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Ab main apne muh se apne editor ki kya taareef karoon?
Shirley..yeh compliment tha ki comment?? 😡😆
This content was originally posted by: sshirley[
Ab main apne muh se apne editor ki kya taareef karoon?
Congrats on page 100 , now for the review sorry cant give a long one , basically time a major constraint , but found the chapter very well written , specially initially when Ashu realises that he is not doing the right thing with mallika when all he can think of is Nidhi, then his restlessness, unwillingness to acknowledge , going that he' ll get over his infatuation , beautifully brought out , though mallika gave in very easily , probably would have done the same , she knew he didn't love her there was no spark , a sensible educated wan would walk away which mallika , you can't fight for something which was never yours , you brought it out so well without lowering her dignity as they did in the serial thank you my dear , waiting to see how you progress from here
This content was originally posted by: aryanppNice update!!!! Somehow did not like the way ashu was pleading or rather begging with mallika though may be required for the story line... & nidhi is completely unaware of the happenings... so curious about how the story will continue with ashu feeling guilty & his acceptance about his love to nidhi with out feeling guilty about mallika... waiting...
This content was originally posted by: sshirley
Thanks a lot.Well, Ashu was pleading because he has kind of gone crazy fighting his attraction/infatuation/love for Nidhi. His mind is going only on one track - that what he feels for Nidhi is wrong and disgusting, so he is hell bent on fighting it with all he has in him - he wants to marry mallika becoz he think that will help him towards that end..@bold - yeah my challenge as a writer is just beginning...
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