Originally posted by HNosheen
Hi di, this is from a very humbled me because first i could not edit my "reserved" comment and then you have mentioned that you missed my remarks on the previous update . this made me feel so overwhelmed
and sorry I was a bit too occupied with some problems I couldn't come back and edit and there came another PM from ur side about the fresh chapter. - Don't say sorry dear...i understand life happens and I myself is a very abd commentor on many FFs as other writers will say...i just trully look forward to your feedback...muaah
Thanks for the PM both times
and for the updates which are becoming quicker than before. this makes me happy
The previous chapter actually left me too shocked to comprehend what I wanted to say
everything happened all of a sudden. Maan understanding and acting so mature that he needs to give space to Geet so that she considers and understands her emotions .
before the accident, how Geet cried. glad she let it out for once. poor girl is too young and already has faced widowhood, her cruel blood-thirsty brother, and now the feeling of causing danger to the one man she truly loves. this is too much for her and its good at least she cried for once. even if crying is no solution, it still is necessary in such a suffocating situation when one simply doesnt understand immediately as to what should be done. it relaxes the tension and after this, the brain can work for the thought process. i liked this part because of its positive effect in the long run.
Yes absolutely bang on. There is no one to guide her or even teel her it is ok, take this step. She is scared of hapiness also now...
and then the accident. the way u described, i could practically imagine the scenario and it horrified me
and the way Maan just could not forget about his responsibilities, his loved ones
when he lost his senses. how he JUST couldnt forget Geet even at that time. this shows the depth and purity of his feelings towards her. he did not take her real name and Meera also kept quiet about disclosing "Mishty" . Im glad she's too young but wise enough to calculate how things should not be rushed in this already-so-complicated-moment. - Yes Meera plays an improtant role. I took so much time building her relationship with Maaneet because she will always provide the third positive affect in this story. She may be young but she is a responsible mother.
I guess Daadima might become reluctant in the beginning but since she really really loves Maan, she won't object much long when all she cares for is her grandson's happiness. but as per NT n Dev, they seem mean and cunning to me and they certainly would like to convince Daadima against Geet. Im holding on to the hope that they wont succeed.
The song you chose "Bichhrann
" was absolutely perfect for this situation. She was so adamant to bring distance between them and see what God did to bring them closer again. They are simply not MEANT
to stay apart. The simple truth.
This update can be simplified in one word. Beautiful.
its beautiful how their affection does not need much words. her presence worked like magic.
he needed her and she reached there . for him. for her love
. for THEIR
im so happy that Geet was beside him when he opened his eyes. otherwise it would again have been too difficult for the doctors to handle him. because all Maan needed the most was the medicine for his soul. his Mishty
Im glad the Dr understood and has behaved like a generous professional, keeping the patient's wish the top priority .
The urgency with which Maan just managed to request the doctor not to inform Daadima about his gaining consciousness because he immediately understood how Geet must be feeling . he READ
her thoughts even in his semi-conscious condition . thats the power of pure love. The pain he took to speak out to the doctor. Im falling short of words
. the entire scene is so painful but extremely beautiful at the same time. perfectly describing how much both of them care about each other. Geet had
to stay because Maan wanted her to. and Maan knew
Geet is afraid of his family's reaction, and both did what could comfort and sooth the other.
That hand-hold. My goodness. more intense than a hug. Maan wont let his dearest possession go away. he will hold on to it till the very last ounce of strength he has. loved it so much
and that last bit, where Geet tells him to remain silent and he sleeps so peacefully near her. so heart warming so blissful
Thank you so much dear. You are very genorous with your praises.
Precap song is my LOVE. and tell u what . I have so many awesome memories affiliated with this song, exactly last year's last week of June. and here you have the arrangement to refresh and renew them all in my Maaneet style
- I hope I am able to do justice to it then in that case...
Please update soon - Next update on Friday