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ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~ #9 *Ch 20 Pg 119 30/08 +EXT (Page 73)

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
Okey..my like button didn't wort!
But i loved ur update:)
This was an amaizing update:)
Really i loved it Appy:-)
I am Happy:-)
Thanks alot for this update:)

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Awesome update ...
GG is goin to create prob ...

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Awww...loved the caring arnav
and gazal ..oh no she is starting her game
looking froward to the next part

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Loved the extension part.
Love the way arnav is finally caring for khushi.
I hate GG & anjali.
Hope khushi has strength to face the truth.

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 12:29am | IP Logged
loved the extension part di Embarrassed beautifully written
Arnav has changed a lot... Im loving it
and that disgusting GG Angry hate her to the core Angry
eagerly waiting for the nxt part

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged
LOVED the extension, it was so heartwarming to see Khushi get the kind of love and care she deserved. Arnav is finally repenting and making up for the bitter past. His undivided attention for his love was wonderful to see, this FF is intense and you portray everything beautifully. At first you left us with such a strong impact with all the tragedies that happened to Khushi where her husband misunderstood her, mistreated her, abused her (perhaps unknowingly both Physically and emotionally) and now he is a changed man he has realized the innocence and purity that embodies his wife.  He is treating her how he should have treated her all along. Anjali still scares me but hopefully Arnav has that aspect of Khushi's life under control that is to make sure Anjali does not harm her in anyway. LOved the way Arnav asked her to take care of Khushi's clothes, etc.

The last bit of the extension has scared me massively, for some reason I am hoping under the pretext that it is their wedding DVD Arnav and Khushi can both watch it together. As much as it is lovely to see Arnav making up for the hell he put his little wife through, he still hasn't apologized to her for this part and he needs to Woo her. Let's see if Khushi will still be completely naive and forgiving I am sure whatever you have instore for Arnav and Khushi it will be fantastic! Because so far you have done wonders with this story! I just CANNOT wait for the next UPDATE! 

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
So glad that the story has moved on from the hospital scene. I think because the updates were so far apart, that scene dragged. It is now getting very interesting with devious Anjali and the dangerous mother about to attack!  I am sure that whatever they do, it will only make Arnav and Khushi's bond stronger ( i hope!). I do feel that Khushi needs to grow up a bit and show some maturity. Arnav has changed, let her change a bit as well?

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rana5

So glad that the story has moved on from the hospital scene. I think because the updates were so far apart, that scene dragged. It is now getting very interesting with devious Anjali and the dangerous mother about to attack!  I am sure that whatever they do, it will only make Arnav and Khushi's bond stronger ( i hope!). I do feel that Khushi needs to grow up a bit and show some maturity. Arnav has changed, let her change a bit as well?

yap i agree... but at the same time hospital scene was one of the high point of the story... it is definately a foundation of upcoming chapters... Arnav's redemption had to be shown elaborated... so i focused on minute details... trust me these parts are going to play a vital role in future... Embarrassed

i hope you enjoy upcoming episodes.

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