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OS~ Never let You Go~

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
hola buddiesBig smile
m back with yet another OS
n whats more interesting is the fact. .. that it just crossed my mind randomly.  ..
n the flow just went on. . .
I m not gonna specify the couple.  . .
coz welll. ..
I guess these things happen in any relation. ..
there are highs as well as lows in life. . . .
n the OS below. . . .
is just to convey a message.  . .
that no matter what we should never lose hope n Faith. . .
feel free to imagine any couple u like
love
RadsBig smile



Edited by -Serendipity- - 22 June 2013 at 1:48pm

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
 Never Let You Go. . .  .
The dreadful day had finally come.  . .
She was moving.  ..  .away from him . ...
she'd already said her  last goodbye.  ..
n turned her head away from him. .. .
fighting back the tears that threatened to flow anytime soon
no she couldn't afford to weaken now. . ..
it was time to move on. . .
n yet she couldn't help but give a last glance at him. . . .
He stood in that very place frozen . . ..
his eyes distant.  . ..
the pain now etched on his face was because of her.  ..
she realized she shouldn't have. . ...
looked back. . .  .
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Time had frozen for him. .  .
right at this very moment. . ..
all he really wanted was to somehow get her back.  ...
If only. ... ..
Just once turn back please.  ..
he silently prayed.  . .
n the 1st thing he saw when he opened his eyes  . .
was her.  .. .
she had turned back.  ..  .
he could see it in her eyes.  ..
that inner turmoil. . . .
that indecision.  ..
it wasn't easy for her too. .  . .
n yet after a few minutes of contemplation
he could see that resolve.  . .
yes the decision was made.  .. .
n that day he knew. .  . .
he'd lost her.  ..
because that 's what he'd always admired about her. . .
her determination.  . .
she was a self made woman.  ...
someone who would stand on  her grounds till the very end. .  ..
Oh he so wished . . . .
that these parallel roads bisect again one day. .  .
but then. . . he had faith.  ..
in God.  ...
in her. .  .
in himself. . .
n most importantly THEM!!!
Come Back when You Can. ..  . . .
this one line was the only thing swirling in his mind. . . .
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She'd spent sleepless nights ever since that day.  . .
interestingly enough. . . .
it was her own decision. . . .
to abandon the street.  . .
that once blossomed with roses. . .
what the 2 of them hadn't realized back then was the fact.  .
that a rose along with its beauty.  ..
also has thorns .. .
n now in that bed of roses she 'd only started seeing thorns. . . .
n yet. . .
as she sat by the window. . ..
all she could remember was that pain in his eyes. . .
that fear of losing her forever. . .
the man who was strong enough to deal with anything.  ..  .
that fearless. . .
determined n an ever optimist , suddenly seemed so fragile ... .
so broken.  . ..
so. .. .. . ..  ..
n what was worst?
it was because of her. . ...
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She had tried her level best. ..  .
to let him go. . . ..
to move on in life.  . .
but most nights she ended up thinking of ways
to atleast know his whereabouts . .. .
she thought of calling up his friends
or better . .. .calling him. . ..
but no. .  ..that would do no good . ..
she wasn't a coward. .  .
if she had to get back to him.  . . .
it would be face to face. .  ..
like their "breakup"
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As she stood in front of his house. .  .
memories swam in her head .  .
good ones .  ..
bad ones
n the worst . . ..
she suddenly realized what was that one thing that was eating her up all these days. . .
it was the fact . . .
that everything around her had reminded her of him. . .
of them ... .
but somehow their last encounter wasn't letting her muster courage . . .
it was silly . . .
here she was standing at his door step. . .
n yet was not able to knock his door. ..
she was about to leave when the door suddenly opened. . .
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She could read a lot of expressions at once on his face. . .
the initial shock. . .
then realization suddenly striking him. .  ..
the understanding. . ..
& finally a warm slow yet steady smile.  ..
n at that moment all she could think was .. ..
 to hug him tightly. .. .
bury her face in his chest ..
where it rightly belonged. . ..
they've never really had a need to express their feelings in words .. .
n today was no exception. . .
as they finally broke away. . .
the only words that came out of his mouth were. .
"Now that you're back. ..
I'll never Let You Go. . "





Edited by -Serendipity- - 23 June 2013 at 2:07pm

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Woah! an open ended piece.. vr free to choose any couple -dats a unique idea Rads!!
Beautifullyy writtn... enjoyd readngg...
Very apt title! 10/10 frm my syd!
Gr8 job
Thnks fr da pm...

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by samratrocks

Woah! an open ended piece.. vr free to choose any couple -dats a unique idea Rads!! naaa.  ..Inspiration Nidha!!!
Beautifullyy writtn... enjoyd readngg...m glad u didBig smile
Very apt title! 10/10 frm my syd!
aww ..  .I m humbled
Gr8 job
Thnks fr da pm...
can I ask u a ques?
which couple did u imagine?
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Res Tongue

Unres

Radzz Clap Clap

This was simply mindblowing Clap

Beautifully written Thumbs Up

I loovvee ur writing style Embarrassed

Feelings wer beautifully portrayed Clap

Totally loovveedd ittt Smile


Edited by aishu3003 - 23 June 2013 at 6:36am

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Awesome OS Clap

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Nice one radz simply awesome
Playing with words is soo simple for u ohh
Loved it<33333
Title and the end simply fab
And as always imagined kisha not bcoz I lov them but they suited as kd will always do that now u r back will never let u go ..
Awesime

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Woow diz was beautiful Smile d last line d perfect line to end d OS."Never let you go" fab jzt fab. Thumbs Up

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