Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

Akdha ff: ur only mine jodha chap-17 pg 87 (2nd Feb'14) (Page 52)

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Ur only mine Jodha chapter 12:

Hamida and Jodha with all the soldiers started for the market. They reached there. They were surveying the whole market. They were unknown to the fact that someone was following them. Jodha looked around the jewellery store. How amazing it was! The cut of each necklace. One was greater then the other. Jodha decided to stay back at the jewellery store as she was looking around for them. Hamida went to the clothing section.

On the other hand Jalal was continuously walking from onesideti another. He felt guilty! He talked so rudely with Jodha. He shouldn't have done this. Especially when he was trying to win over her heart. He decided that he should go up to Jodha and say sorry. He went to Jodha's chambers. "Jodha begum kaha hai?? Where is she??" He asked a bandhi. "She went to the market with Mallika e Azam. She would be back within an hour or two." Jalal nodded. Y didnt Jodha tell me that she was going to the market??? How can she leave without my permission? That to when she is pregnant. This is a great opportunity for my Enemies to harm my baby and Jodha begum. I have to go. Jalal thought to himself. Jalal rode himself to the market.

   The guard announced:

       "Ba Adab. Ba mulaiza.
    Hoshiyaar. Shehensha E Hind
     Jallalludin Mohammad Padar rahe hai.."

It seemed like everyone froze in their position. Why did the Shehensha come to the market?? He never does?? Is he here to punish anyone? Hamida Bano with her companions met Jalal. "Jalal aap Yaha??" "Ammi Jodha Begum kaha hai??" "Wo gehne dekh rahi hai Jalal. Kyu kya hua??" "Ammi Jaan how can u be so careless?? U left Jodha alone there. Don't u know she is my Begum?? Don't I know that she is pregnant?? My enemies would find this situation as their good luck." "Jalal, there are some guards with Jodha. You don't have to overreact." Here Jalal and Hamida opened up a conversation whether Jodha was safe or not, but they actually forgot about Jodha.. Who was actually in danger.
The jewellery section was a little far away from the other sections.

Jodha was looking through the jewelleries when suddenly she heard a sound rather a scream! She turned around and found her guards laying dead. Jodha froze. She saw blood all around them and tears weld up her eyes. She turned to look at the shop keeper, who was also laying dead. Blood was dripping out of the shop keepers body. Suddenly she felt a cold and rough hand touch her waist. She let out a shrill scream. The scream could be heard round the market.

Jalal and Hamida were almost in the verge of a heated up argument when Jalal heard Jodha scream. "Dekha! Hum Jante the! Ya Allah!" Jalal rushed to there.

Jodha turned to see who it was. The man was wearing a mask round his face. Only his eyes were shown. "I know these eyes. They look so familiar." She thought to herself. She tried to move away but the man was holding her tight. "U n I have unite Jodha. Tum sirf Meri ho! I love u so much. Lekin Uske liye iss bacche ko marna hoga.." Jodha shook her head. She tried to fight herself out of it but the man was true strong. Just when he was about to hit Jodha's tummy he heard the loudest roar. It was no one other than Jalal. Jalal's eyes fell upon Jodha's waist where the man's hands were. This was enough to trigger Jalal's temper. Jalal jumped on the man "Gustakh! Tumahara himmat kaise hua ke Tum Humari begum ko chuye?? How dare u?? Tum humare begum se pyaar karte ho?? Aise gustakhi ki kaise tumbe?? Humare bacche ko maroge. Aaj to hum Aapka sir Kalam KARDENGE." Jalal was about to hit The man when Jodha spoke in a weak voice "Shehensha.." Jodha went blank and lost her consciousness.Jalal immediately left the man and ran to catch Jodha. He caught Jodha before she could hit the ground. The man found this as a good opportunity to save his life. He ran from there. Jalal ordered the guards to catch the man alive! Jalal's attention immediately changed to Jodha.

Yaar mera mera.. aa..

Mera yaar yaar mujh mein
Mera pyaar pyaar tujh mein

Mujhse kho gaye haan
Mujhse kho gaye ho tum..
Teri yaadon mein haan
Teri yaadon mein main gum..
Hanste.. mujhpe din mere..
Raatein hi hain jo karti hain chugliyaan

Mera yaar yaar mujh mein
Mera pyaar pyaar tujh mein

O yaara tere naal ankhiyaan
Lagiyaan ki aisiyaan
Saaijiyaan muhobbataan pakiyaan ki mere peechhe
Ishq payaan
Hai dil mera thirak gaya (Yaara..) (Chugliyaa)

Precap: Jodha regains her consciousness.

This part was especially for Nancy dear!

Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 05 March 2014 at 3:21am

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Tahni darling this was a superb update!!Heart I was waiting to read all day and you didn't disappoint!Hug I love the cover for the story by the way... You are BRILLIANT!!!ClapClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
loved it so much...nice part.

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
thanks..loved it..brilliant...please update sooon
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so awesum loved it i'm sure it was dat stupid prince who doesn't like jalal ugh dummy 

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finally tahni we got an amazing update of this superb ff. Plzzz continue soon and pm me when u

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Tahni dear superb... Wondeful update...
Star   Star
U r really fabulous writter... I m luving it more...

Thanx for updating
Plz continue it soon na... Update next part fast plz

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awesome dear...
loved it...

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