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Asad Zoya Story **NEW PART 8 - Pg 14 ** (Page 2)

hirie Goldie

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
ok guys, will update on this topic itself, for ease of reading... 

should the update go above??

or as a reply to the original post (in this case i can put up the page info on the top of this page, so that people reading in from the start can follow up! and title of this post will keep changing as new updates are up to say what page they're on!)

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hirie

ok guys, will update on this topic itself, for ease of reading... 
or as a reply to the original post (in this case i can put up the page info on the top of this page, so that people reading in from the start can follow up! and title of this post will keep changing as new updates are up to say what page they're on!)
do it like that. it well be very good.
hirie Goldie

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Story continued... Part 2...

Asad leaves for Ajmer, and on what seems like a long journey to him, his mind is filled with an overwhelming sense of loss, confusion, betrayal, hatred, pain and most of all, fear! A sense of losing not only the woman he's loved, something he never though he'd be capable of, but also losing the trust of his very own mother and sister, who were his life all these years... A sense of confusion for not being able to put the pieces of puzzle together of the treacherous evening that turned his life upside down... A sense of betrayal that he is responsible for, for not only betraying his fiancees trust, but also the trust of values so painstakingly instilled in him by his mother... A sense of hatred for his own self for having done the very exact same thing that he hates his father did... A sense of pain for causing everyone so much misery, not just to his own self... And most importantly, a sense of fear for losing the love of his love, a fear for her security, a fear for her safety, a fear for her acceptance...

Meanwhile Tanveer, who has cleverly decided to follow Asad, is smirking away thinking he will never let the growing distance between Asad and Zoya decrease...

Back at Bhopal, Najma is also upset, but worried for Dilshad's health as she has stopped eating and is severely depressed. She wonders what could have happened for her brother to go off track completely and commit such an act of offense? She then thinks of all the times Zoya tried uncover Tanveer's true intentions and how Asad always supported Tanveer... She starts to think maybe Asad always had a thing for Tanveer, but then rationalizes her wandering thoughts and thinks that wouldn't be possible as her brother wouldn't have agreed to marry Zoya, that his brother simply wasn't the kind to play silly pranks or games. She also remembered the times when she'd seen love for Zoya in his eyes, even though he never himself expressed it to her, or anyone else for that matter, not even to Zoya herself! She starts to wonder if what Zoya said was all true and this was all a part of Tanveer's plan? She starts to doubt Tanveer and goes to Dilshad and tries to focus her attention away from all the depressive thoughts. She tells her about her thoughts and Dilshad too starts to wonder what the reality is behind the whole matter. She wants to believe that her son is innocent and that he would never do such a thing, but being a mother of a daughter, she also cannot overlook the fact that Zoya saw with her very own eyes. But Najma tells her that looks can be deceiving and often what we see with our very own eyes is not the plain and simple truth. It can be a lot more complicated, and a lot more devious than what meets the eye. They both recollect that Zoya got a call from someone and left the wedding venue in a hurry. They call Asad to find out if there is any way to know who Zoya got the call from, and Asad informs them that he is en route to Ajmer, as that's where Zoya is headed. 

Dilshad is relieved that Zoya will be fine once Asad finds him and gets a small ray of hope that things might get better. She calls Aapi who is fuming that Asad is the one going to get her back, but not knowing the city well herself, she cannot come up with a better solution. And she asks Dilshad to keep her updated.

Zoya wanders aimlessly once she reaches Ajmer... She doesn't know what to do! She sits on a bench and starts weeping away and can only feel being totally helpless and not in control of anything anymore... She wishes she could rewind time, be more careful and stop all the misdeeds from happening... If only that was possible...

Having taken a flight to Ajmer to give him the much need advantage of time, Asad is already at the train station and waiting to see Zoya's face... He waits outside and keeps looking at everyone who comes out, almost as if it were an airport where people wait for their loved one's arrival! He waits and waits, but there is no sight of Zoya. When the density of people coming out becomes extremely low, he thinks of searching inside, and frantically tries to look for her. He just misses seeing her sitting on the bench due to people passing by. He then starts yelling her name and Zoya happens to hear him and for a second stops crying and gets up...

Zoya: Mr Khan?

Just the Asad turns around and sees Zoya standing far away, and runs towards her with a faint smile on his face...

Asad: Zoya...

