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Asad Zoya Story **NEW PART 8 - Pg 14 ** (Page 12)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
who wants more update? don't y'all think the current track is far more interesting than my story??

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Wow mindblowing

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Story continues... Part 7...

So Asad and Zoya are supposed to walk away to their own rooms... Dilshad reminds Zoya to call her Aapi before she goes to bed... As Dilshad goes to check up on Najma, Asad and Zoya stare a last glance at one another and then keep walking to their rooms... They so desperately want to be together, share each other's warmth, look into each others eyes and just hold one another, like no one can separate them... But alas, so it cannot be... the night is looming upon them and the fatigue and restlessness is catching up... At least there is a sense of relief that the days to come will be brighter, nicer and most importantly safer for them all! And a new hope of the house being filled with happiness and celebrations...

Zoya goes to her room and calls her Aapi who is really please to hear her voice. She reprimands her for running away like this in a country like India, where anything can happen, and is just about to say that she's going to book flights back to New York first thing in the morning... But Zoya interrupts her and tells her that things have been resolved... Her Aapi gets confused but Zoya explains that Tanveer was behind everything and that everything that happened on the day of her Nikaah was a set-up. But now that Tanveer has been taken away by the police, every one can breathe a sigh of relief and fresh air! Her Aapi is confused as ever but Zoya assures her that things will get better and that they can sit and talk together tomorrow.

Meanwhile Dilshad goes into Najma's room and she gets up from her bed. She says that she heard someone come but as per her Ammi's instructions, didn't want to come out of the room unless she called for her. She asks if everything is okay, and Dilshad says all is fine now. She explains that Zoya and Asad are back, hearing which Najma is elated but then wonders what is to happen next... But Dilshad quickly tells her that Tanveer has been taken away by the police and Najma is shocked to hear that! But she is also relieved. Dilshad then tells her to have a good nights sleep, as everyone needs the much needed rest, and before leaving says all will be fine as nothing happened that night of the Nikaah... it was all part of a devious plan that Tanveer concocted to get Asad... I wish I'd known!

As Asad in his room changes his clothes, he thinks of Zoya... all her pain in the desert, all her sorrow in Ajmer... (Khudaya ve, ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb... dil ke kareeb laya, dil ka naseeb re..) But then thinks of all the good times they spent together, like the time when she made smiley toasts for him which brought a smile to his face... like the time she thought he was a spy and he let her think that smirking away... like the time when he made coffee for her the first time and she spit it out saying it was like him... dark and bitter! He wonders if he really is dark and bitter... He looks up in the mirror, and says to himself... "bitter... maybe... but dark?? never!"

Zoya ends her call with her Aapi and gets changed too. She really wants to go to Asad's room and say sorry for not having trusted him, and having known Tanveer's devious plans, she was naive enough to hold Asad equally responsible for the misdeeds. Turned out that there was no misdeed of any sort that actually took place! But then she thinks why should she go and apologize... he never did for all the times she asked him to trust her... But then has flashbacks of all the scenes in Ajmer where Asad kept apologizing for never having trusted her... And she smiles and decides to sneak into his room...

She walks towards his door, but then thinks its more fun to sneak into his room through his window... so goes out and climbs into his room by the window... Asad who is tossing and turning in his bed jumps up...

Asad: Ms Farooqi... 
Zoya: (gestures..) Shhh...
Asad: Aap... aap yaha kya kar rahi hai? Mera matlab hai woh... woh Ammi ne kaha tha...
Zoya: Mujhe pata hai Phoopi kya kaha tha...
Asad: (slowly walks towards her... and looks deep into her eyes...) Zoya...
Zoya: (lagta hai phir woh actually woh actually kar ke kuch nahi kahenge Mr Khan...) Mr Khan! I love..
Asad: (is shocked to hear Zoya about to say the words... so quickly covers her mouth with his hands...) I... I love you Ms Farooqi...
Zoya: (her eyes are wide open and then start to flutter as she is shocked to hear those magical words from her Mr Khans very own mouth... and as Asad let's go of his hand..) What? Aapne kya kaha??
Asad: (gives a 'not so impressed' look and says) Really? Aap chahti hai ki main phir se kahu?
Zoya: Haa... mera matlab hai nahi... (she feels slightly shy but looks up at him and says...) I love you too Mr Khan! 

