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MANVEER OS ~~~ISHQ WALA LOVE~~~

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
ishq wala love

helaaa manverians...
i m kmhian abhiya arjuhi dek swaron kriyansh fan n also manveer fan i have one idea den i write manveer os hope u all like it...



married night
one girl sit on the dreesing tale
one girl come n hug her

arohi:jiji

manyata:why cry bacha??

arohi:ap bhag jao jiji please bhag jao ap yaha se

manyata:WHAT ARE YOU SAYING??

arohi:ap apni puri zindagi iske sath kaise bitaogi ap isse nai uday se pyar karti han wo apka intezar kar raha han ghar ke kareeb wale mandeer par jao
[how u spend ur whole life wid this guy u love uday n he is waiting for u in mandeer go in mandeer fast]

manyata:lakin mom dad or is gunda kabeer ko koun sambhalega??

arohi:wo sab ap mujh par chor do u go
[i ll manage all]

manyata:ok par kaise jao mai
[okay but how me going]

arohi:i ready everthing is window par maine stair rakhwa di han now dont weast time go..

manyata:kk

manyata hugged her n kissed her forehead

manyata:i missed you so much my little sister
[said emotionaly]

n manyata going




[manyata reached the mandeer uday stand in shervani red n grey sherwani manyata wearing red mahroon sharara wid golden indian work]

[manyata running fastly n hugged him tightly both hugged eachother]

uday:i love you manyata i loved you alot's i knew it u come i knew it..thanks princess

manyata:how u think i m not come idiot i still love u n i can't live widout you dont leave me ever because u leave me so i m die..

uday:shut up dont say this word again dont say n i want you...you say this word again den i will kill my self

manyata:hey mr. attitude u also dont say this word warna?LOL

[he hold her waist n pull towards him]

uday:warna..??WinkWink
[wid smirk n winks]

manyata:war..warna...kuch...kuch nai.
[she said broken voice n little worries n bit a crying]

uday:heya princess why u crying??
[he worried why he crying]

manyata:uday ager kisi ne hume alag kardiya tu??

uday:holaa princess dont worry ur prince is there so dont worry darling chalo ab shadi(wedding) bhi karlo ya sari zindagi yahi khare khare larti rahogi mujhse??

den both start wedding n complete
[sorry guys i dont know about indian wddings]

in uday house

in room

manyata stand towards the window uday come n back hug her tigtly...

uday:kiya hua princess??

manyata:i was thinking dad ne mujhe married ke liya force kiya tha mom ne nai so how i m lying wid my mom n waha kiya horaha hoga  ab??

uday:princess just chill alll is set u mom know all baat karna chahugi apni mom se??

manyata:wat really han please karao na meri baat

[uday dialed the arohi number..arohi picked the call]

arohi:helo jiju how are you where is jiji
[uday speacker on his mobile]

manyata:hello bacha how you all is fine in home??

arohi:yes jiji dont worry all is fine but dad is fully red n use kabeer ko dkehne jaisa tha lol...
[he laughing alotLOLLOL]

manyata:where is mom??

arohi:yahi han wait karati ho baat

[komal come in talk too manyata]

manyata:mom how's you i m sorry

komal:pari dont say sorry apne jo kiya sahi kiya apko uday se acha jevan sathi n love karne wala mill hi nai sakta tha i proud of you bacha..SmileSmile
[she feel proud on her decision]

manyata:thanks maa how's my dad??
[said bit a crying]

komal:he is fine u dont worry all is fine soon u enjoy ur special night bye..

manyata:bye mom
[feel shy]



[now this time uday smirk n pic her on his strong arms n took her on the bed he fall her n lying to her next start removing her pallu n chooli jwllery n dupata]

[kissed her ears neck his hand around her bare waist he carresing her waist n kissing on her neck n give a love bites on neck she is enjoy all is magical touch]

[uday kissed her checks n lips kissed he kissed her lower lips n bite her uper lips both tongue are met n both sucked eachother lips uday moved to down to her neck unhook her bra n moved down to her harden n nipples he bite her nipples her harden n breast most beautiful her body colour is white her white body invite n ask too kissed]

[after 3 hours uday still kissing her manyata also kissed his body both clothes lying on the floor n both hugged eachother n under comforter both sleep on eachother arms n convo]


manyata:uday i love you so much..

uday:i love you too my janu.


manyata:u r my whole world

uday:u r my life best gift

manyata:mr.apka hogaya ab??

uday:nai jee abhi hume or bhi chaya..

manyata:i m tired..now sleeping time it's already 6 o clock

uday:hmm sleep well sweet heart...

both kissed eachother lips n huged eachother n sleep eachother arms..forever

THE END


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Edited by Janny.. - 22 June 2013 at 6:47pm

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
omg
janny
another os
and
on maanveer
gr8 yaar
cuming to the os
it was so sweet and nyc
really very nyc work
u r a gud writer
gr8 work
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Superb os re
Loved it Clap
Keep writing Smile
-edited-
I am being forced to write more .. LOL *complains to ali LOL *
Ok soo to be honest.. i never followed DEK forum .. i just read this os becayse you wrote it and as i was familiar with the characters of the story ..
So now .. i guess i am going to read more manveer stories ..thanks to you re .. u made me like them Smile
Coming to the os ..
It was very well written re
Would to read more from you
Good going
:)


Edited by arpita_wadhwa - 22 June 2013 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
LOVE IT 
I WISH I HAD A SISTER JUST LIKE AROHI
AND UDAY AND MANAYTA SEE WAS AWESOME 
LOVE IT
AND THEIR ROMANCE WAS HOOOT
PLZ WRITE MORE ABT MANVEER
WAITING FOR IT

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Awesome yaar!
It was superb!
Loved it to the core!
Manyata and sister's bonding is really nice.
Her sister is tooo sweet!
Manveer got married hidingly wow!
Manveer's fight was sweet!
It was well written!
Do write more os!

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
wow really loved this os it was superb loved how komal and arohi helped manyata  run away so sweet and hayeee manveer scene were just awesome in fact i was kinda blushing really good u should write more os thank u so much for this os 

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