Zoya picks up her bag and tried to walk away but Asad holds her hand.

Zoya: Mera haath chodiye Mr Khan!
Asad: Zoya... Zoya ek baar... ek baar meri baat sun lo... Zoya please...
Zoya: Mr Khan! 
Asad: Try to understand Ms Farooqi...
Zoya: Try to understand? Try to understand what Mr Khan? Bataiye... 
Asad: Main jaanta hu... mujhe pata hai ki... ki... woh...
Zoya: Main bhi sab kuch jaanti hu Mr Khan, aur please aap mujhe jaane dijiye! Aap waise hi mujhe bahut rula chuke hai... I don't want to waste more tears on you...

Asad is hurt by what Zoya says, but he lets go of her hand and tries to tell her to return home and not run away... But Zoya doesn't listen and gets inside a taxi... Asad follows her...

Asad loses track of Zoya but manages to find the taxi she boarded parked on the side... He quickly gets down and asks the driver where he dropped Zoya and starts to run back as he says just a few meters away on the hill as she wanted to walk along the path and clear her head out, he continues to say she looked very upset... But Asad runs away...

He stumbles upon a bag on the hilly trail and while looking at it, notices someone lady running away ahead. He then realizes that the bag is Zoya's and she couldn't have just thrown her bag here, so wonders if something's happened to her and is worried for her safety... He starts to look around and starts shouting her name, while Zoya lays on the floor right under the small hill... He cannot find her, but keeps going deeper into the trail and before he knows it, he's at the bottom of the hill... and he's sees someone lying on the ground... He runs towards the person and is shocked and relieved to find a badly bruised Zoya. He takes her in his arms and hugs her tight to his chest and cries out loud.

Asad: (he looks at her face while still holding her in his arms) Zoya... I'm sorry Zoya... please forgive me... wake up Zoya...

He tries really hard to get her back to her senses, but in vain. He picks her up and starts walking towards a stream flowing closeby. He puts her on the ground and sprints some water on her face. Zoya slowly opens her eyes and is shocked to see Asad.

Zoya: (in a feeble voice...) Mr. Khan... aap?
Asad: Zoya.. are you okay?
Zoya: How can I... (voice starts to fade...)
Asad: Kuch mat bolo Zoya... you're badly hurt...
Zoya: Lekin...
Asad: Lekin vekin kuch nahi...
Zoya: I don't need your help, just... just leave me alone

Asad thinks she doesn't know what she's talking about... and knows she won't be able to go anywhere by herself in this wilderness in her current injured state, so he picks her up and starts to walk again...

Zoya: Mujhe niche utariye... aaw...

Then she realizes her left leg is badly hurt and that she won't be able to walk, but is still adamant on not being in his arms...

Zoya: Mujhe niche utariye Mr Khan!
Asad: Aap chal nahi payengi...
Zoya: Mujhe chalna ho, ya baithna ho, jo bhi karna ho, main khud kar loongi...
Asad: Dekhiye Ms Farooqi...
Zoya: Dekhiye Mr Khan, main aapse pehle bhi keh chuki hoon, mujhe aapki koi help nahi chahiye, okay? So please let go of me!

Asad doesn't see a point of arguing with her so lets her go and she is unable to stand by herself, while Asad watches her trying to sit down slowly. Zoya wonders how she is going to gather courage to get up and get out of this messy place, and Asad comes close to her.

Asad: Aap yahan par aise hi baithe rahiye... Agar aap ziddi hai, to main bhi yahi par baith kar intezaar karunga
Zoya: You can do whatever you want, just leave me alone!
Asad: To theek hai...

Zoya tries to move her face away but it pains her to move...

Zoya: Ouch... aaah...
Asad: That enough Ms Farooqi... (he picks her up in his arms again and starts walking..) 
Zoya: Mr Khan!
Asad: Aap ko jo kehna hai, bol dijiye, main kuch bhi nahi kahunga, lekin main aapko akela yaha aise chod kar kahi nahi jaaunga! Aapko first aid ki zaroorat hai...

Zoya is speechless. She feels the pain from her wounds but thinks its nothing compared to the pain that the doomed evening has given her!

Edited by hirie - 22 June 2013 at 6:08pm

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Absolutely love ittt! Please update sooonnn!! :)))))

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hirie Goldie

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will update soon, thanks for all the appreciation!
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Really hope something like this happens in the show! 

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