MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 7 - Page 23

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by mishtiritu


What should I say... U made me cry... 
While Reading whole update I had tears in my eyes...
U depicted geet's emotions so well and maan's as well..
I was so much into the update...
It was as if everything is happeing infront of my eyes...
Aww... I loved the way maan showed his eyes to DR.. and his possessiveness...
Geet again started to think like that but maan read her and gave her the answer needed...
Sachi main labzo ka mohtaaj nahi hai inka pyaar...
I just loved this update sooo much and song as well...

Tujh se shuru meri har dua hai
Tujh pe khatam meri har aarzu hai...

Tujhe zindagi dene mein khud meet jau
Tu jo nahi to mein bhi na jee pau...

Keh na sakungi tumse mere dil ka haal
Darti hu khone se tumhe zindagi ho jaaye fir betaal...

Labzo ki kami kabhi mehsus nahi huyi
Dil ki baat tum tak aankhon ne pohcha di...

Kaise roku mein khud ko jo namumkin hai
Dil ye mera ab bas main mere nahi hai...

Ibadat hai tu meri bandagi hai tu
Meri Dhadkte dil ki saasein hai tu...
 
Thanks Rituja...loved the poem...you have this way of putting so many emotions in just few words...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by heytal


Thanks a lot for updating so soon yaar
Phew! some relief😛
Thank God Maan is safe and conscious too😊

So many moments so perfectly weaved in Geet totally drained and lost
Meera trying her best so that Maaneet meet
Dr Rastogi thoughtfully handling the situation
and finally Maaneet meet and How😊

As I mentioned in the last update too Meera has handled the whole situation so well inspite of her age today she was the sole reason who brought Maaneet together ofcourse with the Dr's help😳

Yes dear. Meera has seen so much...not to forget she is a mother. She is quite mature and will have very important role throughout this FF. That is why I took time with her story earlier. I know some readers got bored with Maan-Meera bonding but for me it was very important to etch out to give weightage to future chapters.


Maaneet meeting was so heart felt and emotional reminded me of the actual hospital scene in the show
The madness to meet Her Maan, the assuarance that he is safe, and the love which couldn't be denied now or ever!!!!
 
Yes it was so poignant. I really wished they did not bring Yash at that time but maybe a little later...but well. This FF is inspired and dedciated to our serial so I have taken liberty of lifting many scenarios from the actual series. I am glad you are liking it.
 
 
Dr Rastogi silently watching the two people struggling to voice out their love 
One fighting his life for his love and another who can sacrifice her life for her love

Oh My!!!! The possessive Maan😳
even in his semi conscious state detests the fact that somebody else is addressing his Geet as Meeshti

 

How can he allow that...


I am so relieved that Maan is all fine and Geet to accepted her feelings though not totally but still 
They are together thats important😊

Yeah I know now NT will play a prominent part but all I wanted was that until Maan is all fine she doesn't create any problems between Maaneet. 
Ab Maan theek hain toh woh sab sambhaal hi lega, hain na😳
 
let's see...Maan's family is going to be important now so stay tuned.

Waiting for Dadimaa's reaction on discovering the identity of Maa's Meeshti😃


Fabulous update Ritzy
Very well written yaar 
it all seemed playing in front of my eyes
Thanks again
🤗
Thank you Heytal for such kind words and detailed feedback...muaah...
Posted: 10 years ago
this update is really  great
as i m back to reading after ages
so feel litte more emotional
as last few update are just high on emotions.



the way you how their 
way of telling
his/hr heart out 
and the situation
in which they did this is just superb


and 
yyou knoww
the amount of happines i feel
during  GHSP tims
when maaan spread his hand and geet's crash landing
that is just equal to this time
after their meeting in hospital



Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Bul3


one of my most favorite song..so touching and so so inspiring!..you used it perfectly and the update was great. I am glad the doctor understood and that Maan is awake..the power of love is the strongest kind..loved how finally Geet understood that she cannot run away as these feelings are way too pure and way too strong to be defeated..a little worried about the family especially Dadima's reaction becoz you have given hints like there would be problems and related to her opinion..Maan's past has to do something with these opinions and fear if I may guess..well lets see what have you planned!..loving it so far..! thank you😊
Thank you dear...daadima wills ahre Maan's past very soon and yes her reaction will be based on her and Maan's past experiences...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sonu4ever


Beautiful part
Bless Dr Rastogui lol. He just took the right decisions at right moments.
Im glad meera introduced geet as mishty to the doc and she handled the situation very well.
Geet's melancholic cries were heart wrenching.
Woah maan regained his concious back. :s
Maan understanding geet's unspoken words was brilliant. He strained his voice to convince geet.
Geet showering love on him was lovely.
Cant wait for more. :D
 
Thanks Sonu...
 
Dr Rastogi and Meera are the anchors of thier love story for now...I am glad you liked it
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by kawaii_geet


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ahh...what can i say now?
i was anyways a little emotional right now..and this update just made me cry actually...
just tooo beautiful... one of the longest and the most beautiful updates of WS

but out of the whole thing..what took away my heart were her calls to him.. "maan.."
 
Thank you so much Ash...u don't know how much this means to me. I had this whole scene in my head where she will cry out his name holding just his fingers. Actually I had personal scenario where my own son was covered with wires. I can never forget that moment when I saw him and I even have a pic. His both legs, hands, chest and stomach has sensors coming out of it. His nose had a wire as well so only place i could hold him was his fingers. So kind of mish mash of personal and the serial scenario but I am glad that it touched the readers somewhere.

those four lettered words from her lips were enough to bring him back from hell...
its so beautiful na..chahe kitni dawa kaam na kare bus wo ek awaz mein tini taakat hoti hain ke wo aapko maut ke muh se bhi wapais la sakta hain...

i really don't have words to say...
her acceptance of her feelings and that they cant hide from each other anymore.
sometimes i wonder if such a love really exists... its like a dream for us.. a distant dream
and we cant even trust anyone...
love always exists Ash. i pray to God that such dramatic events don't happen in life to express this love but it sure does exist.  One just need to express and realise...

this update was very emotional for me i just wanted to read on and on and on...
the way she called out to him...so many feelings drowned in those four lettered word...
the most beautiful thing in this whole world.
still very very emotional...dunno why
but this was the best updt of WS
continue super soon di

 
 
Thank you Ash...I am so happy you liked it so much...
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
beautifully written
liked it
continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago



wonderful...

speechless...

kuch kehne ke liye nahin reh gaya...

words tab zaroori hota hain when u can express in words but here no words are needed...

thanx for pm...


Posted: 10 years ago
Marvelous update!👏
U rock!
It feels good to have your comments read and replied to.
And a question:U seem to know a lot about Odisha...how's that?
Edited by Dia_Kapoor - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
DI IT JUST AMAZING PART MAAN IS ALRIGHT NOW  N DR. RASTOGI SO NICE THANK GOD HE IS ALLOW HER TO MEET MAAN OR ELSE PATA NAI KYA HOTA HOPE JALDI SE SB TIC HO N I CAN SEE MAANEET TOGETHER FOREVER 
NICE PART DI REALLY EMOTINALFULL AGAIN THANKS FOR UPDATE AND PM 

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