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OS~ Never let You Go~ (Page 4)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Radsy.
I think...this beats any and every OS of yours that I've read ab tak.
Like I said yesterday, it's perfect. <3
I saw both KiSha and ViChi here...in parts.
I love Hurt/Comfort as a genre, do you know?
I love it coz it not only gives you pain...but also the balm to heal it.
And oh, this was beautiful!
The pain, the letting go, the wanting to hold back, the missing and finally the coming back.
Coming back, to never ever let go again.
I love pieces like this!
And this is definitely one of my favourites. 
The end, especially, the description, was so brilliant!
The various emotions were so beautifully captured..and typed out. <3
And one more thing, the fact that the romance was subtle...made it even better.
Just loved this, Radsy! <3
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
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radsy i will be back ^_^
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NonComposMentis

Radsy.
KiddoHug
I think...this beats any and every OS of yours that I've read ab tak.
Like I said yesterday, it's perfect. <3
OMG!!! THATS THE BEST COMPLIMENT EVER!!!!Heart
I saw both KiSha and ViChi here...in parts.
I love Hurt/Comfort as a genre, do you know?
Yup I doBig smile
I love it coz it not only gives you pain...but also the balm to heal it.
And oh, this was beautiful!
awww. . .kidddooo
The pain, the letting go, the wanting to hold back, the missing and finally the coming back.
Coming back, to never ever let go again.
u summarized it all.  .in 1 sentence.  . .beautifullyBig smile
I love pieces like this!
And this is definitely one of my favourites. 
The end, especially, the description, was so brilliant!
The various emotions were so beautifully captured..and typed out. <3
And one more thing, the fact that the romance was subtle...made it even better.
Just loved this, Radsy! <3
Hug
Mugs.
awww, . . .Kidddooo. .
U made my day.  .
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Dude,u always come with a fresh and unique idea of writing..I always like u'r title names whether posts or one shots..And its amazing name above "Never let u go"..U just succeeded to conveyed u'r message..Yes,these things happen in any relation..So i just imagined my two couples..First is my TanHa as swaron..I am just blind admirer of TanHa..And second one KisHa..I always noticed that both couples have little bit similarties..So,it will be great to imagined in u'r one shot..

Now moving on to OS,Thats was beautifully written..The way u manage to write Both the POV's of girl and a boy is just amazing...Well its not easy task to played emotion in a write ups..But u done that so so perfectly..Loved the way boy was feeling and he had a strong faith in his love..She will come back..

Now in the girl side,i also love to read all emotion,certain upliftment of thoughts in her mind and in her heart..I really think girls always think very deeply instead of Boys..Not sure but i feel this..

And last loved the way u bring both together and their hug was really needed and so sweet..And then u ended with happy node.."Now that u are back and i will never let u go"..Finally boy's faith on his love won..But dude,its like incomplete end..

Anyways,i just loved it..and i really appreciate u'r work..Great going..Keep it up..
And yes,Thanx for pm..I am sorry i am late here..

Prateek

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Woah!!
Mind blowing!!
Reading your story involuntarily reminded me of Asad-Zoya, the couple I've grown attracted to in the last two months... though I don't watch that serial regularly, I coukd not stop myself from relating this story with them.
You always do this ro me... Whenever I read your work my heart warms up.
Be it anything, you never fail to touch my heart with your words.
Have missed you so badly didu. I hope I'll never have to leave your company again :'(

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by keshiya

Woah!!
Mind blowing!!
Reading your story involuntarily reminded me of Asad-Zoya, the couple I've grown attracted to in the last two months... though I don't watch that serial regularly, I coukd not stop myself from relating this story with them.
You always do this ro me... Whenever I read your work my heart warms up.
Be it anything, you never fail to touch my heart with your words.
Have missed you so badly didu. I hope I'll never have to leave your company again :'(


Dhwan meri cutu is back. ..
didu misssed u sooo much my bacha Hug   Hug
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Dude,u always come with a fresh and unique idea of writing..I always like u'r title names whether posts or one shots..And its amazing name above "Never let u go"..U just succeeded to conveyed u'r message..Yes,these things happen in any relation..So i just imagined my two couples..First is my TanHa as swaron..I am just blind admirer of TanHa..And second one KisHa..I always noticed that both couples have little bit similarties..So,it will be great to imagined in u'r one shot..
ya SwaRon is something even I could imagine while writing this piece .. .
n ya me too talking about TanHa

Now moving on to OS,Thats was beautifully written..The way u manage to write Both the POV's of girl and a boy is just amazing...Well its not easy task to played emotion in a write ups..But u done that so so perfectly..Loved the way boy was feeling and he had a strong faith in his love..She will come back..
awww . .I m so glad u do

Now in the girl side,i also love to read all emotion,certain upliftment of thoughts in her mind and in her heart..I really think girls always think very deeply instead of Boys..Not sure but i feel this..
ummm.  .cant really say

And last loved the way u bring both together and their hug was really needed and so sweet..And then u ended with happy node.."Now that u are back and i will never let u go"..Finally boy's faith on his love won..But dude,its like incomplete end..
is it? I dont think soLOLLOL

Anyways,i just loved it..and i really appreciate u'r work..Great going..Keep it up..
thankiesBig smile
And yes,Thanx for pm..I am sorry i am late here..
anytymBig smile

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sankalp_prapti


Just one song comes to my mind which has grown on me lately...


I have died everyday waiting for you Darlin' don't be afraid I have loved you for a Thousand years I'll love you for a Thousand more...
A thousand years by Christina Perri?
well part of the OS is inspired by a song .. but not the one u mentioned

Every bit of what you wrote tells the echos of what their heart feels. Brilliant write upClap.StarStar
U always leave me Blushing SiaTongueEmbarrassed
Actually can there be a little more to this.. cause its just not enough for me Wink 
u dirty mindTongueWink
Good work pal... Write more please. *puppy face*
awww. .  . .

Regards
Sia

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