They both share an awkward but a happy moment looking into one another's eyes, not knowing what to do next... And just as Asad is about to hug Zoya, Dilshad knocks and comes in... 

Dilshad: Zoya... mujhe pata tha.. tum dono... Aapi se baat hui Zoya?
Zoya: Umm... Ji, ji Phoopi... maine unko sab kuch bata diya... ya...
Asad: Ammi... woh...
Dilshad: Bas rehne do... chalo Zoya... lagta hai kal hi tum dono ka nikaah karva dena padega...

Zoya feels shy and smiles while Asad looks happy... As they both leave, on one hand while Asad feels happy that things are better sooner than he thought, but on the other hand he can't help but wonder why Tanveer did all that she did. He cannot understand what led her to become such a venomous person and carry out such acts of of devilishness. He then stops himself from thinking more about her, not wanting to give importance to someone who has hurt her family so much, hurt Zoya so much... He says to himself that he doesn't care if the person once used to be a close friends and it doesn't matter anymore where they are, what they do and what fate they receive...

Meanwhile Zoya is happy when she finally goes to sleep in her room. She thanks Allah for being with the right person in the end and bringing justice to evil! She soon falls asleep...

When she wakes up, she finds Asad getting ready and a piece of suit for her ready on her bed for her to wear. She thinks she wants to wear jeans today but Asad tells her from now on she has to wear Indian wear only! Zoya tries to fight it, but Asad says if she wants to live in this house... she has to dress like the other women in the house dress. Its only fair!! She starts to wonder what she's married into... And says "Mr Khan..." but he walks away...

And she opens her eyes to find it was only a dream... She hits herself in the head thinking of how stupid her mind can be... thinking of such pointless things when she has such a nice day ahead of her.. when things are going to get right and she can finally be with the love of her life! She feels really good recollecting the moments from the previous nights when Asad told her the magical words, though she knows he only said them as she was about to say them... But makes herself understand that at least he said them before her... and deep down he must have known that she wanted to hear those words from him before she said them to him herself...

Dilshad goes to Asad's room and kisses her forehead and apologizes to him for not having trusted him... She has tears in her eyes and Asad tells her there is no need, and she says that she is very happy today that his son knows right from wrong and that he didn't do anything that would make her feel shameful. She admits that she said a few harsh things to him and even compared him to his father, someone whom he'd hated so much all his life, but now after having known the truth, she wishes she could take her words back. Asad stops her and hugs her and tells her that she did what she did as she is his Ammi, and if anyone in this world has a right to scold him, its her! Dilshad wipes off her tears and says not for long, as someone else, ahem ahem, will soon take over and scold him for being the way he is! Asad pretends he doesn't know what she's talking about, but they both very well know... and look at each other and smile and then go for breakfast.

At the breakfast table, Zoya and Najma are making breakfast and setting the table when Aapi comes and hugs Zoya. She says how worried she'd been and that she should never do such a thing again. Zoya tells her to calm down and just then Dilshad and Asad enter. Zoya looks up at Asad with dreamy eyes and Asad goes upto her...

Asad: Main aap sab ke samne... Ms Farooqi ko... mera matlab hai Zoya se kuch puchchna chahta hu...
Zoya: Looks happy but a bit worried... (thinks aisi kaun si baat hai jo Mr Khan sab ke samne puchna chahte hai?)
Asad: (takes Zoya's hand in his hands...) Zoya... will you marry me?

Everyone is surprised but the element is slowly overshadowed by happiness and smiles all around... And Zoya is short of words... and just looks into his eyes... and nods...



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Edited by hirie - 25 June 2013 at 5:51pm

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
awesome chapter yay he went down on one knee awesome continue soon

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Superb at last tanveer out

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princess84 - would you like pms on updates?
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fantastic updates.
Enjoy reading them.
Keep it up.
Waiting for next update

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