling Antara who looked out of the window to see why there was such a commotion at 10:30pm.

"Ishu." She murmured, rushing down the steps and out of the house as she saw one of the gangsters heading towards her brother. As she stepped out of the house she heard a familiar voice.

"Machmach. Battery. Go home."

"Lekin bhai-"

Machmach stopped as he saw his respected friend's hand spread telling him to listen.

With that Machmach and Battery headed off to their respective homes.

Anatara turned her brother so he faced her.

"Ishu you shouldn't have hit him."

"But didi, he's the reason why mama is acting strange. She's always worried about you. It's like I don't exist."

Raghu stood, listening to his strange accusation.


"Didi I want to go home please. Back to papa. I want papa to play cricket with me. I want papa." He sobbed.

Antara eyes turned misty and this did not go unnoticed by Raghu.

"Ishu listen to me. Mama is acting like this because papa isn't here."

"But why isn't papa here? Papa wouldn't leave us so where is he?"


"Where is papa."

"Papa is gone. He's gone." Tears streamed down her cheeks. Raghu felt the urge to go and wipe them.

"Gone? Papa wouldn't go anywhere without us. Didi what aren't you telling me? Please tell me?" Ishaan begged.

"Ishu what I meant to say was papa has gone for some work he papa will come back soon, don't worry. She forced smile on her face."

"Go and sleep. Papa wouldn't want you misbehaving."

"Ok didi." He walked back into the house.

Antara saw the recorder,which she used to capture her father's wisdom, on the table near the open window. She reached out and grabbed it and walked towards a bench on the side of the house.

Raghu heard a man's voice being played, more tears protruded from Antara's eyes. He walked towards her.

"You know it's not safe to be sat here at this time."

Without looking up she replied, "Go away."

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Edited by jav101 - 17 July 2013 at 9:13am

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